2024年高考英语热点内容专练八书面表达热点话题类（二）（含答案）

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热点08 书面表达热点话题类（二）

【热点话题】垃圾分类、运动比赛、共享单车、手机低头族、科技创新【限时检测】（建议用时：30分钟）

(黑龙江省大庆实验中学2024-2024学年高三上学期开学考试)

话题：垃圾分类难度：★★ 建议用时：6分钟假定你是大庆实验中学高三学生会主席李华，实验中学被选定为大庆市垃圾分类试点单位，请你根据以下要点写一篇倡议书，倡议全体同学垃圾分类，内容包括： 1. 告知学校要进行垃圾分类； 2. 垃圾分类的重要意义； 3. 提出倡议。词数：100词左右；

参考词汇：垃圾分类waste sorting/ rubbish classification 可回收的recyclable Dear fellow students,

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Thank you!

Yours, Li Hua

【参考范文】 Dear fellow students,

Our school has been selected as one of the experimental units for rubbish classification. Different kinds of garbage are required to be sorted out and placed in different dustbins. Paper can be recycled, while leftovers can be collected as food for pigs or processed as fertilizer for plants. Above all, such harmful things as plastics and used

batteries should not be mixed with other wastes.

The program is of great benefit. We will be able to save resources by making use of recyclable garbage and harmful things will not pollute our environment after special treatment. Let’s work together for a better campus! 【写作思路】

这是一封倡议信。写倡议信语言应简洁明了，用词精准，内容明确。根据内容提示可知，写作主要分为三部分：倡议内容、垃圾分类的意义以及提出倡议。

第1步：审题。确定时态和人称。根据提示：你作为学生会主席，向大家发起倡议。时态应以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。

第2步：确定关键词（组），提炼写作要点。如：experimental units (试点)，sort out（分类），be collected as food for pigs（回收喂猪），be processed as fertilizer for plants (被加工成植物肥料)，mixed with（混在一起）等。

第3步：对写作要点遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【写作亮点】

本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。符合英语表达习惯，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。范文内容完整，段落清晰，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。第一段话介绍垃圾分类的内容都是用了被动语态，阐述的客观准确。第一段第三句话使用while连接了两个并列句，最后一句话中使用了such…as…词组，提升了语言档次。第二段第一句话使用了＂of+名词＂短语，第二句话用and连接了两个并列句，而且介词by与after使用的也很巧妙。本文中前后使用的介词值得大家推敲，供大家以后写作中使用。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。且全文语句间过渡自然，为文章增色添彩。

（河北省承德市2024届高三上学期期末考试）话题：运动比赛难度：★★ 建议用时：6分钟假定你是李华。外教Peter计划于本周日组织你校学生进行一场橄榄球比赛，并委托你以学生会名义用英语写一则通知，主要内容包括：

1. 比赛时间和场地； 2. 提前到场以了解规则； 3. 准备运动装备，注意安全。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

NOTICE

There is a rugby match to be held this Sunday on our school playground. Every student is welcome to watch the match organized by Mr Peter. Students who are interested in rugby can join in the match. And there are some important things everybody should pay attention to.

Firstly, any participant should go to the playground on time so that there will be enough time left for Mr Peter to explain some rules about rugby. Secondly, each player should wear sports clothes and shoes. It will be better if you have a protective helmet. Last but not least, every player should focus on your own safety. Boys and girls, let’s move and join together. 【写作思路】

这是一篇提纲类作文。主要考查学生运用所学的语言基础知识和已掌握的英语写作技能，准确表达客观事实，阐述个人观点，进行思想交流的书面表达能力。

【一】解题思路。1. 认真审题，抓住信息点。除了列出的三条要点，还有外教Peter计划于本周日组织你校学生进行一场橄榄球比赛。2. 注意人称，确定时态。本文用第二人称，面向全体学生。现在和将来时态。3. 文体是书面通知。4. 恰当运用高级句型和关联词。5. 书写工整，卷面清洁。【二】范文亮点。

Firstly, secondly, last but not least使行文层次分明。

who are interested in rugby, everybody should pay attention to定语从句

so that there will be enough time left for Mr Peter to explain some rules about rugby. if you have a protective helmet.原因，条件状语从句，等高级句型增强了逻辑性

left for Mr Peter to explain some rules about rugby 过去分词短语作后置定语

(广东省茂名市2024届高三上学期第一次综合测试) 话题：共享单车难度：★★ 建议用时：6分近来，共享单车(shared bikes)成为中国时尚，它因方便、环保而广受好评，然而共享单车也出现了许多弊病，例如乱停放、人为破坏、非法占有等。假如你是光明中学的学生李华，请你将有关情况反映给政府相关部门并阐述你的看法。内容要点包括： 1. 共享单车的问题； 2. 出现问题的原因； 3. 解决问题的意见或建议。注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Sir,

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Yours, Li Hua

【参考范文】 Dear Sir,

I’m Li Hua, a student from Guangming middle school. I’m writing to express my opinions about the shared bike.

Being convenient and environmentally friendly, shared bikes have already been popular throughout China. However, with its rapid development, it brings about many problems. In some places shared bikes are left everywhere and sidewalks are occupied. What’s worse, some people even damage them or take them just as their own possessions.

In my opinion, it’s the lack of public awareness and related laws that results in such phenomena. To solve the problems, measures must be taken right away. First, the government should make some strict laws and rules to regulate the operation and management of the shared bikes. Second, the public should raise their awareness of using the bikes correctly and gracefully.

I hope you will take my advice into consideration.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【写作思路】

目前共享单车(shared bikes)成为中国时尚，它因方便、环保而广受好评，然而共享单车也出现了许多弊病，例如乱停放、人为破坏、非法占有等。请你将有关情况反映给政府相关部门并阐述你的看法。内容要点包括：共享单车的问题；出现问题的原因；解决问题的意见或建议。首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，主次分明，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【写作亮点】

Being convenient 本文要点齐全，重点突出，语言流畅，结构布局合理，且文中使用高级词汇和句子。and environmentally friendly, shared bikes have already been popular throughout China.现在分词作原因状语；To solve the problems, measures must be taken right away动词不定式做目的状语；I hope you will take my advice into consideration.句中使用宾语从句；However, What’s worse, In my opinion, First, Second,另外，等的运用为文章增色添彩。

(湖南师范大学附属中学2024-2024学年高三上学期期末考试) 话题：手机低头族难度：★★ 建议用时：6分手机的盛行让很多人都成了低头一族，而不少中学生周末也沉浸在埋头玩手机之中，假如你是学生会的主席李华，打算倡议大家加入＂周末或假期不当低头族(phubber)＂活动，现请你写一封倡议信，在倡议信中请提出有效建议。要点如下： 1．成为低头族的危害(提出3条左右)；

2．周末不做低头族，可以进行哪些活动，请给出建议(提出3条左右)。注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear friends，

y yours， Li Hua

【参考范文】 Dear friends,

With the popularity of smartphones, many people have become phubbers, buried in playing their smartphones. Even a lot of high school students spend their weekends or holidays playing phone games, casting bad effects on them. On the one hand, being buried in playing smartphones will cause damage to people’s neck and eyes. On the other hand, it will distract them from study and even make them perform badly in the study. At last, it will cause people to be psychologically addicted to the smartphones.

Making a balance of our life is the key to solving the problem. First, we should spend more time with our family and friends. Second, we can do some meaningful activities to replace phone games, such as reading some books or having some outdoor exercises. Meanwhile, we should consciously avoid smartphones for entertainment. Don’t let the smartphones ruin our life; don’t be phubbers at weekends or holidays!

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【写作思路】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封倡议信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封倡议信；手机的盛行让很多人都成了低头一族，而不少中学生周末也沉浸在埋头玩手机之中，假如你是学生会的主席李华，打算倡议大家加入＂周末或假期不当低头族(phubber)＂活动，现请你写一封倡议信，在倡议信中请提出有效建议。要点如下：成为低头族的危害(提出3条左右)；周末不做低头族，可以进行哪些活动，请给出建议(提出3条左右)。人称使用第三人称，时态应为一般现在时、一般将来时。

the popularity of smartphonesspend time (in)doing第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：（手机的盛行），（花费时间做），playing smartphones（玩手机），be addicted to（对……上瘾）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【写作亮点】

范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如过去分词I With the popularity of smartphones, many people have become phubbers, buried in playing their

smartphones.；现在分词Even a lot of high school students spend their weekends or holidays playing phone games, casting bad effects on them.，On the one hand, being buried in playing smartphones will cause damage to people’s neck and eyes.，Making a balance of our life is the key to solving the problem.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，on the one hand, on the other hand, at last, first, second, meanwhile等过渡词的使用使得文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

(内蒙古赤峰二中2024-2024学年高三上学期第一次月考) 话题：科技创新难度：★★ 建议用时：6分假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Jim对中国的＂新四大发明＂（共享单车、高铁、支付宝和网购）很感兴趣，特写信向你询问。请你给他回信，选一项发明进行介绍。注意：1. 词数不少于100；

2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

提示：共享单车 bike-sharing 高铁 high-speed rail 支付宝 Alipay 网购 online shopping Dear Jim,

Li, Hua

【参考范文】

In recent years, among Chinese technological innovations, four have earned a reputation as China’s ＂four great new inventions＂. They are high-speed railway, Alipay, bicycle-sharing, and online shopping, which have added great convenience to daily life. As for me, I choose to talk about online shopping because I believe it has made traditional stores nearly obsolete.

With easier access to the Internet and wider use of mobile payment, online shopping has gained much popularity. This has caused the public to form different consumption habits, me included, of course. I seldom shop at brick-and-mortar shops now. What I often purchase online is clothing and stationery. There are various items for me to choose from. The easy access to consumer reviews helps me make informed purchases. Also, shopping online helps me save time and money.

Online shopping is a phenomenon that almost everyone has experienced in his or her life; and the reality is that it will only become more popular in the future. Although there’s nothing quite like the convenience of shopping online, we should make sure our privacy and security are never at risk. 【写作思路】

按照题目要求，写一篇议论文。选择一项中国＂新四大发明＂并做简单介绍。第一步：整理题目要点

①交代＂中国新四大发明＂的背景（整体的介绍）；②提出自己想要说明的对象（本文作者介绍的是网络购物）③说明网络购物对生活的影响；④并简述你对这件事的看法。第二步：准备关键词

根据关键要点，确定关键词，Chinese technological innovations中国技术改革；earn a reputation as作为……make traditional stores nearly obsolete让传统商店几乎过时；brick-and-mortar shops实体店；the easy 赢得赞誉；

access to容易获得；privacy and security隐私和安全等。

第三步：确定文章使用的时态，说明事实，应用一般现在时或现在完成时。第四步：根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句，注意语法和词法的使用。

第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过度，使之自然通畅。根据文章要点可以将文章分为三段。【写作亮点】

范文结构清晰，内容完整，过渡衔接谨慎自然，符合书信的要求，不乏亮点的表达。主语从句：What I often purchase online is clothing and stationery.

定语从句：Online shopping is a phenomenon that almost everyone has experienced in his or her life;… 表语从句：the reality is that it will only become more popular in the future

固定句型：there’s nothing quite like…