2024-2024年中考英语书面表达经典题型带答案1
一、中考英语书面表达(含答案详细解析)
1.假如你即将在学校英语兴趣小组的活动中发言,请你用英语写一篇发言稿。要点提示如下:(1)几个月前,奶奶晚饭后去跳广场舞(do square dancing)。(2)从那时起,奶奶喜欢上了广场舞。(3) 现在,奶奶比以前健康了,有了很多朋友。(4) 有些邻居有意见,认为音乐很吵,无法入睡。(5) 你认为人们可以跳广场舞,但…… 要求:(1)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 (2)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。 Boys and girls,
I’m very happy to speak here and I’d like to talk about my grandma.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you! 【答案】Boys and girls,
I’m very happy to speak here and I’d like to talk about my grandma.
A few months ago, my grandma went to do square dancing after supper. Since then, she has been in love with square dancing. Now, she is much healthier than before. What’smore, she has a lot of friends. However, some neighbors have a complaint against the people who do square dancing. They think that the music is so loud that they can’t fall asleep at night.
In my opinion, people can do square dancing because it is a good way to keep healthy. But they should think about the feelings of others and they shouldn’t make a lot of noise. That’s all. Thank you! 【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文,根据要点提示写一篇学校英语兴趣小组的活动中的发言稿。要注意随着文章推进时态的变化,一开始应该选择一般过去时,而后面应该选用一般现在时,最后表达自己观点的时候也应该使用一般现在时。人称为第一,三人称,注意主谓一致关系,构思文章框架,列举出可能会用到的好词好句,记住千万不能漏写信息要点。参考词汇就是必用词汇,一定要运用到文章当中。在写作中注意运用恰当的连词,使文章更加顺畅,自然。
2.今天手机在我们日常生活中已广泛使用。但中学生在学校是否应该持有手机,一些学生和老师有不同的观点。你们学校的校刊英文版正在就此举行征文活动,请根据下列表格提示的内容,用英语写一篇征文。
一些学生 一些老师 你的观点 观点 赞成拥有 反对拥有 理由 方便与家长联系; 有学生用手机玩游戏;有学生用手机作弊; 1. 2.
要求:
1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;`
2. 必须包含表格所给的提示信息,并作适当发挥;
3. 词数:80-100词左右(征文的开头已给出,不计入总词数)。 Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life
today._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life today. With the development of economy, mobile phones are more and more widely used in our daily life. However, some parents and teachers have different ideas about whether the students should use mobile phones at school.
Some students are for it. They think that it is convenient to contact with parents. Mobile phones will make them more interested in learning so that they can learn more quickly and easily. Some teachers are against it.They think that some students can't control themselves and often play games. What's worse, some students cheat in exams by using mobile phones. Besides, using mobile phones too much does great harm to students' eyes.
In my opinion, I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way. Firstly,students can learn more knowledge using mobile phones. At the same time, parents and teachers should do something to help students. Only in this way can mobile phones be of help to their studies. 【解析】 【详解】
本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点,不可遗漏。需在平时积累相关的词汇,写作中注意语义通顺,符合逻辑关系,上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。如but, so, then等。可以适
当使用高分句型。 【点睛】
高分句型:I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way.我认为正确的方式使用手机对学生是有帮助的。 I think+宾语从句。
It is+形容词 for sb to do sth做某事对某人来说是…的。
3.临近毕业,学校在学习小组内开展了初中阶段自评和组评活动,假设你是 Moonlight 小组 的组长,请根据下面表格中的信息和提示,为你的组员 Tommy 进行综合素质的评价,写一 份素质报告. Name Characteristics Hobbies Honour Problems Your suggestions Tommy 聪明、大方(各举一例) 喜欢看书,认为看书有很多好处(请列举 2 个好处) 他在家帮助做家务。在学校和同学相处融洽。上学途中遵守交通规则(举 一例)。今年,学校授予了他优秀学生奖(Award for Best Student) 面临考试,遭受压力痛苦,他没有充足的睡眠. (根据实际情况提 2 点建议)… 要求:1、表达清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯;2、要点必须包括所有相关信息,并作适当发挥;3、词数:100 词左右;4、不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等 Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight.
【答案】Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his friends.He likes reading because he thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has a good effect on children’s growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school, he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crosses the road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year. However, Tommy is stressed when the exam comes. And he doesn’t have enough sleep. I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. It’s better for him to manage his time wisely so that he can have enough time to rest. 【解析】
这篇作文要求我们按照表格里的内容介绍一下Tommy的情况,为Tommy写一篇综合素质的评价报告。在表格中有非常详细的关于Tommy各方面的内容,我们需要用正确的英语把这些内容有条理的表达出来。表格中涉及的内容较多,写作时要注意表达的条理性。这篇作文应主要使用第三人称来写。在最后要给Tommy提一些建议,这一部分应该用第一人称。同时注意表达的准确性,尤其是表格中的第五项和第六项内容。
【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的范文。这篇作文内容完整,包含了表格中的所有内容,没有遗漏要点。表达准确,注意了被动形式的使用,如He was rewarded by our school this year.。写作时注意了条理性,使文章具有层次感,条理清楚。短文注意到了长短句的结合,并恰当的使用了一些连词,使文章表达的连贯。如He is always ready to help others.、He not only likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news.、He is good at running. He won the first place in our school sports meeting this year.等。
4.书面表达
假如你是华,你的英国笔友对中国文化很感兴趣,想到中国旅行感受中国文化。你想请他来你的家乡一安徴一游,请你根据以下提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件。 1位置:中国东部,安做省南部: 2.气候:春暖花开,秋季凉爽 3.景点:山和古村落: 4.文化:茶、黄梅戏 5.建议
提示词:黄梅戏 Huangmei Opera 注意:1.词数80-100
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。 3.文中不得出现自己真实的校名和人名 4.开头和结展己给出,不计入总词数 Dear Dave
I know that you are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not come to Anhui, my home town, to have fun? 【答案】Dear Dave,
I know you are interested in Chinese culture and I’m glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not come to Anhui, my hometown, to have some fun.
Anhui Province lies in the east of China. The best time to come here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats. There are many famous places to see. For example, Mt. Huangshan, where you will see wonderful plants and special rocks. Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on. As a fan of Chinese culture, don’t forget to try green tea in Anhui which smells good and tastes better. What’s more, come and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down! Welcome to Anhui! I’m looking forward to seeing you here! Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给自己的笔友Dave写信,邀请他来你的家乡—安徽一游,题目中列出了文章的提纲,审题可知,短文应从以下几个内容叙述:首先介绍家乡的位置;然后介绍来这里最好的时候;接下来是介绍家乡的景点和文化,并给出建议。短文应
使用一般现在时,注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应合理安排几个内容,分清主次,并注意上下文的连贯。另外,英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的,因此写作时不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译,应从句子的整体结构出发,写完整的句子。如可以使用简单句结构,易于掌握,不容易出错。但为提升文章档次,也应穿插一些并列句结构或复合句,以及使用一些复杂结构,如非谓语动词、被动语态等。 【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文,短文作者根据题目要求邀请Dave来自己的家乡旅游,并介绍了家乡的景点和文化。短文有如下几个特点:首先文章内容完整,包含了题目中要求的所有内容,并对细节进行补充和修饰,使内容更加充实、丰富。短文先对Dave发出邀请,然后具体介绍了家乡的位置、景点、文化等,并提出了建议。全文叙述清晰,层次清楚,主次分明。第二,短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,语法规范,用词准确,句式结构完整,符合英语的表达习惯。短文以一般现在时来叙述,注意了谓语动词第三人称单数形式的变化。句式结构以简单句为主,也使用了并列句、宾语从句、状语从句等复合句,还有一些好的句型,如The best time to come here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats、Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on.、What’s more, come and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!、I’m looking forward to seeing you here!等。
5.书面表达
每个人都有自己心爱的物品,相信你也拥有一个自己心爱的物品吧!请以“A(n) _____ I have”为题,描述一个或一件你心爱的物品,并谈谈你是如何得到它的,以及它存在的意义。
要求:1. 请在题目空白处填上你心爱物品的名字; 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称; 3. 语言表达准确,短文连贯通顺,80词左右。 A(n) _________ I have
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】A(n) toy gun I have
Everyone has an object that she/ he like best. So do I.
In my drawer, there is a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth. It’s a black toy gun and it can shot some small plastic pills for ten meters. When I was young, I played with other kids with my toy gun. They all admired me and put me in the place of leader. I was so happy then.
When I was a little boy, I liked watching the war movies best. I was eager to have my own toy gun. One day, it was my birthday. I asked for it when my father came back. My family was poor then and my father didn’t promise me. From then, father worked harder and came back more lately. A