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一、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I am writing to offer my sincere congratulation．You won the first prize in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge．As your friend，I just want you to know how gladly I am at your success．
In last few years，you had shown great interest in Chinese chess．You keep on practicing them every day．Not only have you read much books about Chinese chess strategies，but also you have competed on all kinds of Chinese chess contests．Finally，you succeeded in win the online competition!
I was so very happy that I couldn’t go to sleep last night．I’m eager to play Chinese chess with you at the community club，which we’11 enjoy ourselves． 二、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I participated the Secondary School Program in Harvard last summer．I spend half of the day on my class and homework，and then I'd be free to do that I wanted．Since my course was an 8-credit course，it was a lot fast than other summer school course.
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I had to learn how to keep up with the pace of my class and figure out how to study efficient．For me，take notes was of great help．During my study，I also got to know many professors who was available for extra help whenever I needed it．The resources and opportunities combined with the environment here made me want to attend to Harvard even more．Now back in China，I often miss the experience of studying abroad． 三、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was four year old , my older sister and I had very few money . But we used to getting a few coins from relatives, like ours grandparents. My sister always asks me to swap my old and dirty coins for her new shiny ones . I was very happily to do that . What I didn't realize of was that the coins she was giving me was worth less than the ones I was giving her . I learned two things in that experience : one was how to count and other was never to trust my sister with money .
四、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共 有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第II处起）不计分。
Last weekend l went fishing with my cousins by a river, where was two miles away from my home by bike. When we were about to return for home, we found one of our bike
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lost. We were really nervous then. Asking about the lost bike, nobody told the truth except me. And to my surprise, my parents don't scold me. Instead, they said l was a honest boy.I have benefited great from my family rules. I'm not the best at school work, but classmates trust me and nearly everyone is willing to making friends with me. It helps me know better about \
五、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last week I went to countryside to visit my parents．I enjoyed the warmly family atmosphere．That evening，a group of local actor came to give a performance in the village hall．When the news gets around，excitement filled the whole village．Unluckily，my glasses was broken．As a result，I couldn’t go and watch it．All my parents went to the hall，which many villagers had waited anxiously．I did nothing but sit on the sofa，listened to English programs on the radio．Two hours later，I heard a knock over the door．The performance was finished and my parents returned back home．
六、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I went out early today to attend the birthday party and after it was over, I went to a place when I often have lunch.Usually, I would take the bus home from there, or
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today I decided to walk home instead taking the bus. I want to get some exercise.
On my walk home, I saw a girl's student ID card had been dropping by the bus stop. I decided to get home and try out to reach her online so I could return it to me as soon as possible. I sent her a message eager and made arrange to meet her to give it back to her.
答案
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2024届高考英语短文改错考前提分课下练习5（含解析）
