总结之总结:全文的观点有待揣摩,作者很明显是不赞成题目的说法,即 Children who grow up in families which are short of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents. 但是作者自己是更偏向穷人家的孩子呢,还是富人家的孩子呢?!根据文章来看,作者是中立,他所看重的是他们所接受的教育。In other words,整篇文章又是一次中立的写法。在雅思考试中,这种写法经常使用,还是非常实用的,大家可以学习一下。此外,文章中有很多好词好句,特别是长句,值得模仿一下
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题目:
Some people think that personal happiness is directly related to economic success. Others argue that happiness depends on pletely other factors.
Discuss both of the views and give your own opinion.
范文:
In recent years, the discussion of whether personal happiness is directly associated to economic success has bee a controversial issue. Notions toward it differ widely from person to person.
Some people believe that happiness is related to economic success because only money can make people’s life more enjoyable. When it es to economic success, the majority of people believe that money means a luxurious life. To begin with, if someone owns great success on economic, that means he can spend more money on whatever he likes and spend more time on his hobbies. 真的不掉线吗??、????????????
Emotionally, money can buy happiness at least to some extent. That is to say, you can buy things that you like in order to fulfill your needs and vanities and this makes you feel happier. You can also enjoy the best education and social welfare. Thirdly, economic success implies high social class and status, which can make people feel happy and respectable. (51ielts.)
Opponents, however, hold the view that happiness does not depend on economic success but pletely other factors. First of all, numerous studies show that happy individuals are successful across multiple life domains, including marriage, ine, work performance and health. The happiness exists not only because economic success makes people happy, but also because positive affect engenders happiness. What’s more, It is
indisputable that there are millions of people who
still have a miserable life and have to fact the dangers of starvation and exposure, but some of them sill lead a happy life because they keep the happy spirit. Last but not least, money can not buy everything, such as friendship, true love and health. You can buy things corporeal, but you can never spend money to ask for more time.
In the final analysis, both sides have sound foundations. However, if asked to make a choice, I will not hesitate to assent to the latter. I firmly believe that happiness is not only related to economic success but also links to other factors which are much more significant.
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