2020-2021年中考英语书面表达专项练习经典1
一、中考英语书面表达(含答案详细解析)
1. 最近一份学生体质健康调查结果显示,学生近视率仍维持在高位水平,且越来越低龄化。请根据下表所提示的内容,用英语写一篇短文,并发表自己的观点。 现 状 主要原因 大约70%学生眼睛近视 1. 睡眠不足 2. 长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等 1. 做眼睛保健操,多进行体育活动 2. 养成正确的用眼习惯 … ….(至少一条) 预防方法 你的观点 参考词汇:近视的 shortsighted 要求:
(1)词数:80~100个。 (2)开头已给出,不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes. Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use computers for a long time.
In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.
I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them. 【解析】 【详解】
这是一篇图表作文。根据题干要求可知,本篇文章主要使用一般现在时写作,人称用第三人称复数和第一人称。内容包括:学生近视原因:1.睡眠不足(not enough)2.长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等(for a long time)防止近视的方法:1.做眼睛保健操,多进行体育活动(eye exercises)2.养成正确的用眼习惯(have the good habit of)个人观点:如:我认
为,我们应该了解保护眼睛的重要性,尽最大努力保护我们的眼睛。(I think ???;try one's best to do sth.)。
常用的重点句型和短语有:sb. spend some time doing sth.,in order to do sth.,try to do sth.,the importance of…等。
2.书面表达
同学们,中考后就会迎来漫长的暑假了,班会课上老师组织大家讨论假期学习和生活计划。假如你是李华,请根据以下内容提示用英语向同学们汇报一下你的计划。 内容提示: 暑假计划 学习 生活 其它 博览群书;学习技能 (或自拟一点) 健康饮食;坚持锻炼 (或自拟一点) 热爱公益;亲近自然 (或自拟一点) 注意:
1. 表达中必须包括所给要点,可以适当发挥,不要简单翻译。 2. 词数90左右。开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。 3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。 Dear classmates,
Summer holiday is coming, and here is my plan for it.
____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ I hope all of you can enjoy the coming holiday. That’s all. Thank you. 【答案】Dear classmates,
Summer holiday is coming, and here is my plan for it.
First, I'd like to choose several good books and read them carefully. This can help me open my mind and learn more about the world. I also think it's necessary for me to learn at least one skill. I'm interested in cooking, so I will learn to cook some delicious dishes during the holiday. Second, health is the most important. So I will eat healthily and exercise more. I plan to eat more
fruit and vegetables and keep running every day.
Third, it's a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in need. I will pay more attention to protecting our environment so that we can make our Earth a better world. Also, travelling out is a good choice. While travelling, we can be close to nature and learn about different cultures. We have more chances to search the Internet. I know unhealthy websites are harmful to us. I will say no to them.
I hope all of you can enjoy the coming holiday. That's all. Thank you.
【解析】亮点说明:这篇习作的层次清晰,内容饱满,表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语,例如I'd like to do,help me open my mind,at least,be interested in,during the holiday,plan to do,join in,be kind to someone in need,pay more attention to,be close to nature,search the Internet等。而First, I'd like to choose several good books and read them carefully./ Second, health is the most important./Third, it's a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in need.等表顺序词和综合句式的运用,既使短文层次清晰,又丰富了习作内容,使表达多样化,是本文的最大亮点。
点睛:书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
3.安全对每个人都很重要。请根据以下信息内容提示,写一篇关于校园安全的英语小短文。
提示:1. 体育锻炼 2. 上下楼梯 3. 交朋结友 4. 食品卫生
要求: 1. 语句通顺,表达准确,内容连贯; 2.短文可以适当发挥;但要包含以上要点。
3.词数:80—100词。短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students.___________ _____________________________________________
【答案】Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students. First, we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports. Second, There are too many students at school, and our hallways are too narrow. So don’t crowd with each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs. Or there may be an accident. Besides, we should be friendly and get on well with others, don’t quarrel or even fight. Last but not least , We should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food, which is harmful to our health.
In a word, it's important to remember these for us all. 【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文。结合要点提示,可知本文主要从三个方面进行叙述,注意围绕要点