应用文写作常见8大文体(七)——倡议书
一、 写作架构要规范 倡议书属于应用文的一种,是为倡议或是发起某项活动而写的号召性的公开提议性的专用文体。倡议书由标题、称呼、正文、结尾、落款五部分组成。具体写作结构为:
二、 (一)开头常用语 1.I think it is every citizen’s duty to work hard to achieve this goal. 我认为通过努力工作来实现这个目标是每个公民的责任。
2.Nowadays, people in many big cities are always complaining about the heavy traffic. 现在,许多大城市的人们总在抱怨拥挤的交通。
3.In order to build a “harmonious society”, I think we should try our best to do whatever we can.
为了建设“和谐社会”,我认为我们应该尽最大努力做我们能做的事。 (二)主体部分常用语
1.We are supposed/required/expected to choose a healthy and environmentally friendly way of traveling, that is, bicycle riding.
我们应该选择一个既健康又环保的旅游方式,那就是骑自行车。
2.In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body. Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.
在我看来,我们应该努力培养健康的饮食习惯来强壮我们的体质。只有用这样的方法我们才能有足够的精力来更好的学习。
(三)结尾常用语
1.It is high time that we started/should start from ourselves and reduced/reduce traffic pressure by riding a bike.
是我们从我们自身做起,通过骑自行车来减少交通压力的时候了。
2.If everyone does one thing for our school, I believe we will turn our school into a better place to study and live in.
如果每个人都为我们学校做一件事情,我相信我们会把学校变成一个更好的学习和生
靓点句式背一番 活的地方。
3.As long as we work together, we can make the impossible possible. 只要我们团结奋斗,就能把不可能变为可能。
三、 润色完善很关键 (2018·潍坊模拟)假定你是育才中学学生会主席李华。针对目前一些地方血库纷纷告急这一情况,请参照以下提示,用英文写一份倡议书,提倡无偿献血。
1.社会上对献血的不同认识; 2.指出献血的意义; 3.开展相关活动。 注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
(一)准审题、准表达保基本分
定体裁 定人称 定时态 定要点 定结构 [中档作文] Boys and girls,
It is reported that recently some blood banks in some areas are short of blood supplies?. People’s opinions about donating blood are different? from person to person. Some people think it is a bad thing. They think so? because it may cause some illnesses. However, others insist on donating blood, because it could save others’ life.
As for me, I support?the latter idea. The following are the reasons for my choice. First, when somebody may lack blood and almost lose his or her life, you will save one life if you donate blood in time. Second, we are all in the same family?. We should help each other?.
So some activities should be carried out to make people realize? the importance of donating blood.
The Students’ Union
倡议书 第一人称为主 一般现在时为主 开头:倡议背景(对献血的不同认识) 主体:献血意义(救人、相互帮助) 结尾:呼吁积极参与 (二)巧润色、大升级创高分
(请根据括号内要求升级上面的中档作文) Boys and girls,
(1)Recently some blood banks in some areas are reported to be short of blood supplies (把句?改为简单句). People’s opinions about donating blood (2)vary (词汇升级?) from person to person. Some people think it is a bad thing. They (3) hold this opinion (词汇升级?) because it may cause some illnesses. However, others insist on donating blood, because it could save others’ life.
As for me, I (4)am in favor of (词汇升级?) the latter idea. The following are the reasons for my choice. First, when somebody may lack blood and almost lose his or her life, you will save one life if you donate blood in time. (5)Second, we are all in the same family, and we should help each other (合并句??).
So some activities should be carried out to make people (6)aware of (词汇升级?) the importance of donating blood.
The Students’ Union
四、 “一题两用”错不犯 下文是根据上面的题目学生完成的一篇习作,文中共有10处语言错误,请改正。 Boys and girls,
Recently some blood banks in some areas are reported to be short of blood supplies. Some people hold the wrong idea that donate blood does harm to the donators’ health, but we shouldn’t donate our blood to others.
But the truth is when a small amount of blood is taken out, the body will make an quick adjustment to work normally.Blood is important to patients, and without which much of them can’t survive. And to the youth in the new age, not only is donating blood for free a society responsibility, but also it show the spirit of cooperation and sharing.
We senior high school students should set a good example for other people. From now on, our school will hold a series of activity to tell people the benefits of donating blood.
The Students’ Union
答案:第二句:第一个donate→donating; but→so 第三句:第一个is后加that; an→a
第四句:去掉and或which→it; much→many 第五句:society→social; show→shows 第六句:for→to
第七句:activity→activities