Environmental problems are too big for individual countries and individual people to address. We have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is to address it at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is true that how to solve environmental problems is a global issue that a large
amount of people are concerning about. Although coorperating with other countries to address this thorny problem is an excellect suggestion,这主语从句有点头重脚轻，可以考
虑使用it is excellent for all countries work togther to face envrionmental threats. 或Nations work together to fight environmental issues brings the greatest benefits to human being.这里还是使用这句话比较好，你这个是让步状语从句，前面描述尽管能带来最大的效益，但是单一国家和个人也可以出一份力。I believe individual countries and individual people 这里需要改写，each country and every single citizen can also play a part in environmental
protection. On the one hand, countries can gather together to discuss solutions on the most urgent environment topics,第二段的中心句是错误的论据，论据不能和论点一模一样，论据是支持论点的，这里要换成governments work togther can provide most talented solutions and maximize their joint efforts to preserve our envrionment such as global warming前面是复数，这里可以 such as global warming and envrionmental degradation . For instance,
numerous countries attend an international conference which is held in Copenhagen, Denmark to discuss how to deal with the climate change. After the discussion, they will sign an agreement associated with controlling their carbon emissions each year. The solidarity among countries has contributed to solve environmental issues to a large extent.
On the other hand, single countries and single person can also make efforts to alleviate environmental problems. In terms of individual countries, governments can introduce laws and policies to protect the environment, such as requiring factories to reduce unnecessary pollutions, stoping deforestation to make room for residential buildings, encouraging citizens to take public transportations rather than drive private cars to get around. As for individuals, residents can also try to go green. The fact that many people have tried their best to recycle products and to refuse to use disposable goods demonstrates that environment protection is not a great and far away issue, it can be practiced by everyone in daily life.
In conclusion, both international organisations 题目没有提到international
organisations，也不包括international organisations，这里提到是明显离题了and individuals can make an effort in protecting the earth, what we need is not only the agreement made by some global environmental associations, but also actual work that everyone can participate in. Only by doing this ,can our homeland become a healthier and more sustainable planet.
环境类的作文题目要使用和环境有关的专有名词，比如ecological footprint awareness, envrionmental preservation, envrionmental-friendly 这些全是大词，也是加分词汇。
雅思大作文-环境类-individual countries and individuals or work together
