说明文：地点介绍
[感悟范文]
假设你是李华，你的新西兰笔友Nick将于八月来四川旅游，特来信询问有关旅游景点情况。请根据下表所提供的要点，写一封回信，并表示盼望他的到来。
许多世界著名的风景名胜，如九寨沟(海子；清澈见底；色旅游资源 彩斑斓)、都江堰水利工程(2000多年历史；仍在发挥作用)，以及震后重建的汶川地震博物馆等。 相关信息 气候适宜；交通方便 注意：1.词数100左右，信的格式及开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入总词数)；
2．可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：海子lake; 都江堰水利工程the Dujiangyan Irrigation Project
[范文] Dear_Nick， I'm_glad_to_hear_that_you're_coming_to_Sichuan_in_August.①You've made the wise choice to travel here. Sichuan Province is rich in tourist attractions and enjoys many world－famous places of interest, ②such as Jiuzhaigou and the Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.
Jiuzhaigou is well known for its beautiful lakes, ③of which the water is clear and looks colorful. It can excite visitors' imagination. Another attraction is the Dujiangyan Irrigation Project, ③which was built over 2,000 years ago and is still playing an important part in irrigation today. And the ④newly－built Wenchuan Earthquake
Museum can make all the people present ④call up that ④breathtaking moment. ②Besides, the nice weather and convenient transportation here can make your trip more enjoyable. I'm sure you'll have a good time.
I'm looking forward to your coming.
Yours_sincerely，
Li_Hua [技法讨论]
介绍一个地方，就是对其大致状况进行描述，向人们展示该地方的地貌特征、风土人情、历史文化等。写此类文章应注意以下几点：
1．内容一般包括该地方的位置、面积、人口、历史、气候、特产等。也可以适当地融入人文风貌，简单介绍当地的文化遗址、民间风俗及有趣的生活方式等。但是一定要抓住该地方的主要特色，这样才能给读者留下深刻的印象。
2．写作顺序：介绍地理位置的说明文，它的写作顺序建议如下： “地、面、气、城、著(地名)”，应介绍这个地方的地(地理位置)面(面积人口)气(气候状况)城(两个著名城市)著(与众不同之处)。
3．结构：三段式是最好的选择。开头简要介绍某地的地理位置，第二段详细介绍，第三段进行总结、感想或邀请人们到被介绍的地方游玩。
黄金表达
1．所处位置和地位、历史 be located/situated in ... lie in ...
stand on the top of/at the foot of ...
Located in ..., ×××is a city ...with a history of ...
be surrounded by/with ... face ... neighbor ...
political/commercial/cultural center ... the capital ... 2．面积和人口
It covers an area of ...with a population of ... It covers ..., making it the ...largest city in ... 3．气候
It is warm all the seasons (dry, cold, sunny ...)
The weather is neither too cold in winter nor too hot in summer. 4．地域特色 be famous for
..., known as ..., attracts millions of visitors from all over the world.
be rich in ... be home to ...
...has many places of interest, among which are ...and ... What attracts tourists most is ... 亮点分析：
本篇行文层次清楚，组织材料周密，语言清晰、严谨，写作时能运用合理的连接成分将文章所给信息流畅地表达出来，这是一篇优秀的习作。
①用了导游语言，引人入胜，符合本文的题材。 ②such as，besides等的使用增强了文章的逻辑性。 ③定语从句的恰当运用提高了文章的可读性和层次感。 ④恰当地运用较高级词汇，增加了文章的亮点，提升了文章的档
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