中考英语书面表达知识点总结及经典习题(含答案)
一、中考英语书面表达(含答案详细解析)
1. 如今,很多城市出现了一种绿色出行方式――共享单车(bike-sharing),它因环保、便捷而备受青睐,但同时也引发了一些问题。请你根据提示以"Bike-sharing"为题写一篇英语短文,表达自己的看法和建议。 要点提示:
Be convenient, less pollution, reduce the traffic pressure(减缓交通压力) Take exercise… Advantages Problems Advice Throw away, damage(毁损), be stolen… Civilized(文明的), follow the rules, take good care of… 注意:
1. 短文应包括以上要点,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯; 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名;
3. 词数:80-100(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Bike-sharing
Today, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Today,as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities. It's known that it has many advantages. So it's enjoyed by lots of people. First of all, it's very convenient for people to go somewhere.【高分句型一】Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bike-sharing. Besides, bike-sharing helps people take more exercise.In this way, it's helpful to people's health.(优势) However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stolen.(难题)
In my opinion, everyone should try to be civilized and follow the rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better,and our environment will be more beautiful.【高分句型二】(建议) 【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文内容丰富,表达了所有要点,语言表达准确,意思连贯,符合逻辑。在短文中使用了大量的复合句、固定句式、连词及固定短语,为文章增色不少,.如: It's known that it has many advantages.,First of all, it's very convenient for people to go somewhere.,Also, Besides, In this way, However, it also brings some problems. For example, In my opinion,等。 【点睛】
本文要求以“Bike-sharing”为题,根据表格的内容提示,写一篇短文,表达自己对共享单车的看法和建议。写作时,考生要紧密贴合表格中的三个要点:首先,阐述共享单车的优点;其次,列举共享单车带来的问题;最后,根据问题给出个人建议。
2.近年来,各大城市雾霾(haze)情况越来越严重,整个国家的空气污染状况令人担忧。请分析空气污染的现象,原因,应对措施,写一份英文的倡议书,呼吁大家保护环境,减少对空气的污染。 要点提示:
(1)我国空气污染的现象。(至少写2点) (2) 空气污染产生的原因。(至少写2点) (3)减少空气污染的措施。(至少写2点) 要求:
(1) 80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。 (2) 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 Dear students ,
As we all know , hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years . That warns us of the serious
airpollution____________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear students,
As we all know, hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years. That warns us of the serious air pollution. Big factories, power plants and cars all can cause air pollution. For example, chemicals in the smoke from power stations cause a lot of damage. Besides, the people's activities are also the sources of air pollution such as throwing the rubbish and smoking. What's more, the more trees are cut down, the less polluted air can absorb. Air pollution is becoming more and more serious, so we should take some measures such as planting more trees and stop factories from sending out waste air, what's more, we had better walk or take a bus. Protecting the environment is our duty. Everyone should play a part in saving the earth. 【解析】 【详解】
这是一篇材料作文,根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下整个国家的空气污染状况。所提供的材料中列举了近年来,各大城市雾霾(haze)情况越来越严重,主要从空气污染的现象,原因,应对措施三个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有
信息,并适当发挥。写作时,避免使用汉语式的英语,尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确,表达要符合英语习惯,注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系,表达具有条理性。 【高分句型一】
We had better walk or take a bus. 我们最好步行或乘公共汽车。这里had better表示最好,后面跟动词原形,take a bus表示乘公共汽车。 【高分句型二】
Protecting the environment is our duty. 保护环境是我们的职责。这里Protecting the environment 做主语,用的是动词的ing形式。
3. 亚洲文明对话大会近期在北京召开,你的印度朋友Danny收看了大会相关报道,对华夏文明产生了浓厚的兴趣,来信向你了解中国文化。假设你是李华,请根据以下内容提示用英语写一封回信给Danny。 要点 历史文化 文明行为 身边文明 内容 历史悠久,文化各异;传统节日,多彩习俗(举一例) 相互尊重,以礼相待;互学共鉴,共同成长(或自拟) 校园文明(自拟一点) 注意:1. 词数90词左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。 2. 回复必须包括所以要点,可是当发挥,是短文连贯,通顺。 3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 参考词汇: civilized 文明的 Dear Danny,
I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization(文明) of China, I would like to share something with you.
I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hear from you soon. All the best, Li Hua
【答案】Dear Danny,
I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization(文明) of China, I would like to share something with you.
Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world. China is a country of
56 nationalities. Different nations have difficult cultures. In my country, we have many traditional festivals, such as, the Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Festival and the Dragon Boat Festival . They are also called “three major Chinese holidays” in China. Here are the customs of eating Zongzi and racing dragon-boat on the Dragon Boat Festival.
China is a nation of etiquette (礼仪). Chinese people can respect, trust and help each other. We all learn and grow together. Everyone in my school should protect the whole public environment. Climbing the trees, picking the flowers and throwing garbage at random are not allowed there.
I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hearing from you soon. All the best.
Li Hua
【解析】 【分析】
本文要求给你的印度朋友Danny写一篇关于华夏文明的回信。 【详解】
文章需要介绍下中国的文化。表格中列举了三个要点,写作时注意不要漏写。平时注意多多积累句型、短语。细心检查避免疏漏。以图表展示的作文要以“读”为主,首先要认真读懂图表中的要求,对所给信息加以分析、推断、筛选、概括,去粗取精;在写作时目的要明确,要注意内容的准确性和严肃性。 【点睛】
写作中注意语义通顺,符合逻辑关系,上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。如but, so, then等。可以适当使用高分句子。本篇文章写的好的句子有:Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world.中华文明是世界上最古老、最悠久的文明之一。China is a nation of etiquette(礼仪),中国是一个礼仪之邦。
4.马上要初中毕业了,大家都是依依不舍的。班主任决定在下周举办一场“My Life At School” 主题 班会 , 邀请全班同学参加。请你根据以下提示,写一篇发言稿。
美好的回忆 1.与同学融洽相处; 2.得到老师的帮助; 3.获得交换生机会; 4.参加志愿者活动。 不开心的事情 1.好朋友李华转学; 2.不擅长语文写作。 1. 升上理想的学校; 未来展望 2. 能结识更多朋友; 3. 请你补充(至少两点)
My Life At School
How time flies! It's unbelievable that I'm going to graduate from my beloved school. 【答案】My Life At School
How time flies! It’s unbelievable that I’m going to graduate from my beloved school. There are many things to remember.
In the junior school, I got along well with my classmates. The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of becoming an exchange students and spent two months in Australia. I learned a lot from the experience. I also remember I served as volunteer to help others. Certainly, there were also unhappy things. My good friend Li Hua went to another school. I was very sad. Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through emails. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing.
I hope I can go to a dream school and make more new friends. I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college. 【解析】 【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以My Life At School为题,写一篇发言稿。题目中利用表格的形式,展示了文章的具体内容,学生们可以此为提纲进行写作。审题可知,这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时,注意根据表达需要使用正确时态,并注意谓语动词的正确形式。内容应主要包括三部分:首先是初中三年里的美好回忆;然后是不开心的事情;最后展望自己未来的高中生活。表格中有非常具体的提示,但不能逐词翻译表格中的短语,应把他们变成自己的话,并用英语表达出来。写作时应注意:文章中应包括表格中的所有信息,不能遗漏要点;第三部分的内容中还需要自己发挥想象力进行补充,注意应合情合理,与上文很好地衔接。另外注意句式结构要符合英语的表达习惯,用完整的句子表达。句式结构可以简单句为基础,穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式的使用,提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用适当的连接成分,使文意连贯、自然。 【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文,短文作者根据题目要求,回忆了自己的初中生活,并展望了未来。短文有以下几个特点:首先文章内容完整,结构清晰。短文分三段,第一段基本是题目中给出的开头,作者使用一句话引出下文;第二段是主体,介绍了过去美好的回忆以及不开心的事情;最后一段对未来进行了展望。各部分内容安排合理,有层次、有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,语法规范,用词准确,注意了动词正确形式的变化。句式结构完整,符合英语的表达习惯。语言准确、得体,表达自然、流畅。短文中使用了丰富的句型和短语,如The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most