改错:
There was a time when Zhang Yi and I(1) was good friends, but now we are like (2)stranger. On his first day in our class two years ago, he had no one to talk(3). I was the first one to say hello to(4) her, so we became friends. Zhang Yi did well in math(5) or he was always ready to(6) helping me with it. One day last month, I told him (7)about that I would be away from school for two days to see a friend. But he told my father about it and that made me (8)angrily. Now, I know I was wrong. I decide to say sorry(9) for him, because I don't want to lose (10)so a good friend. (1)将was改为were
(2)将strange改为strangers (3)将在talk后面加to/with (4)将her改为him (5)将or改为and (6)将helping改为help (7)将about删除 (8)将angrily改为angry (9)将for改为to (10)将so改为such
作文:
Dear Mary,
I am really sorry to hear that you often feel tired both physically and mentally and even sleepy in class because of heavy learning burdens and frequent exams. If the situation continues, it will have a negative influence on your normal life and study. In view of this, I would like to give you some suggestions on how to stay healthy and energetic.
First of all, you'd better go to bed early and have a good sleep. Don't stay up too late. Just as a saying goes, \and early to bed makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.\Besides, a balanced diet is also of great significance. You are supposed to eat more healthy foods such as vegetables, fruit and milk and so on and avoid food with too much fat. Furthermore, it would be a good idea for you to do some sports after school, which will greatly refresh you when you feel tied.
I do hope you will find these proposals useful and recover as soon as possible.
Yours,
Li Hua