Section Ⅴ Writing
建议信
技法指导
一般而言,建议信属于半开放性作文,大多要求考生根据所给的材料,提出有针对性的解决办法或者合理建议。写作时要注意:
一、总体要求
1.建议信要简明扼要、目的明确、条理清晰、逻辑性强,具有说服力。 2.提出的理由要入情入理,语气一定要礼貌,以增强其可接受性。 二、具体要求
1.主体时态:文章通常以一般现在时和一般将来时为主,也可以根据需要适当使用其他时态。
2.主体人称:由于是给对方提建议,所以人称主要为第一人称和第二人称。 三、行文要求
建议信一般采取“三段式结构”,通常以firstly, secondly, thirdly或to begin with, then, later等依次陈述建议。
1.首段:表明写作意图,陈述事由,简单介绍自己的观点。注意措辞和语气。 2.主体段落:应该首先肯定对方的优点,然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。
3.结尾段:对提出的建议进行总结,要注意表达方式,使对方容易接受。
黄金表达
1.段首常用语
①I am writing to express my views concerning ...
②You have asked for my advice about ... and I will try to make some suggestions.
③Thanks for trusting me. I'd like to give you some advice.
④I'm sorry to know that you have some trouble/difficulty in ... after reading your letter.
2.表达“建议”常用语
①I think the most suitable ... for you is ... ②I would like to suggest that ... ③You'd better ... /It's better to ...
④As far as I am concerned ... /In my opinion ... ⑤For one thing ... , for another ... ⑥If I were you, I would ... ⑦It seems to me that you could ... ⑧I strongly recommend ... 3.段尾常用语
①I think it would be more beneficial if you could ... ②I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration.
③I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful/of some use.
④I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.
⑤These are personal suggestions, but I do hope they will be of some help to your present si-tuation.
⑥I will be ready for further discussing this matter in more detail.
[典题演练]
假设你是红星中学高二(1)班的学生李华,你的英国笔友Chris刚刚转学,感到一切都很陌生。他在邮件中向你询问如何尽快融入新环境。请你根据以下信息回信:
1.多跟同学交流沟通; 2.积极参加学校活动; 3.向老师寻求帮助。 注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Chris,
Yours, Li Hua
谋篇布局
1.体裁:应用文
2.话题:根据情况给同学提出一些建议 3.时态:一般现在时为主 4.人称:第二人称为主
?第一段:引出问题
5.结构?第二段:给对方提出具体建议
?第三段:表达自己的愿望
联想词汇
1.做某事有困难 __________________ 答案:have trouble/difficulty (in) doing sth. 2.听从建议 __________________ 答案:follow the suggestions 3.参加 __________________ 答案:take part in
4.面对 __________________ 答案:be faced with
5.有助于 __________________
答案:be helpful to/be of some help to/be beneficial to
连词成句
1.听说你不能适应新学校,我很难过。
I'm sorry to hear it's difficult for you to fit in at your new school.
→I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in at your new school. (升级句)
2.其次,多参加运动对你有益。 Second, you can take part in more sports.
→Secondly, it might be a good idea for you to take part in more sports.(升级句) 3.有困难,可以向老师求助。
If you have problems, turn to the teachers for help.
→Faced with some tough problems, you might consider asking your teachers for help.(升级句)
连句成篇
Dear_Chris,