【英语】九年级下册英语书面表达及其解题技巧及练习题(含答案)

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一、英语书面表达 1．书面表达

根据以下提示，写一篇介绍我的朋友张阳的短文。基本情况张阳，阳光中学九年级二班学生 1. 喜欢阅读。每周花七个多小时阅读各种类型的书，因为…… 兴趣爱好 2.喜欢观鸟。每年统计两次鸟儿的数量，以研究鸟儿在数量方面的变化。优秀事迹上个月把零花钱捐给了希望工程 1. 希望成为连接家乡到上海路段的高铁总工程师 2. 每个人为保护环境都可以做一些改变。如：…….（举1例）未来梦想要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥； 3）词数：100词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School.

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【答案】Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School. He is in Class 2,Grade 9. He likes reading. He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful. He enjoys watching birds. He counts the number of birds twice a year to study changes in the number of birds. He donated his pocket money to the Hope Project last month. His dream is to be the chief engineer of high-speed railway connecting my hometown to Shanghai. He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment. We mustn’t throw rubbish everywhere. 【解析】【详解】

亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如like reading，more than，all kinds of，spend time doing，enjoy doing，the number of，twice

a year，be the chief engineer of等。而He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful./ He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment.等多种复杂从句结构的综合运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

2．（题文）书面表达

在中学生机器人大赛上，出现了一种专门照顾老人的新型家用智能机器人，它的主要功能有：

1. 定时做饭、洗衣服； 2. 陪老人聊天、下棋、做运动； 3. 处理紧急情况（如：拨打120）

假如你是该机器人的发明者，请你介绍这个产品，并谈谈你的未来设想。要求：1. 意思连贯，语句通顺；

2. 词数80词左右；短文的开头已给出（不计入总词数） 3. 参考词汇： at a fixed time 定时 emergency 紧急情况 ccompany sb. 陪伴某人 Ladies and gentlemen,

Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you. 【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,

Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you. I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. It can cook meals and do some washing at a fixed time. When old people feel alone, it can also accompany them by having a chat, playing chess or doing exercise. What’s more, it can deal with some emergencies. For example, if an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors immediately for help.

I’m sure my new invention will be a great help to the elderly. I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots. 【解析】

亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如thank you for doing，I’d like to do，introduce sb. to，all of you，at home，do some washing，at a fixed time，have a chat，play chess，do exercise，deal with，a great help，in the future等。而Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. / I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.等非谓语动词和复杂从句的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。

点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容

经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

3．亚洲文明对话大会近期在北京召开，你的印度朋友Danny收看了大会相关报道，对华夏文明产生了浓厚的兴趣，来信向你了解中国文化。假设你是李华，请根据以下内容提示用英语写一封回信给Danny。要点历史文化文明行为身边文明内容历史悠久，文化各异；传统节日，多彩习俗（举一例）相互尊重，以礼相待；互学共鉴，共同成长（或自拟）校园文明（自拟一点）注意：1. 词数90词左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。 2. 回复必须包括所以要点，可是当发挥，是短文连贯，通顺。 3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。参考词汇: civilized 文明的 Dear Danny,

I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization（文明） of China, I would like to share something with you.

I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hear from you soon. All the best, Li Hua

【答案】Dear Danny,

I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization（文明） of China, I would like to share something with you.

Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world. China is a country of 56 nationalities. Different nations have difficult cultures. In my country, we have many traditional festivals, such as, the Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Festival and the Dragon Boat Festival . They are also called “three major Chinese holidays” in China. Here are the customs of eating Zongzi and racing dragon-boat on the Dragon Boat Festival.

China is a nation of etiquette （礼仪）. Chinese people can respect, trust and help each other. We all learn and grow together. Everyone in my school should protect the whole public environment. Climbing the trees, picking the flowers and throwing garbage at random are not

allowed there.

I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hearing from you soon. All the best.

Li Hua

【解析】【分析】

本文要求给你的印度朋友Danny写一篇关于华夏文明的回信。【详解】

文章需要介绍下中国的文化。表格中列举了三个要点，写作时注意不要漏写。平时注意多多积累句型、短语。细心检查避免疏漏。以图表展示的作文要以“读”为主，首先要认真读懂图表中的要求，对所给信息加以分析、推断、筛选、概括，去粗取精；在写作时目的要明确，要注意内容的准确性和严肃性。【点睛】

写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系，上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。如but, so, then等。可以适当使用高分句子。本篇文章写的好的句子有：Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world．中华文明是世界上最古老、最悠久的文明之一。China is a nation of etiquette（礼仪），中国是一个礼仪之邦。

4．书面表达

初中毕业在即, 回顾三年的学习生活, 你一定有成功的体验, 如一次考试, 一次比赛, 一次表演......

请你以Believe Myself, and I Will Win为题写一篇演讲稿。提示：（1）What was the event? （2）How did you make it? （3）What’s your feeling?

要求：（1）发言稿中须包括所有提示内容, 可适当发挥。（2）发言稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。（3）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数）。 Believe Myself, and I Will Win Hello,

everyone!___________________________________________________________________________

Thank you for your listening. 【答案】Believe Myself, and I will win

Hello, everyone! As an old saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way. There always are difficulties in our life and we have to face them.

When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English. I just couldn’t understand it. I even wanted to give it up. Then my parents told me that where there is a will, there is a way. They also told me that I should be confident. My English teacher encouraged me

to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it. I had the confidence again. I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult. I made great progress. My parents and teachers were happy for me. I felt pleased and proud for myself, too.

To be confident means I should believe myself. Believe myself, there are hopes in my life. In the future, I won't be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I'm sure that nothing can beat me and I will win! Believe myself, a beautiful future is waiting for me. Thank you for your listening. 【解析】【详解】

这篇作文要求我们以Believe Myself and I will win为题，写一篇演讲稿。题目中用问题的形式给出了提示，审题可知，文章应包括以下内容：首先叙述你生活中遇到的一件困难的事；然后介绍你是如何克服了这个困难，最后取得成功的；最后说一下你自己的感受。写作时学生们应根据这几个内容提要，发挥自己的想象力，将这些内容补充完整，用正确的英语表达出来。短文应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应注意：首先要保证发言稿中包括了所有提示的内容，不能遗漏要点，可以根据表达需要适当发挥，但要与上下文意衔接起来。其次要注意英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能按照汉语思维，逐词翻译。应从句子的整体结构出发，选择适当句型、短语、词汇进行表达。句式结构可以简单句为主，穿插并列句或复合句。为提升文章档次，应注意衔接词以及高级句式或复杂结构的使用。【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，写了一篇演讲稿。文章有以下几个优点：首先短文内容完整，包括了题目中要求的所有内容，没有遗漏要点。各部分内容安排合理，层次清晰。短文主要分成三段，每一段主题都很明确，叙述详细、清楚。其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，短文主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时，动词形式变化准确，尤其注意了不规则动词的过去式形式，语法规范，用词准确。文章中句式变化丰富，有简单句、并列句、复合句，长短句结合，增强了文章的表现力。短文中使用了较丰富的句型，如When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English.、My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it.、I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult、In the future, I won't be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I'm sure that nothing can beat me and I will win!等等。

5．书面表达

假如你是李华，你们学校正在进行课堂教学改革，经过一段时间的适应，同学们发现现在的课堂跟以前比较发生了一些变化，请你根据所给提示以“The Changes in Class”为题目，用英语写一篇100词左右的文章，谈谈你的感受和想法，开头和结尾已给出（不计入总词数）。

要求：1.短文应行文连贯、条理清晰、段落分明、书写工整； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名等信息； 3.文章必须包括所提供的全部主要信息，并作适当发挥。