高考作文满分练—求助信
题型解读：
在求助信中应开门见山，直截了当地把你遇到的难题或者狐疑告诉对方，并向对方求助。应注意：（1）向别人征求意见，态度一定要至诚，语气婉转；（2）把握时态：应用大凡现在时表明目前自己存在的困难，用大凡将来时描述自己得到帮助后的进步。
写作思路
Para.1:点名身份+直 接说明写信的求助 目的满分词汇 bother
troublev.满分短语满分句型
do sb. a
favor1.IamamiddleschoolstudentandI“mwritingtotellyoumyproblemwhichhastakethetroubletotroubled me.
do...2. I“m writing to you to ask whether you coulddo me a favor.
havetrouble/difficulty3.I“m wondering if you could take the troublein doing…to help me with…
4.I“msorrytobotheryou,butIhavesomehavenochoicebuttodifficulties here and I need your help.do…5.Ihavesomedifficultyindoing…,whichturn to sb. for helpbothers me alot. SoI have no choice but toturn to you for help.
fitinwithwith others=geonwell with others
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be accustomed to long to
lose heart1.Iseemnottobeabletofitinwellwithothers here. 2.Idon“tfeelquiteaccustomedtothelifehere.
3.IlongtolearnEnglishwellbutIdon“tknow how, which makes me upset.
4.Ican“tconcentrateonmylessonsthesedaysandIfailedinthelastexamwhichworries me a lot.
5.Ioftenfeelleftoutinthisschool,andIdon“t know how it has come about. 6.Facedwith/Facingsomanydifficulties,Ihave to turn to you for helpPara.2: 说明自己存在的困 难、狐疑并请求对方 的帮助。言辞一定要 礼貌多礼confused confusing upset worried anxious anxiety Para. 3 (客套话) 情真意切表达期盼 之情。timely eager
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grateful appreciate request
accountsb. would appreciate it1.I“m eager to get your timely help. /I“m eagerif…for your timely help.
take…into2.Iwillbeverygratefulifyoucouldhelpconsideration/account.me ... 3.I“d appreciate if you could take my requestinto consideration/ account. 4.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldreallygive/lend me a hand.
注意：作文的主体时态：大凡现在时为主，大凡将来时偶尔穿插。分模板：
Dear __________(写信对象),
My name is __________;I’m writing to ask whether you could do me a favour.I have had much difficulty/trouble in ___________(交代自己面临的困难). Besides,I’m very upset that ___________（提出令自己苦楚的问题）. What’s more, I don’t know___________（进一步说明自己的困境）I’m wondering if you could be so kind as to_________ so that ____________（再次请求对方的帮助）.
I’d appreciate it if you could lend me a hand.I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua优异作文欣赏：
题目1：（2016全国卷1）假如你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好申请和个人简历（resume）。给外教Ms Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附的文字和格式（format）。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可合适增加细节，使行文连贯
满
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Sample: Dear Ms Jenkins,
I“m writing to ask whether you could do me a favor.
In order to gain some social experience and improve my work ability. I“m going to take apart- time job during the summer vacation. So interested in the position in a foreign-capturedcompany amI that I’ve alreadywritten an application letter and my resume all in English.However, I’m afraid thatthere might be some grammar mistakes or inappropriate format in thematerials that I prepared.
Would you be so kind as to correct the mistakes and improve the format of the applicationand resume for me. I would appreciate it if you could take the trouble to help me. I’m lookingforward to your early reply.
Yours,LiHua题目2.假如你是李华，你家乡的梨花节(Ewha Festival)负有盛名，你写了一篇英文宣传稿，想请外籍教师Bob帮忙润色。请根据提示用英语给Bob写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.求助事由；2.求助内容；3.表达感激
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可合适增加细节，使行文连贯。 Sample: Deer bob,
I’mwriting to you in the hope that you will be so kind as to do me a favor. When it comes tothe Ewha Festival. There“s no denying that it enjoys a great reputation in my hometown. I, for along time, have been desiring to write an appealing article to make it better known. However, onlywhen I put the idea into practice did I find my English far from satisfying.
As far as I know, you have such a good command of written English as impresses me a lot.Therefore,I’mwondering whether you could take the trouble to have my draft polished at yourconvenience.
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I would be grateful if you could take my request into consideration. Yours,Li Hua
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（完整word版）高考英语作文专题-求助信
