【英语】九年级上册英语书面表达答题技巧及练习题(含答案)及解
析
一、英语书面表达 1.书面表达 我的英语学习
初中即将毕业,你在英语学习方面积累了较多的经验与方法,请你向你的表弟介绍你的做法,根据下面表格中的内容,按要求用英语写一篇短文, 多听 多说 多读书 语法规则 写作 其他 听收音机,听音乐等,可以放松...... 运用英语,增强能力与信心...... 开阔视野,了解英语文化...... 更好地理解与运用...... 写写日常生活...... ...... 要求:1.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范; 2.必须包含表格中所有内容,并作适当发挥 3.行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名; 4.词数80-100。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】My English Study
How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.
First, listen more. Listening to the radio is a good way to learn English. We can relax ourselves by listening to English songs. Second, say more. Use spoken English when communicating with classmates. Speaking English can enhance the ability and confidence to learn English well. Third, read more English books. Reading can broaden our horizon and help us understand English culture. In addition, learn some grammar rules to better understand and use English. Finally, we can write about our daily life.
In a word, only when we develop interest in studying English can we learn it well. 【解析】 【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如look back,listen to the radio,a good way to learn English,relax ourselves,communicate with,help sb. do,do
more reading,in addition,in a word等。而感叹句How time flies!,倒装句only when we develop interest in studying English can we learn it well.和复杂从句结构Use spoken English when communicating with classmates.的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。 【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
2.书面表达
假如你是Amy,德国的交换生Sara下周即将来你家寄宿,昨天你收到她的来信,在信中,她询问如下信息:1.你家情况;2.有关餐桌礼仪;3. 她要承担的家务劳动;4. …现在,你就她提出的问题给她回信,也预祝她在你家过得开心! 要求:1. 文章必须包括图片中主要内容,可适当发挥; 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息; 3. 字数约110词。 Dear Sara,
I’m glad to hear from you yesterday._____________________________________________ Love, Amy
【答案】Dear Sara,
I’m glad to hear from you yesterday. Welcome to my family next week.
I have a small family. There are three people in my family, my parents and me. In China, unlike in the West, plates are placed on the table and shared by everyone. And sometimes the Chinese hosts use their chopsticks to put food in your bowl or plate. This is a sign of politeness. The appropriate thing to do would be to eat the whatever-it-is and say how delicious it is. If you feel uncomfortable with this, you can just say \ As for housework, I think it's our duty to help our parents do some housework. So you can help my parents wash the dishes, clean the room and make the bed. I hope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework.
Of course, if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious dishes. Love, Amy 【解析】 【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如be glad to,hear from,unlike in the West,on the table,a sign of,help sb. do,do some housework,wash the dishes,clean the room,make the bed,take care of,how to do等。而复杂并列结构In
China, unlike in the West, plates are placed on the table and shared by everyone.和If you feel uncomfortable with this, you can just say a polite thank you and leave the food there./ I hope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework./ if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious dishes.等复杂从句结构的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。 【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
3. 亚洲文明对话大会近期在北京召开,你的印度朋友Danny收看了大会相关报道,对华夏文明产生了浓厚的兴趣,来信向你了解中国文化。假设你是李华,请根据以下内容提示用英语写一封回信给Danny。 要点 历史文化 文明行为 身边文明 内容 历史悠久,文化各异;传统节日,多彩习俗(举一例) 相互尊重,以礼相待;互学共鉴,共同成长(或自拟) 校园文明(自拟一点) 注意:1. 词数90词左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。 2. 回复必须包括所以要点,可是当发挥,是短文连贯,通顺。 3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 参考词汇: civilized 文明的 Dear Danny,
I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization(文明) of China, I would like to share something with you.
I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hear from you soon. All the best, Li Hua
【答案】Dear Danny,
I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization(文明) of China, I would
like to share something with you.
Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world. China is a country of 56 nationalities. Different nations have difficult cultures. In my country, we have many traditional festivals, such as, the Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Festival and the Dragon Boat Festival . They are also called “three major Chinese holidays” in China. Here are the customs of eating Zongzi and racing dragon-boat on the Dragon Boat Festival.
China is a nation of etiquette (礼仪). Chinese people can respect, trust and help each other. We all learn and grow together. Everyone in my school should protect the whole public environment. Climbing the trees, picking the flowers and throwing garbage at random are not allowed there.
I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hearing from you soon. All the best.
Li Hua
【解析】 【分析】
本文要求给你的印度朋友Danny写一篇关于华夏文明的回信。 【详解】
文章需要介绍下中国的文化。表格中列举了三个要点,写作时注意不要漏写。平时注意多多积累句型、短语。细心检查避免疏漏。以图表展示的作文要以“读”为主,首先要认真读懂图表中的要求,对所给信息加以分析、推断、筛选、概括,去粗取精;在写作时目的要明确,要注意内容的准确性和严肃性。 【点睛】
写作中注意语义通顺,符合逻辑关系,上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。如but, so, then等。可以适当使用高分句子。本篇文章写的好的句子有:Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world.中华文明是世界上最古老、最悠久的文明之一。China is a nation of etiquette(礼仪),中国是一个礼仪之邦。
4.书面表达
假如你是华,你的英国笔友对中国文化很感兴趣,想到中国旅行感受中国文化。你想请他来你的家乡一安徴一游,请你根据以下提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件。 1位置:中国东部,安做省南部: 2.气候:春暖花开,秋季凉爽 3.景点:山和古村落: 4.文化:茶、黄梅戏 5.建议
提示词:黄梅戏 Huangmei Opera 注意:1.词数80-100
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。 3.文中不得出现自己真实的校名和人名
4.开头和结展己给出,不计入总词数 Dear Dave
I know that you are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not come to Anhui, my home town, to have fun? 【答案】Dear Dave,
I know you are interested in Chinese culture and I’m glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not come to Anhui, my hometown, to have some fun.
Anhui Province lies in the east of China. The best time to come here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats. There are many famous places to see. For example, Mt. Huangshan, where you will see wonderful plants and special rocks. Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on. As a fan of Chinese culture, don’t forget to try green tea in Anhui which smells good and tastes better. What’s more, come and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down! Welcome to Anhui! I’m looking forward to seeing you here! Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给自己的笔友Dave写信,邀请他来你的家乡—安徽一游,题目中列出了文章的提纲,审题可知,短文应从以下几个内容叙述:首先介绍家乡的位置;然后介绍来这里最好的时候;接下来是介绍家乡的景点和文化,并给出建议。短文应使用一般现在时,注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应合理安排几个内容,分清主次,并注意上下文的连贯。另外,英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的,因此写作时不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译,应从句子的整体结构出发,写完整的句子。如可以使用简单句结构,易于掌握,不容易出错。但为提升文章档次,也应穿插一些并列句结构或复合句,以及使用一些复杂结构,如非谓语动词、被动语态等。 【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文,短文作者根据题目要求邀请Dave来自己的家乡旅游,并介绍了家乡的景点和文化。短文有如下几个特点:首先文章内容完整,包含了题目中要求的所有内容,并对细节进行补充和修饰,使内容更加充实、丰富。短文先对Dave发出邀请,然后具体介绍了家乡的位置、景点、文化等,并提出了建议。全文叙述清晰,层次清楚,主次分明。第二,短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,语法规范,用词准确,句式结构完整,符合英语的表达习惯。短文以一般现在时来叙述,注意了谓语动词第三人称单数形式的变化。句式结构以简单句为主,也使用了并列句、宾语从句、状语从句等复合句,还有一些好的句型,如The best time to come here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats、Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on.、What’s more, come and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!、I’m looking forward to seeing you here!等。
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