译林版 中考英语 专题4 书面表达

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【答案】After lunch, Li Hua picked up the plate and wanted to send it to the kitchen. He bumped into his brother named Li Zhong, and the plate fell in two. Li Hua was worried and going to put the broken plate into the trash can. His brother stopped him and said, \paintings?\while, two pieces of the plate turned into two beautiful fishes. They were very happy. 【解析】 【详解】

这是一篇看图作文，要求根据图画叙述一个故事。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般过去时，人称为单数三人称，注意主谓一致问题和一些常见句式的应用，比如：He bumped into his brother named Li Zhong,；Why not turn them into paintings?等句式的应用，使短文内容表达丰富。此外，picked up, bumped into, fell in two, put into, after a while等词组的运用也让文章增色不少。 【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。切忌堆砌词语和句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子连贯流畅。

6．（·山东中考模拟） 写作

假定你是李华，在一位名叫Tiger Mom的学生家长的博客上，你看到以下内容。 请你根据博客内容，写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复。

I’m the mother of a fourteen-year –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ? 写作要点：1. 表明自己的看法。 2. 陈述自己的理由。 3. 提出至少2条建议。 【答案】Hi,TigerMom,

What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China.My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.

Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university

admission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored. There are

many examples around us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in

society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.

So I suggest that you take your friends' advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl；let her

have more friends and social activities；and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do. 【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文，对学生家长的博客进行回复。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：My idea is that……，There are……，Some all-A students in school have…….，The reason is……，So I suggest that……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头表明自己的看法，接下来陈述自己的理由，最后介绍自己的建议。此处turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, make mistakes, of one’s own等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

7．（·宁夏银川二中中考模拟）假设你是李华。上周末你和同班同学去绿色农场郊游,大家玩的很开心。请你通过e-mail将此活动过程告知你的好友Tom，并简要谈谈你的感受。要点如下：

The trip to the Green Farm When Where How What Safety tips 4月22日早上8:00出发。下午5:00返回。 学校大门口集合。绿色农场效游。 乘坐校车。 野炊、摘西红柿，放风筝等（至少提及三项活动）。…… 不要到河里游泳；不要单独行动……: 参考词汇：get close to the nature（亲近大自然） 写作要求：1、词数60－80；（开头和结尾已给出） 2、文中不能出现真实的校名或人名； 3、所给的要点必须都用上； 4、紧扣主题，适当发挥。 Dear Tom,

How’s it going? Last weekend, I went to_______________

Yours, Li Hua

【答案】Dear Tom

How’s it going?Last weekend ,I went to the Green Farm for a trip with my classmates.We set off at 8:00 in the morning on 22nd April.We came back at 5:00 in the afternoon.We met at the school gate.We went there by school bus . We had a picnic,picked tomatoes,flied kites and so on.The teacher told us not to swim in the river and do anything alone.We had a chance to get close to the nature.We had a good trip. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【详解】

这是一篇图表，要求介绍自己上周末和同班同学去绿色农场郊游,大家玩的很开心。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，一般过去时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

8．（·浙江中考模拟）书面表达

61.针对运用微信投票越来越流行的现象，英语俱乐部就“是否愿意为别人投票选举”这一话题展开来讨论。请你根据提示，以“ I ____ （am/am not） willing to vote for others” 为题写一篇短文，向校刊投稿，选择你认同的一种观点，并阐述自己的理由。 Be willing to vote for others 投票方式有趣，方便，免费 可以用朋友圈（circle of friends）支持自己喜欢的人 …… Be not willing to vote for others 投票方式不公平 浪费时间，无聊 …… 注意：1. 根据你认同的方式，将标题补充完整，短文包括表格中所提供的相应内容，省略号内容必须补充完整

2. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名，词数：80-100 3. 短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。 I _____ willing to vote for others

Would you like to vote for the ones you like on WeChat? Different people have different ideas. ________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 【答案】I am willing to vote for others

Would you like to vote for the ones you like on We chat? Different people have different ideas. As for me, I am willing to vote for others on we chat.

Voting for others on We chat is not only interesting but also free. It is convenient to do that as

long as we have a mobile phone. Besides, if we use We chat, we can use the circle of friends to support people we love. What’s more, it’s a good way to let more people to get to know the people we love.

In a word, I think it’s a good idea to vote for others on We chat and I would like to do that. 【解析】 【详解】

本篇是一篇议论文，首先要要题目补充完整，说明自己的观点是赞成还是反对。文章分为三步走：第一段摆出自己的观点；接下来第二段陈述自己的观点，即说明自己的理由；最后一段对自己的观点进行总结。本篇文章观点明确，在陈述自己观点时，用到

Besides…What’s more….等使文章很条理性和连贯性。最后In a word, I think….对自己观点进行最后总结。非常好的一篇文章。

9．（·浙江中考模拟）今年我国首次将高考作弊列入刑事处罚，称为史上最严高考．此事引起社会广泛关注．作为一名中学生，请你根据以下提示，就\学生考试作弊\这一话题，谈谈自己的看法． 作弊行为 作弊原因 你的观点 携带纸条或电子产品 努力不够，想考好；… … 要求：

1．词数80-100；开头已给出，但不计入总词数．

2．文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其它相关信息，否则不予评分． 3．参考词汇：exam-room 考室exam-cheating 考试作弊 electronic products 电子产品 micro-earphones 微型耳机 competing environment竞争环境

It's very common for students to cheat in the exams．This year,our country has passed a law that fights against this kind of law-broken behavior．It is reported that …_______

【答案】It's very common for students to cheat in the exams．This year，our country has passed a law that fights against this kind of law-broken behavior．It's reported that some students carry some important information or notes into the exam-room．Some students copy others' answers．What's more，others use electronic products，such as mobile phones，micro-earphones to pass on the answers．

There are many reasons for students to cheat in the exam．Some students are too lazy to work hard．They want to get good grades in order to enter a good high school or a good

university．Some students have too much pressure from their parents and teachers．They only want to make them happy．

In my opinion，it's dishonest of the students to cheat in the exams，and it's unfair for other students．In order to create a fair competing environment，we should say NO to the exam-cheating．

【解析】 【详解】

高分句型一：Some students are too lazy to work hard．一些学生太懒了而不努力学习． 句中使用了\太…而不能…\结构。

高分句型二：In order to create a fair competing environment，we should say NO to the exam-cheating．为了营造公平的竞争环境，我们应该对考试作弊说不．

高分句型三：it's dishonest of the students to cheat in the exams．学生考试作弊是不诚实的

句中使用短语有：“in order to do sth 为了做某事”，“say No to…拒绝…”，“copy others' answers抄袭他人的答案”，“get good grades取得好成绩”。

10．（·济阳县第二实验中学中考模拟）书面表达

请根据图片提示，用英语写一篇120词左右的短文。 内容包括：

1.完整叙述图片内容； 2.简要陈述个人观点。 要求：1.可进行适当发挥；

2.不得出现真实人名、校名、地名等相关信息。

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【答案】I can see a boy and a girl in the picture. They are coming back from school. On their way home, they find so much rubbish outside the dustbin and decide to put it into the dustbin. The boy also comes up with an idea. He puts up a sign on the dustbin to remind people of protecting the environment. The city is our home. We should protect it. Therefore, when we see someone litter, we should stop them and pick up the rubbish. The environment should be protected by