The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2003-2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The curves illustrate the change of criminal rate in burglary, car theft and robbery in Newport city centre from 2003 to 2012.
The change of burglary is drastic. The number of incidents increased sharply from around 3400 in 2003 to about 3800 in 2004. From then on, the inner city welcomed a constant four years drop of burglary which reached the lowest point at about 1100 cases in 2008. The number of burglary were increased again from 2008 to 2009 and then remained generally constant at 1400 from 2009 to 2012.
The rate of car theft, however, didn’t change as dramatically as that of burglary. It stood steady from 2003 to 2005 at approximately 2900 incidents, followed by a sharp decline in the next year and bottoming at 2000 incidents. The period of 2006 to 2012 saw a waving increase, finally peaking at about 2700 incidents in 2012. The trend of robbery differs dramatically. It slightly fluctuated between 500 cases to 900 cases, peaking in 2005 and 2010, while bottoming out in 2003, 2008 and 2011. The overall trend indicates that from 2003 to 2006, burglary was more common than car theft. While after 2007, the situation was turned over. The rate of robbery, however, was always lower than other two crimes.
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Increased sharply =soared/leaped/surged Constant=unaltered
Sharp decline=slump/plunge/plummet
本文采用一图一段的分组方法，主要数据描述规范、清晰，但是要注意对交点的描述
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