九年级下册英语英语书面表达汇编解题技巧及经典题型及练习题(含
答案)及解析
一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1.(·北京中考模拟)假如你是李华,你们学校准备组织学生本周五去北京世园会参观。你打算邀请外教 Peter参加。请用英语写一封电子邮件,告诉他集合的时间和地点,在那里可以做什么,以及参观时需要准备什么。 提示词语: school gate, nature, culture, food and drink 提示问题: ●When and where are you going to meet? ●What are you going to do there?
●What do you advise Peter to prepare for the visit? Dear Pete, How is it going?
I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition in
Yanqing.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I'm looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua
【答案】 Dear Peter, How is it going?
I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition. We will meet at the school gate at 7:00 a.m. this Friday. Then we will go to Beijing International Horticulture Exposition together. We can do a lot of things there. We can not only enjoy the special and beautiful plants but also learn different cultures in various indoor or outdoor shows. We plan to stay there for a whole day. You'd better wear a pair of comfortable sports shoes and take some food and drinks with you.
I'm looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【详解】
1. 题干解读:这是一篇给材料作文,属于应用文写作。本文已经给出了主要写作要点,动笔前要先认真阅读要点,写作中,应注意描述的全面性,尽量将提示的内容利用上;提示的问题就是写作的基本方向,然后围绕要点适当发挥即可。
2. 例文点评:文章采取邮件格式,时态以一般将来时态为主。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,语言准确,语意连贯,表达清楚,具有逻辑性。
3. 高分亮点:
短语:school gate;invite sb. to do;a lot of;plan to do。 句型:not only…but also;You'd better …;I'm looking forward to…。
2.(·北京中考模拟)“书山有路勤为径, 学海无涯苦作舟”, 成功不会从天而降, 美好的未来需要靠不断努力来创造?
某英文网站正在开展以“天道酬勤” 为主题的征文活动?假如你是李华, 请用英文写一篇短文投稿, 讲述你通过勤奋, 取得进步甚至成功的经历, 并谈谈你的感受? 提示词语: diligence (勤奋), make progress, effort, proud 提示问题: ? What did you achieve by working hard? ? What did you do to make it? ? How did you feel about it?
【答案】Diligence is a must for us to reach our goals. I never realized it until I tried every effort to win the English speech competition last year.
It was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. To give a better performance, I made full use of my spare time to prepare for it. I recorded my lines and asked my foreign teacher to correct my pronunciation. Then I kept practising day and night. Besides, I seized every chance to speak in front of my family or friends. The more I practised, the more confident I became. In the end, I won the competition and got a prize.
It was so great that all my efforts paid off. I felt so proud of myself. 【解析】 【详解】
这是一篇话题作文,根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下你通过勤奋, 取得进步甚至成功的经历。所提供的材料中列举了“书山有路勤为径, 学海无涯苦作舟”, 成功不会从天而降, 美好的未来需要靠不断努力来创造。主要从:你努力工作取得了什么成绩??你是怎么做到的??
你觉得怎么样?这几个方面去介绍。时态为一般过去时,人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料和提示词的所有信息,并适当发挥。写作时,避免使用汉语式的英语,尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确,表达要符合英语习惯,注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系,表达具有条理性。 【高分句型一】
It was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. 这对我来说是一个很大的挑战,因为我对自己的英语口语没有那么自信,在公共场合说话也很害羞。
句子because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public.是由because引导的原因状语从句。 【高分句型二】
The more I practised, the more confident I became. 我练习得越多,就越自信。 这句话用到了“the+比较级,the+比较级”结构。表示“越……,就越……”的意思。
3.(·浙江中考模拟) 为响应我市全面创建国家文明城市的号召,丽水市中小学开展“文明城市,健康生活”为主题的英语征文活动。请你以“The Civilized City, the Healthy Life”为题,根据表格中的图片及文字提示,简要描述并适当发表自己的观点,写一篇英语短文。 Subject The Civilized City, the Healthy Life Ways of doing Your opinion ride bikes, reduce air pollution, throw rubbish into the bins, keep the city clean, plant more trees,… ……(至少2条) 注意:
(1)词数80-100左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数; (2)文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名。 The Civilized City, the Healthy Life
As a citizen of Lishui, it’s our duty to____________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________
【答案】The Civilized City, the Healthy Life
As a citizen of Lishui, it’s our duty to help build a civilized city so that we can live a healthy life. We can reduce air pollution by riding bicycles. It’s better for us to put rubbish into the rubbish bin. In this way, we can keep our city clean. And we’d better plant more trees to protect the natural environment.
In my opinion, I’ll try my best to make our city cleaner and more beautiful. Firstly, I can save water by taking shorter showers. Secondly, I can save energy by turning off the lights when I leave the room. In a word, everyone can do something to make a difference. 【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇话题作文。话题是“The Civilized City, the Healthy Life”;并给了一些提示和注意事项:(1)词数80-100左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名。动笔前要认真阅读材料,不可遗漏要点,要用上提示词,并适当发挥,要添加些内容,使文章看起来更充实,最后写出你的观点。注意主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。注意单词拼写,不要犯单词拼写错误,字数要符合要求。
【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的作文,本文很好地完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点;要点全面,结构连贯;语言规范,叙事清楚,词汇及时态运用正确,能够把提示的内容叙述清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,没有单词拼写错误,字数符合题目要求。
4.(·河南中考模拟)书面表达。
因学习压力大,部分中学生的身体健康状况有所下降,这一情况已经引起社会的关注和教育部门的高度重视。假若你是来自九年级三班的李华,请根据以下内容,用英语写一份不少于80词的倡议书。建议大家积极多参加体育活动,提高身体素质。不得出现真实姓名。 要点:1. 锻炼身体的好处: strong, healthy...
2. 锻炼身体的方式: play ball games, running, swimming... 3. 请你谈谈对学校开展体育锻炼的看法和建议。 要求:1. 内容必须包括以上要点,可适当发挥; 2. 开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 语句通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范; 4. 文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。 Dear schoolmates,
I am Li Hua from Class Three, Grade Nine. Health is very important to us teenagers. ____________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua
【答案】Dear shoolmates,
I am Li Hua from Class Three,Grade Nine. Health is very important to us teenagers. Either study or work is based on a strong body. Doing sports every day helps us keep healthy. If we don’t take any exercise, we may feel tired and get sick easily. Just as we often say, “Exercise one hour a day keeps illness away. ”
There are many kinds of sports we can do, such as running, swimming and playing ball games. But we have to do too much homework after school, I hope teachers will give us less homework so that we can have more time to take part in sports. I also hope our school can organize more sports activities for us.
In order to build ourselves stronger and stronger,let’s take active part in all kinds of sports in proper time. Li Hua 【解析】 【详解】
本文属于话题作文。讲述锻炼身体的好处、锻炼的方式,并建议大家积极参加体育活动。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。 亮点说明:这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别使用一些亮点词句,如either...or..., be based on, keep healthy, such as, have time to do, take part in, in order to, stronger and stronger以及all kinds of等,增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。 【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起:
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求,抓住要点,词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲,我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的,而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥,因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪,就可以动笔写作了,在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词,使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外,还要检查语法结构是否合理,有无重复、啰嗦的语言,大小写是否正确,格式是否正确,词数是否符合要求等。
5.(·北京中考模拟)从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计人总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。