(英语)九年级下册英语书面表达解析版汇编含解析

（英语）九年级下册英语书面表达解析版汇编含解析

一、英语书面表达

1． 如今，很多城市出现了一种绿色出行方式――共享单车（bike-sharing），它因环保、便捷而备受青睐，但同时也引发了一些问题。请你根据提示以＂Bike-sharing＂为题写一篇英语短文，表达自己的看法和建议。 要点提示：

Be convenient, less pollution, reduce the traffic pressure（减缓交通压力） Take exercise… Advantages Problems Advice Throw away, damage（毁损）, be stolen… Civilized（文明的）, follow the rules, take good care of… 注意：

1. 短文应包括以上要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名；

3. 词数：80-100（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

Bike-sharing

Today, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities.

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Today,as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities. It's known that it has many advantages. So it's enjoyed by lots of people. First of all, it's very convenient for people to go somewhere.【高分句型一】Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bike-sharing. Besides, bike-sharing helps people take more exercise.In this way, it's helpful to people's health.（优势） However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stolen.（难题）

In my opinion, everyone should try to be civilized and follow the rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better,and our environment will be more beautiful.【高分句型二】（建议） 【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文内容丰富，表达了所有要点，语言表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在短文中使用了大量的复合句、固定句式、连词及固定短语，为文章增色不少，.如: It's known that it has many advantages.，First of all, it's very convenient for people to go somewhere.，Also, Besides, In this way, However, it also brings some problems. For example, In my opinion,等。 【点睛】

本文要求以“Bike-sharing”为题，根据表格的内容提示，写一篇短文，表达自己对共享单车的看法和建议。写作时，考生要紧密贴合表格中的三个要点：首先，阐述共享单车的优点；其次，列举共享单车带来的问题；最后，根据问题给出个人建议。

2．“扬帆起航新学期，学姐学长提建议”。你马上就要毕业了，在初中的学习和生活中你一定有很多收获，请给学弟学妹们提几点建议吧！

要求：1. 内容完整，语言流畅，书写规范清晰。2. 短文中不能出现正式姓名，校名。100 词左右。

【答案】I'm going to graduate from junior high school. As your senior, I have some suggestions to the young.

As old saying goes, \arrange both your study and life properly.

Moreover, you should get along well with others. To have more friends, not enemies. Last but not least, you could be active in school team work. Ability is as important as your study, you can also enjoy your colorful school life as well

I hope these suggestions could make your junior school-life more wonderful. 【解析】 【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be going to，graduate from，to begin with，both…and，get along well with others，be active in，as important as，as well等。而To begin with,/ Moreover,/ Last but not least,等短语的运用，既丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，更使短文很有条理，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。 【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

3．书面表达

假定你是李华，最近你们班就低碳生活方式进行了讨论，你的英国朋友Peppa向你来信 询问讨论情况。请你用英语写封回信，简单介绍以下讨论结果： 1．节水节电． 2．垃圾分类 3．少用纸巾，重拾手帕 4．步行、骑自行车或公交出行、

参考词汇：low carbon低碳；tissue纸巾

词数：100词左右。开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Peppa,

Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it．

_______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Yours, Li Hua

【答案】Dear Peppa,

Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it．

We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of low carbon life. First, we’d better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also matters much. Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. In addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world. Best wishes, Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】

这是一篇给材料作文，向我的英国朋友Peppa写信，介绍我们班就低碳生活方式进行的讨论情况。 【详解】

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：We can do……，we’d better……，we suggest……，which contributes to……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。 【点睛】

本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头我要介绍我们班就低碳生活方式进行了讨论，接下来介绍我们为低碳生活可以做的事。此处ask about, turn off, sort out, in addition, instead of, contribute to等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

4．书面表达

社会需要爱，时代呼唤爱。对善行、对爱心的感动，存在于每个人的心中。但很多人缺乏

的不是感动，而是一种显示感动的勇气。请为你身边的人或事点赞，让“点赞”成为传递正能量的一种行动吧！是什么行为让你点赞？讲述一件你点赞的事情。你从他/她身上可以学到什么？让我们一起分享吧！请根据以下提示要点，写一篇文章。 注意：1．词数：80左右；2．不要出现真实的人名及校名。 Make a list of the persons that you should give a “like” button Tell us one of the experiences that you clicked a “like” button What could you learn from him/her?

【答案】I should give my uncle a “like” button. He is very tall and very strong. He punishes the bad people and protect the good people. He always helps others. He is my hero. He works hard.When I grow up, I want to be a policeman like my uncle. I want to help people and protect them, so they can live a safe life.

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，讲述一件我点赞的事情，我从他/她身上可以学到什么。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I should……，He is……，He always helps……，I want to……，so they can……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。 点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我要点赞的人，接下来介绍他的情况，最后指出我从他身上学到的东西。此处give sb sth, work hard, grow up, want to do sth, live a …life等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

5．马上要初中毕业了，大家都是依依不舍的。班主任决定在下周举办一场“My Life At School” 主题 班会 , 邀请全班同学参加。请你根据以下提示，写一篇发言稿。

美好的回忆 1.与同学融洽相处； 2.得到老师的帮助； 3.获得交换生机会； 4.参加志愿者活动。 不开心的事情 1.好朋友李华转学； 2.不擅长语文写作。 1. 升上理想的学校； 未来展望 2. 能结识更多朋友； 3. 请你补充（至少两点）

My Life At School

How time flies! It's unbelievable that I'm going to graduate from my beloved school. 【答案】My Life At School

How time flies! It’s unbelievable that I’m going to graduate from my beloved school. There are many things to remember.

In the junior school, I got along well with my classmates. The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of becoming an exchange students and spent two months in Australia. I learned a lot from the experience. I also remember I served as volunteer to help others. Certainly, there were also unhappy things. My good friend Li Hua went to another school. I was very sad. Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through emails. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing.

I hope I can go to a dream school and make more new friends. I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college. 【解析】 【详解】

这篇作文要求我们以My Life At School为题，写一篇发言稿。题目中利用表格的形式，展示了文章的具体内容，学生们可以此为提纲进行写作。审题可知，这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时，注意根据表达需要使用正确时态，并注意谓语动词的正确形式。内容应主要包括三部分：首先是初中三年里的美好回忆；然后是不开心的事情；最后展望自己未来的高中生活。表格中有非常具体的提示，但不能逐词翻译表格中的短语，应把他们变成自己的话，并用英语表达出来。写作时应注意：文章中应包括表格中的所有信息，不能遗漏要点；第三部分的内容中还需要自己发挥想象力进行补充，注意应合情合理，与上文很好地衔接。另外注意句式结构要符合英语的表达习惯，用完整的句子表达。句式结构可以简单句为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式的使用，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用适当的连接成分，使文意连贯、自然。 【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，回忆了自己的初中生活，并展望了未来。短文有以下几个特点：首先文章内容完整，结构清晰。短文分三段，第一段基本是题目中给出的开头，作者使用一句话引出下文；第二段是主体，介绍了过去美好的回忆以及不开心的事情；最后一段对未来进行了展望。各部分内容安排合理，有层次、有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，注意了动词正确形式的变化。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。语言准确、得体，表达自然、流畅。短文中使用了丰富的句型和短语，如The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of becoming an exchange students and spent two months in Australia.Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through emails. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing.I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.等。

6．（B）根据要求完成大作文,词数:80-100

体育运动是中学生的共同爱好.请根据下面提示写一篇题为What We Get from Sports 的短文,应该包含以下要点: