新高考英语应用文写作提醒集锦及范文赏析

应用文文体突破

第一节 求职信

求职信开头通常直接说明要申请的职位，其次是简单明了地说明年龄、毕业学校、所学专业等情况，需要说明的是，结尾部分需要表明自己非常喜欢、珍惜这份工作。请牢记几个常用句型：I would appreciate it if I am accepted. / I will make every effort to do the job well if you give me a chance. 一、试题要求

唐山二模

假设你是北京的一位中学生李华，得知你的加拿大笔友Mike一家将来京旅游两天。你有意为他们做导游。请给Mike写一封e-mail表达你的想法，并包括以下要点。

1. 个人优势：熟悉北京，擅长英语；

2. 参观景点：鸟巢，水立方，故宫，长城。 注意：1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2. 100词左右。首尾句已经给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：故宫 the Palace Museum 鸟巢 the Bird’s Nest 水立方 the Water Cube 二、精彩范文 Dear Mike,

I’m glad to learn that you and your parents will come to Beijing for a two-day trip, and I’d like to ① serve as your guide. ② Born and growing up in Beijing, I know the city quite well. ③ Above all, I can speak English quite fluently, so we can communicate with each other easily. I know you ④ have been longing for a visit to the Olympic venues like the Bird’s Nest and the Water Cube, ⑤ therefore, I’ll first take you there. On the next day we can go to the Palace Museum, ⑥ whose splendid construction will surely catch your imagination. Of course, you won’t ⑦ lose the chance to be on the Great Wall, ⑧ In a word, you’ll have a good time with me as your tour guide.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours faithfully, Li Hua

【精彩语句】

① serve as your guide“担当……的向导”比用act as更能体现作者的热情。

② Born and growing up in Beijing使用分词作状语说明主语I的情况，表达清晰，也显示了

扎实的语言基本功。

③ 短语above all在此处起到强调的作用。

④ 现在完成进行时have been longing for的使用突出了对这次游览的迫切要求。 ⑤ 使用therefore增强了上下文之间的联系。

⑥ whose 引导的定语从句补充说明了先行词the Palace Museum的特点。 ⑦ lose the chance to do / of doing表示“失去干……的机会”。

⑧ 使用in a word进行总结，类似的表达还有：all in all，to sum up，in conclusion。

第二节 推荐信

推荐信的基本功能就是客观地说明被推荐人的性格、能力和品行，以便取得招聘单位的充分信任。当然更要突出被推荐人的相应特长、技能、工作经历等。 一、试题要求

重庆高考

国外某网站将举办新一轮网上讨论活动，正面向全球中学生征集话题。假设你是新华中学的学生李华，经常访问该网站。现在请你用英文给该网站发一封电子邮件，向其推荐话题。内容包括： 1.自我介绍； 2.写信的目的；

3.话题：我们应该感恩（thankful）； 4.推荐的理由； 5.预祝活动成功。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.邮件格式已为你给出；

3.邮件中不能出现本人的真实信息。 Dear Editor,

_______________________________________________________________________________

I wish your activity a success.

Yours, Li Hua

二、精彩范文 Dear Editor,

I am Li Hua, a student from Xin Hua Middle School, and in my spare time I often visit your

website, ① from which I know that you are collecting topics for discussion. ② Being interested in it, I want to recommend my topic, ③ which is “We Should Be Thankful”. ④ As you know, we middle school students, the new generation, who were born in the early 1990s, have been

growing up with so much love for us. Some of us always ⑤ take it for granted that our parents or grandparents should take care of us. ⑥ Needless to say, we seldom think of others’ feelings. Therefore, I hope by discussing this topic, we can ⑦ learn to thank those ⑧ who always give us their selfless love.

I wish your activity a success.

Yours, Li Hua

【精彩语句】

①“介词 + 关系代词”（from which）构成的定语从句在起到相应的语法及句意表达功能的同时，出现在文章开头句的醒目位置，会吸引评卷老师的注意，增加得分点。

② 分词作状语表示原因，比直接用原因状语从句更加简洁明了，同时又显示出了作者深厚的语法功底。

③ 这里使用了非限制定语从句形式（which is “We Should Be Thankful”），使用很恰当。 ④ as引导的非限制性定语从句置于句首，as you know也是一个固定短语，又是一个得分点。 ⑤ 短语take it for granted 表示“对……想当然”。

⑥ 短语needless to say 表示“当然；无须说”，起到了加强文章逻辑性的作用。 ⑦ learn to thank意思为“学会感激”。 ⑧ 段尾处的定语从句是引人注意的得分点。

第三节 感谢信

感谢信主要是表达作者对某人或某单位所做的事情的感激之情，在写作中需要注重整体上的因果关系，逻辑关系要清晰。整体写作原则是：真诚、及时、简短和得体。 一、试题要求

山东高考

假设你是李华，曾在美国学习半年，现已回国。你想联系你的美国老师Mr. Smith，但没有其联系方式。请根据下列要点给你的美国同学Tom写一封信： 1. 感谢Tom对你英语学习的帮助；

2. 询问Mr. Smith的近况并索要其联系方式； 3. 邀请Tom在春节期间来中国感受中国文化。 注意：1. 词数100；

2.可适当增加细节。

二、精彩范文 Dear Tom,

① It has been half a year since we parted last time. Now I’m getting on well with everything and have been missing you all the time. I’ve been missing the days in America ② when you helped me a lot with my English study. ③ Thanks to your kind help, I have improved my English a lot. But ④ to my regret, I have lost contact with my teacher Mr. Smith. ⑤ Would you please tell me something about him and tell me how to get in touch with him?

⑥ In addition, ⑦ it would be a great honor for me to invite you to my country during the Spring Festival, ⑧ when you will experience colorful Chinese culture. I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours, Li Hua

【精彩语句】

①“It is/has been + 时间段 + since + sb. did (did动词必须是瞬间动词)”，此句为高级句式结构。

② when引导的定语从句修饰先行词days。

③ 短语thanks to表示“多亏，由于”，此表达式不仅仅说明了原因，更主要的是体现了写信人的感激之情。类似的表达还有：because of，owing to及due to。 ④ to one’s regret表示“让某人遗憾的是……”。

⑤“Would you please…? ”句型的使用让语气更加委婉，符合交流的情景。

⑥ 短语in addition与besides都表示上下文存在递进关系，但短语的使用要优于单词的使用。 ⑦ it作形式主语构成句型“It would be an honor for sb. to do sth.”，表示“做某事是某人的荣幸”。 ⑧ 关系副词when引导的定语从句强调了时间。

第四节 投诉信

投诉信是作者表达对某个单位的行为、服务或者所购商品表达不满的书面形式，需要注意应该有理有据地说明问题所在，证据要充分、令人信服；措辞要婉转，语气不要太激烈，态度不能太强硬。下面就请欣赏2009·黄冈模拟试题中投诉信的精彩例文。 一、试题要求

黄冈模拟

假设你是艾学习，上个星期天去市图书馆看书时发现了以下问题，你写信向馆长Mr. Wang 反映：

1. 实用性的书、新书太少； 2. 书架上的书摆放比较混乱； 3. 阅览室的光线对视力有害； 4. 管理员工作时彼此闲聊。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数。

Dear Mr. Wang,

Last Sunday, I went to do some reading in your library.

So, for the sake of readers, I suggest that you change all those mentioned above as soon as possible.

Yours,

Ai Xuexi

二、精彩范文 Dear Mr. Wang,

Last Sunday, I went to do some reading in your library. While I was there, I found something

unpleasant. Therefore, I am writing to ① voice my opinion, ② which, I hope, would help you to create a more comfortable place for readers. First, there are not enough new and practical books on the shelves, and most books are ③ out of date. Second, some books are not sorted ④ in proper order, ⑤ making it rather difficult for readers to find what they want quickly. ⑥ What’s more, the assistants didn’t offer good service. Instead, they were always chatting. In addition, poor light in the reading-room is bad for eyes.

So, for the sake of readers, I suggest that you change all those mentioned above as soon as possible.

Yours,

Ai Xuexi

【精彩语句】

① voice my opinion表示“表达自己的观点”，在这个短语中，voice用作动词。此表达式比用express my opinion更加新颖、出众。