小升初英语作文 小学英语作文指导与欣赏-兴趣爱好习惯篇
Hobbies
Hi, I am Amy. I am a student. I like plying football and reading books. I also like
listening to music. Mike and Tim are my friends. Mike likes playing the pipa. He also likes reading books. Tim likes reading books, too. He also likes doing Chinese kung fu. We are good friends.
I like Zhongshan Park
I often go to Zhongshan Park. In the park you can see many trees and flowers. Some flowers are red, and some are purple. The trees are big and tall. You can see a hill in the park, too. At the foot of the hill, there are several paths. A lot of people in the city like going to the park. Some young people like taking a walk there. Some old people like singing there. Some children like dancing or playing games there. Zhongshan park is really a good place for relaxation. 生单词： 1. several:几个 2. relaxation:放松
点评：这篇作文简单明了。首先，作者向大家简单地描绘出了公园的风景：有山有水有花。然后，作者写了人们在公园里的活动：青年人在公园里散步，老年人在公园里唱歌，小孩子在公园里玩游戏，多么快乐的一组画面啊！最后，作者作出总结：中山公园真的是一个放松心情的好地方！
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小升初英语作文 Li Ying ’s Hobby
Li Ying likes English very much. She works hard at it. She reads English every morning. She likes speaking English. She often listens to the radio. She watches TV only on Saturday evening. Does she like dancing? No, she doesn’t. But she likes drawing and singing. Her parents love her. And all the teachers and her friends like her, too. She says her hobbies make her happy. 【要领点评】
这一篇写爱好的文章，小作者的写作思路很值得我们学习，他没有具体写到刘莹的某一种爱好，而是从学习到课余的多种爱好入手，对刘莹的各种爱好进行了粗线条地勾画。从“爱好”这个角度来看刘莹的话，我们会觉得这个形象很饱满。
小朋友们写这种“叙事写人”作文时，可以从两个角度下手：一是具体地描绘；二是和范文一样，粗线条地勾画，二者各有所长，另外在行文中使用一些问句，使用一些转述的话，可以使作文更有灵气，避免了平铺直叙的缺点。比如上文的“Does she like dancing? No, she doesn’t.”和“She says her hobbies make her happy.”就是十分不错的句子，使读者眼前为之一亮。
My favourite animal
My favourite animal is rabbit. Its name is Sweet. Sweet has long ears. It’s very small. It’s white. It has a short tail. It has red eyes. It likes eating carrots. It likes jumping. It goes jumping three times a day. I like it very much. It’s lovely. It’s my best friend. I like the rabbit.
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小升初英语作文 My favourite season
My favourite season is summer. It’s hot in summer. There is a summer vacation in summer. I don’t go to school. I think many children like this season, because they can eat ice cream and go swimming. I can go swimming. Sometimes I go to the beach with my parents. Sometimes I go to the swimming pool with my friends. I usually visit many places in summer vacation.
My favourite food
Do you know what this is? Guess! Its colour is yellow. It’s long and thin. It looks like a small boat. Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what that is? Guess again! Its colour is orange. It’s round. It looks like a small ball and a small lantern. Oh, it is an orange. I like them a lot. I like ice creams. I like to chewing gum. Chocolates and candies are yummy. I like them very much. How about you? What’s your favourite food? 【要领点评】
My favourite food是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是简单地列举出自己最喜欢的每一种食物，而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另外，文章中出现了一些生词，可见小作者是用心查字典了。
My hobby
My hobby is collecting stamps. There are many stamps in my room. I like stamps very much. There are many things on the stamps. They are colorful and beautiful. After
3 小升初英语作文 school I usually go to the post office and there are many people there. I learn a lot from collecting stamps. I like collecting stamps very much.
My hobby
I am Cindy. I am in No.1 Primary School. I am in Class 9, Grade 6. I am tall and thin. I live in Dali. I have many good friends. I often play with them. I have many hobbies, riding a bike, drawing pictures and reading books. But I like to read books best. Because reading books is good for my study. I also like riding bikes. Because it does a lot of good to my body. What’s your hobby? Can you tell me?
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小升初小学英语作文指导与欣赏兴趣爱好习惯篇
