if you see a peron watching a leaf or something carefullyor saying something by herself in the street or thinking about something in the rain, are you surprised? maybe you think sshe is mad. maybe you think she is so special. ok, i can tell you that person is me.
my name is li xucong. but one friend named me “sheng cong” and “tian shang yi gen cong” that’s different form others. so my friends think of me as a unique person. what do you think of me? listen to my next ideas.
i like watching things carefully. i love everything. i often say “ oh, the flower is very beautiful” “ that tree is very unique” “this lesson is very interesting” i always say “the difficulty is also interesting. i am li xucong. i’m not scared of it. i love it .” i often think about many things. that makes me have my own idea. then i start to have my dream. so i think the idea is like the sun.it can light my dream. with the “sun”, my dream and my life will go well.
of course! i have many friends. we have the same ambition. we often encourage and help each other. we can improve each other. i think my friends are very important. they will be good for my future like water.
i always smile. it can make people happy and have a good day. i think smiling is as important as air for me. because air is here and there. and i think people should smile every time and everywhere. also, i’d love to bring happiness to everyone.
my friends say i am “ yi gen cong”--- a plant. yes. i’ve already have the sun, air and water. now i’m blossoming.
the first flower is my confidence. every morning i tell myself: li xucong, go! go! go! you will be the best. don’t relax!” when i lose, i read that sentence: the man who wins is the man who thinks he can!” then i have confidence to do everything.
do you know? my classmates chose me as a leader in my class. that’s the other flower. i love my class. that’s the other flower. i love my class. i’m kind to everyone. i often encourage them to work hard. i know it isn’t easy to be a good leader. but i can work hard, i will make teachers and students tell me : good work!”
ok, this is about me. do you like this plant?
are my flowers beautiful?
thank you!
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i am unique （标题居中）
if you see a peron watching a leaf or something carefullyor（carefully or ）saying something by （to）herself in the street or thinking about something in the rain, are you surprised? maybe you think s（thinks)she is mad. maybe you think(or) she is so special. ok, i can(i'll) tell you that person is me.
my name is li xucong. but one friend named me “sheng cong” and “tian shang yi gen cong” that’s different form(from) others. so my friends think of me as (think of 指”想起“此处改为think i am)a unique person. what do you think of me? listen to my next ideas.(改为description"描述') i like watching things carefully. i love everything. i often say “ oh, the flower is very beautiful” “ that tree is very unique” “this lesson is very interesting” i always say “the difficulty is also interesting. i am li xucong. i’m not scared of it. i love it .” i often think about many things. that makes me have my own idea(ideas). then i start to have my dream. so i think the idea is like the sun.it can light (light up)my dream. with the “sun”, my dream and my life will go well.
of course! i have many friends. we have the same ambition. we often encourage and help each other. we can improve each other(too). i think my friends are very important. they will be good for my future like water.
i always smile. it can make people happy and have a good day. i think smiling is as important as air for me. because air is here and there. and i think people should smile every time and everywhere. also, i’d love to bring happiness to everyone.
my friends say i am “ yi gen cong”--- a plant. yes. i’ve already have the sun, air and water. now i’m blossoming.
the first flower is my confidence. every morning i tell myself: li xucong, go! go! go! you will be the best. don’t relax!” when i lose, i read that sentence: the man who wins is the man who thinks he can!” then i have confidence to do everything.
do you know? my classmates chose me as a leader in my class. that’s the other flower. i love my class.(多一句，去掉） that’s the other flower. i love my class. i’m kind to everyone. i often encourage them to work hard. i know it isn’t easy to be a good leader. but i can work hard, i will make teachers and students tell me : good work!”（“done well”做得好！）ok, this is（that's all）about me. do you like this plant?
are my flowers beautiful?
thank you!
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i am unique
if you see a peron watching a leaf or something carefully or saying something to herself in the street or thinking about something in the rain, are you surprised? maybe you thinks she is mad or she is so special. ok, i'll tell you that person is me.
my name is li xucong. but one friend named me “sheng cong” and “tian shang yi gen cong” that’s different from others. so my friends think i am a unique person. what do you think of me? listen to my next description .
i like watching things carefully. i love everything. i often say “ oh, the flower is very beautiful” “ that tree is very unique” “this lesson is very interesting” i always say “the difficulty is also interesting. i am li xucong. i’m not scared of it. i love it .” i often think about many things. that makes me have my own ideas. then i start to have my dream. so i think the idea is like the sun.it can light up my dream. with the “sun”, my dream and my life will go well.
of course! i have many friends. we have the same ambition. we often encourage and help each other. we can improve each other too. i think my friends are very important. they will be good for my future like water.
i always smile. it can make people happy and have a good day. i think smiling is as important as air for me. because air is here and there. and i think people should smile every time and everywhere. also, i’d love to bring happiness to everyone.
my friends say i am “ yi gen cong”--- a plant. yes. i’ve already have the sun, air and water. now i’m blossoming.
the first flower is my confidence. every morning i tell myself: li xucong, go! go! go! you will be the best. don’t relax!” when i lose, i read that sentence: the man who wins is the man who thinks he can!” then i have confidence to do everything.
do you know? my classmates chose me as a leader in my class. that’s the other flower. i love my class. i’m kind to everyone. i often encourage them to work hard. i know it isn’t easy to be a good leader. but i can work hard, i will make teachers and students tell me :" done well "
ok, that's all about me. do you like this plant?
are my flowers beautiful?
thank you!
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