【英语】九年级下册英语英语书面表达汇编答题技巧及练习题(含答
案)含解析
一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1．（·陕西师大附中中考模拟）书面表达
“文明是一面镜子，折射出一座城市的品质”。西安作为一座古老的城市在创建国际化大都市的过程中，离不开精神文明建设。在你身边有哪些不文明现象？作为中学生，我们应该从哪些方面做起，为文明城市的建设出一份力？请根据提示词，以“Let’s help Xi’an be better”为题，号召全体中学生共创美好西安。
提示词：spit 吐痰； respect; traffic rules; volunteer; collect the trash; plant trees; clean the streets; an environmental project….
要求：1. 不少于70词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名； 3. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁。 Let’s help Xi’an be better
Our city is making its effort to become an international city. But in our daily life, we find_____________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Let’s help Xi’an be better
Our city is making its effort to become an international city. But in our daily life, we find many bad behaviors around us. For example, many students spit everywhere. Some students don’t follow the traffic rules. Also, some students don’t respect others. These are not right. As students, we should do our part to build a civilized city. We can plant more trees to make our environment better. On weekends, we can help clean the streets and collect the trash in public places. Besides, we can do volunteer work to help others. Let’s work together to make our city more civilized and more beautiful. 【解析】 【详解】
这篇作文要求我们阐述身边的不文明现象，并阐述我们应该如何做，为文明城市的建设出一份力。题目中只给出了话题和一些提示词，具体的写作内容应由学生们自己发挥想象力，进行补充，这是写作中的一个难点。需要注意题目中给出的提示词在文章中必须要用上，可以根据表达需要调整顺序。写作时，学生们可以根据提示词，或联想自己的实际生活，列举身边的不文明现象，然后对创建文化城市提出自己的看法。审题可知，短文应以一般现在时态为主，第一人称来叙述。写作时应注意英语句式结构和汉语是不同的，不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构考虑，写完整的句子，并注意使用适当的句型去表达，变化单词的正确形式。为提升文章档次，在文章中应穿插几个并列句或复合句的结构。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目提示，介绍了自己身边的不文明现象，并对中学生如何创建文明城市贡献自己的力量提出了自己的看法。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，包括了题目中要求的所有信息，且叙述完整，内容充实。文章内容分成两个部分：第一部分列举了一些不文明现象；第二部分介绍了为创建文明城市，中学生应该怎么做。层次清晰，结构合理。其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确。句式结构完整，以简单句为主，叙述清楚、简洁。短文中的一些好的句型和短语有Also, some students don’t respect others、As students, we should do our part to build a civilized city.、We can plant more trees to make our environment better. 、On weekends, we can help clean the streets and collect the trash in public places. 、Besides, we can do volunteer work to help others等。
2．（·江苏中考模拟）写作:
81. 目前，很多高中都开设了特色课程，涵盖烘焙、舞蹈、钢琴、跆拳道、足球等内容，很大程度上增加了校园生活的趣味性，但也有人持不同的看法。 作为即将升入高中的你，对于特色文化课程有何看法？请根据下表的提示完成一篇短文并阐述你的观点。 Views on Special Courses 1. 有助于增加我们的技能； 赞同 2. 有利于培养我们不轻易放弃的精神； 3. …… 1. 过多占用学生时间，耽误学习； 不赞同 2. 需要投入更多的钱，增加家庭压力； 3. …… 你的观点 1. …… 2. …… 要求：
1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2. 必须包括表格中所有相关信息，并适当发挥； 3. 词数：100左右（文章开头已给出，不计入） 4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 Views on Special Courses
Nowadays, many senior school carry on some special courses in their normal subjects. But different people have different ideas.
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【答案】Views on Special Courses
Nowadays, many school carry on some special courses in their normal subjects. But different people have different ideas.
Some students like to attend these classes. First of all, this kind of courses can help us develop our life abilities. What’s more, these courses can help us build the spirit that we shouldn’t give up easily. Also, with the help of these courses, students can broaden their views on the world. However, we can’t reach an agreement. Some students think it takes so much time to have these lessons that they can’t pay attention to their grades. Moreover, we need to pay much money for these classes, and it will surely increase the cost. At last, we don’t have so many teachers on these courses. We can’t get more knowledge without the guide of specific teachers.
Every coin has two sides. I think it’s good to have special courses. It’s not only impove our abilities but also give us much fun. 【解析】 【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如carry on，first of all，like to do，play a game，this kind of，What’s more，give up，with the help of，so much time，pay attention to，on the paper，put up等。而复杂并列结构Moreover, we need to pay much money for these classes, and it will surely increase the cost/ It’s not only improve our abilities but also give us much fun.和Some students think it takes so much time to have these lessons that they can’t pay attention to their grades. / I think it’s good to have special courses.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。 【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
3．（·安徽中考模拟）假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack热爱中国的唐诗宋词。最近他对母亲节你在博客里发的《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）很感兴趣，给你写信想了解该诗，请你根据以下提示给他回信： 1.作者：孟郊 2.时间：唐朝
3.内容：母亲为儿子做衣服 4.主题：母爱的伟大 注意：
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3.词数: 80-100词左右，信件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jack,
I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
【答案】Dear Jack,
I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son. Now I’m writing to tell you something about it.
Song of the parting son is one of the most popular Chinese poems. It was written by Meng Jiao, a famous poet in Tang Dynasty. It describes a common matter in daily life—a mother making clothes for her son, which is familiar to most of us. It mainly shows how great a mother’s love can be. In a word, this short poem has touched many people’s hearts. If you have any other questions about this poem, please tell me.
Yours, Li Hua
【解析】 【分析】
这是一篇材料作文。 【详解】
根据内容可知，这是一篇书信类文章。时态是一般现在时。人称是第一人称和第三人称。 英语作文一般分为三个部分：
第一部分：交代写信目的——朋友Jack热爱中国的唐诗宋词。我将给你介绍《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）这首诗。
第二部分：文章主体部分——具体介绍《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）这首诗。 1.作者：孟郊 2.时间：唐朝
3.内容：母亲为儿子做衣服 4.主题：母爱的伟大
第三部分：信的结语——如果对方有任何问题，可以继续问自己，并期待收到对方的来信。
4．（·海南中考模拟）假如你是王梅，有一个弟弟/妹妹一直是你的梦想，去年你家里添了
一个弟弟/妹妺，你非常开心，请根据内容要点，写一封电子邮件给你的笔友李蕾，和她分享你的快乐，告诉她你的变化。（ brother， sister任选其一） 内容要点: （1）我一直想有个弟弟、妹妹； （2）去年我的梦想实现了，有了弟弟/妺妹；
（3）他/她非常可爱，给我们带来了欢乐，伴我成长，不再孤单； （4）我学会了分享和照顾家人；
（5）请补充几点弟弟、妹妹到来后你的变化。
参考词汇：joy； grow up with sb.伴某人成长;on one’s initiative主动地；help do the housework；study hard； set an example 树立榜样。 写作要求：（1）不得使用真实姓名和校名
（2）包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯； （3）字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚；
（4）词数80左右。（书信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。） Dear Li Lei,
I have been dreaming to have a brother/sister. Last
year,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m lucky and happy to have a brother/ sister. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours, Wang Mei
【答案】Dear Li Le,
I have been dreaming to have a sister. Last year, my dream came true. I was really happy to have such a lovely baby sister.
She brings lots of joy to our family and she grows up with me day by day. Every time I see the big smile on her face, my heart is full of sweet feelings. I will come over to see her and play with her as soon as I get home every day. Now I’m not alone any more.
Above all, I have learned to share and look after others since she was born. I learn to help my mother do the housework, such as washing clothes, cooking and looking after my little sister on my own initiative. In order to set a good example for my little sister, I decide to study hard all the time and go to a famous university one day. Taking care of the baby is a hard job and I learn to be patient from it. I also learn to be kind and friendly to her.
I’m lucky and happy to have a sister. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
[英语]九年级下册英语英语书面表达汇编答题技巧及练习题（含答案）含解析
