短文改错专练(四)
Test 1
[2024·济南高三模拟] Dear Mr. Brown，
We have learned that you were going back to America for the summer vacation. To express our thank for your excellent teaching in our school, we have decided have a party for you. The party which will start at 6：30 on Friday evening in the lecture hall. It will possible last an hour. To start with, our monitor will give a speech on behalf of a whole class. Then we would like to invite you to join us and singing some English songs. In the end of the party, we will present you with some gifts and cards, mostly making by ourselves. I believe you will have a good time together.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours sincerely， Frank 答案与解析： Dear Mr. Brown，
We have learned that you were going back to America for the summer vacation.
①are
To express our thank for your excellent teaching in our school, we have decided ∧
②thanks
③to
have a party for you. The party whichwill start at 6：30 on Friday evening in the lecture hall. It will possible last an hour. To start with, our monitor will give
⑤possibly
a speech on behalf of a whole class. Then we would like to invite you to join us
⑥the/our
and singing some English songs. In the end of the party, we will present you with
⑦sing
⑧At
some gifts and cards, mostly making by ourselves. I believe you will have a good time
⑨made
⑩we
together.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours sincerely， Frank ①were改为are 考查时态。根据主从句时态一致的原则，并结合语境可知，对方回美
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国是将来要发生的事情，故用are, be going back to...表示“将要回到……”。
②thank改为thanks 考查名词。根据前面的“our”并结合语境可知，此处应用名词，故用名词thanks“谢意”。
③decided后加to 考查固定搭配。decide to do sth.固定短语“决定做某事”，故在decided后加to。
④删除which 考查关系词。分析句子结构可知，本句是一个简单句，不是一个主从复合句，句中的“will start”作谓语，which多余，故删除。
⑤possible改为possibly 考查副词。分析句子结构可知，本句中的last是动词，表示“持续”，故用副词possibly修饰动词last，在句子中作状语。
⑥a改为the/our 考查限定词。此处表示“代表整个班级/我们整个班级”，故用定冠词the或形容词性物主代词our修饰。
⑦singing改为sing 考查非谓语动词。根据and可知，此处和前面的join并列，应用动词原形。
⑧In改为At 考查介词。at the end of...固定短语“在……结束时”，符合语境；in the end意为“最后”，单独使用，后不跟介词of。
⑨making改为made 考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知，动词make和其逻辑主语some gifts and cards构成动宾关系，且和介词by呼应，故用过去分词作后置定语。
⑩you改为we 考查代词。根据句中的together和语境可知，此处表示“我们”，故把you改为we。
Test 2
[2024·合肥市质量检测] Last month our class organized a hike along the Chaobai River, which run through Hebei, Beijing and Tianjin. Much to my disappoint, I found the river was serious polluted. At that moment, I was determined to do what I could protect it. First, under my teacher's help, I used the equipments from the school lab to test the quality of the river water. But then, I used the data I had collected it to analyze the pollution of the river. Finally, I write a report on the pollution of the river to the local government. I also gave a presentation in class where I suggested that we must make changes to protect our water resources.
答案与解析：
Last month our class organized a hike along the Chaobai River, which run
①runs
through Hebei, Beijing and Tianjin. Much to my disappoint， I found the river was
②disappointment
serious polluted. At that moment, I was determined to do what I could ∧ protect
③seriously
④to
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it. First, under my teacher's help, I used the equipments from the school lab to test
⑤with
⑥equipment
the quality of the river water. But then, I used the data I had collected itto analyze
⑦And
the pollution of the river. Finally, I write a report on the pollution of the river
⑨wrote
to the local government. I also gave a presentation in class where I suggested that we must must make changes to protect our water resources.
⑩should
①run改为runs 考查时态和主谓一致。此处描述的是客观事实，应用一般现在时；分析句子结构可知，which引导定语从句，指代先行词the Chaobai River，是第三人称单数，故把run改为runs。
②disappoint改为disappointment 考查名词。much to one's disappointment固定短语“使某人大失所望的是”，故将disappoint改为disappointment。
③serious改为seriously 考查副词。修饰动词polluted应用副词，所以将形容词serious改为副词seriously。
④protect前加to 考查非谓语动词。句中do what I could为do what I could do的省略；根据语境可知，此处表示目的，故在protect前加to。
⑤under改为with 考查介词。with one's help固定短语“在某人的帮助下”，故将under改为with。
⑥equipments改为equipment 考查名词。equipment是不可数名词，没有复数形式，所以将equipments改为equipment。
⑦But改为And 考查连词。根据上文中的First和下文中的Finally可知，此处是作者保护河流的第二条措施，所以应是顺承关系而不是转折关系，故将But改为And。
⑧删除it 考查代词。该句含有定语从句I had collected，修饰先行词the data，关系代词作从句谓语had collected的宾语而被省略，所以代词it多余，故删除。
⑨write改为wrote 考查时态。根据第一句中的时间状语“Last month”可知，该文描述的是发生在过去的事，故用一般过去时。
⑩must改为should或删除must 考查虚拟语气。此处that引导的是宾语从句，且主句谓语动词为suggest，意为“建议”，that从句的谓语只能用“should＋动词原形”结构，且should可以省略，故可将must改为should或删除must。
Test 3
[2024·长沙一模] Welcome to the Great Wall. Measured more than 6,000 kilometers in length, the Great Wall is known as the long wall in the world. It has a long history of more than 2,000 years. That is amazing about the Great Wall is that
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it is main made of stones and bricks, and all the construction was done by hand. Though it was used to protect the country from foreign invaders, every few hundred meters along with the Great Wall, there was a watchtower. Now, as symbol of China, the Great Wall will become one of the most famous tourist attractions in the world. It is no wonderful that the Great Wall attract hundreds of thousands of foreign tourists every year.
答案与解析：
Welcome to the Great Wall. Measured more than 6, 000 kilometers in length,
①Measuring
the Great Wall is known as the long wall in the world. It has a long history of more
②longest
than 2,000 years. That is amazing about the Great Wall is that it is main made of
③What
④mainly
stones and bricks, and all the construction was done by hand. Though it was used
⑤As/Since/Because
to protect the country from foreign invaders, every few hundred meters along with the Great Wall, there was a watchtower. Now, as ∧ symbol of China, the Great
⑦a
Wall will become one of the most famous tourist attractions in the world. It is no
⑧has
wonderful that the Great Wall attract hundreds of thousands of foreign tourists every
⑨wonder
⑩attracts
year.
①Measured改为Measuring 考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知，动词measure和其逻辑主语the Great Wall构成主谓关系，故应用其现在分词形式。
②long改为longest 考查形容词。根据该句中的“the”“in the world”并结合常识可知，长城是世界上最长的城墙，故用形容词的最高级。
③That改为What 考查主语从句。分析句子结构可知，此处引导主语从句，连接词在从句中作主语，故用What来引导该主语从句。
④main改为mainly 考查副词。修饰动词应用副词，故把main改为mainly。 ⑤Though改为As/Since/Because 考查连词。根据前后句的句意可知，此处表示原因，故用连词As/Since/Because。
⑥删除with 考查介词。along the Great Wall表示“沿着长城”， with多余，故删除。
⑦as后加a 考查冠词。symbol为可数名词，此处泛指“中国的一个象征”，且symbol的发音以辅音音素开头，故在as后加a。
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⑧will改为has 考查时态。根据语境可知，此处表示长城已经成为全世界最著名的风景名胜之一，故应使用现在完成时。
⑨wonderful改为wonder 考查固定用法。It is no wonder that...固定短语“……不足为奇”。
⑩attract改为attracts 考查时态和主谓一致。此处描述的是一般的情况，应用一般现在时；句子主语为the Great Wall，是第三人称单数，故把attract改为attracts。
Test 4
[2024·山西八校联考] Hi, Mike. How are you going to celebrate your birthday the next month? If you hadn't arranged anything, come to the concert to be holding by my favorite band in the city stadium. I'm sure you will not regret it. The concert will be Sunday. Clearly it will be a hit, because the ticket of the concert are sold very well. The only problem is when the performance starts quite lately — at nine p．m. We can take a bus there, so there will be no bus when the concert is over. I will ask your dad to pick us up and you can stay in my home for the night.
答案与解析：
Hi, Mike. How are you going to celebrate your birthday thenext month? If you hadn't arranged anything, come to the concert to be holding by my favorite band
②haven't
③held
in the city stadium. I'm sure you will not regret it. The concert will be ∧ Sunday.
④on
Clearly it will be a hit, because the ticket of the concert are sold very well. The
⑤tickets
⑥selling
only problem is when the performance starts quite lately — at nine p．m. We can take
⑦that
⑧late
a bus there, so there will be no bus when the concert is over. I will ask your dad
⑨but
⑩my
to pick us up and you can stay in my home for the night.
①删除next前的the 考查冠词。next month表示从现在算起的下一个月。the next month表示从过去或将来某时算起的下个月。从全文看，作者现在在询问对方下个月如何庆祝他的生日，显然是指从现在算起的下个月。
②hadn't改为haven't 考查时态。如果你还没有安排任何生日庆祝活动，请来看我最喜欢的乐队在市体育场举行的演唱会吧。表示“你还没有安排”，应该用现在完成时，而非过去完成时，因为这里不存在“过去之过去”。
③holding改为held 考查非谓语动词。此处作后置定语，hold与被修饰词之间是逻辑上的动宾关系且表将来故用不定式的被动式。
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2024版高考英语大二轮复习专题五短文改错专练四
