高中英语作文:用好非谓语动词,提升写作档次
众所周知,作文中出现过多的简单句会让人觉得单调乏味松散;而文章中过多地出现复合句又显得累赘句和复合句进行转换
,句子与句子之间的关系显得
,读起来费劲。恰当地运用非谓语动词对简单
,言简意明。
,不仅句型多样,句子活泼,而且读起来结构紧凑
1.我为那事感到非常遗憾,开始考虑做些什么来帮一下。I feel quite sorry for that. I begin to think about what to do to help.
→Feeling quite sorry for that, I begin to think about what to do to help.(现在分词作状语)2.另一方面,我将帮着建立英语角,给我们学生提供一个练习英语口语的平台。
On the other hand, I will help set up the English corner. It will provide us students a platform to practice our oral English.
→On the other hand, I will help set up the English corner,providing us students a platform to practice our oral English.(现在分词作状语)
3.这儿的人都喜欢汤姆写的那本小说。
All the people here like the novel.It is written by Tom.
→All the people here like the novel written by Tom.(过去分词作定语)4.我们应该多讲英语。我们认为这是很重要的。
We should speak more English. We think it is very important.
→We think it very important to speak more English.(it作形式宾语,不定式作真正宾语5.我们应该如何提高我们的英语口语水平?这是个问题。How should we improve our spoken English? It is a question.
→How to improve our spoken English is a question.(不定式短语作主语→The question is how to improve our spoken English.(不定式短语作表语
))
)
用非谓语动词进行句型转换
1.(2015·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)Itcarriesarticlesabouttheculturesoftheirhomecountries.They are written by foreign friends.
→It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.(去分词作定语)
2.(2015·湖南高考书面表达
)I went back home proudly that afternoon. I jumped with joy.
过
→I went back home proudly that afternoon, jumping with joy.(现在分词作状语)3.As he is encouraged by the progress he has made, he works harder.
→Encouraged by the progress he has made, he works harder.(过去分词作状语)4.The boys were making the most of time. They wanted to finish the work earlier.
→The boys were making the most of time to finish the work earlier.(不定式作状语)5.The boy came to school late again.This made the teacher very angry.
→The boy’s coming to school late again made the teacher very angry.(动名词作主语)
用非谓语动词转换复合句比转换简单句要容易一些,因为需转换的一般是从句部分,这
时只需要判断用何种非谓语动词,再把握好时态和语态即可,所以只需两步。
[示例]
第一步:写出复合句。(安徽高考书面表达
)Since you have realized that your time is limited
, you’ll have to study
for your goals without anger or hesitation.
第二步:把since引导的原因状语从句转换为非谓语动词,系,且表示完成,故用现在分词的完成式作状语。
Having realized that your time is limited,you’ll have to study for your goals without anger or hesitation.
其他几个转换的例子如下:
1.We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books. →To have more time to read and select books, we can set out early. 2.(2015·广东高考书面表达
)If it is carried out continuously, it will benefit all of us greatly
realize与you之间为主谓关
and we are sure to make obvious progress.
→Carried out continuously,it will benefit all of us greatly and we are sure to make obvious progress.
3.(2015·湖北高考书面表达
)Because I thought that his solution might be wrong, I carefully
analyzed the problem and tried to work it out in a different way.
→Thinking that his solution might be wrong, I carefully analyzed the problem and tried to work it out in a different way.
用非谓语动词进行句型转换1.(山东高考书面表达comfort and help.
→Faced with difficulties,we need friends to give us comfort and help.
2.(安徽高考)When I saw a car running towards her, I reached my hand out and pulled her back.
→Seeing a car running towards her, I reached my hand out and pulled her back. 3.(湖南高考)After we had practiced playing basketball for almost two monthsdesired to be the winner.
, we strongly
)Whenwearefacedwithdifficulties,weneedfriendstogiveus
→Having practiced playing basketball for almost two monthswinner.
, we strongly desired to be the
1.remain to be done有待于被……
◆Many questions have to be settled and much remains to be done in our educational work. 我们的教育工作中还有许多问题要解决,还有许多事情要去做。2.疑问词+to do◆(江西高考书面表达
)Toallofyou,freshstudents,howtoadaptyourselftothenew
对你们所有新生来说,如何使自己适应新
environment is the first thing that you have to face.的环境是必须要面对的首要问题。
3.连词when/while/once/unless/although+doing/done…◆(湖南高考书面表达the screen.
当查找一些信息时,我们可以通过触摸屏来操作。4.easy/difficult
…to do…
)When searching for some information,we can operate by touching
◆Some bad habits such as smoking and drinking aren’teasy to get rid of.像吸烟、酗酒等一些坏习惯不容易改掉。5.prefer to do
…rather than do
…/would rather do
…than do…/would do…rather than
do…宁愿做……,而不愿做……
◆Nowadays some teenagers prefer to chat with strangers online rather than talk with their parents face to face.
如今,一些青少年宁愿在网上与陌生人闲谈也不愿与父母面对面谈话。6.having done…已经……◆(江西高考单项填空hotel.
几乎把所有的钱都花完了,我们没有钱住宾馆了。7.by doing…通过做……◆(2016·全国卷乙书面表达
)Moreover,by doing the part-time job I can get some precious )Having spent nearly all our money,
we couldn’t afford to stay at a
experience so that I can better adapt to the development and changes of society.
而且,通过做兼职工作,我能获得一些宝贵的经验,变化。
8.only to do sth.(表示出乎意料的结果
)
以致于能更好地适应社会的发展和
◆What’sworse,IfoundmyselfhavingafeverthismorningandIwenttotheclinicforimmediate treatment,only to be advised to stay in bed for three days.
糟糕的是,今天早晨我发现自己发烧,立刻去诊所治疗,结果被建议卧床休息三天。
高中英语作文:用好非谓语动词,提升写作档次
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