2020届二轮复习书面表达写作技巧之九：如何增加细节
补加语句是常见的“增加细节”的方法，这可以使文章显得错落有致，这样不仅使文章在形式上增加美感，而且使文章读起来铿锵有力，从而使作文在内容上更加连贯、丰满。下面介绍补加语句的几种技法： 目的 充实文章，增强连贯性
方法 根据行文走向，适当增加一些与主题相关的语句，或由要点衍生的句子，既起到前引后联的作用，又能补充一些相关信息，帮助阅卷者理解所写内容。同时，还能协调句式，避免句式单调的问题 特色 协调句式，结构多样
技法1 列举具体的实例进行补充说明 ①我喜欢读书。 I like reading books.
→I like reading books, such as novels, short stories, magazines and newspapers. ②我要花一些时间和父母在一起。
I'll spend some time staying with my parents.
→I'll spend some time staying with my parents, chatting with them and doing some housework. ③我想找一个像我一样喜欢旅行的笔友。
I'd like to seek a pen pal who is interested in traveling just
like me.
→I'd like to seek a pen pal who is interested in traveling just like me. If possible, we can travel together or share traveling experiences.
技法2 增添与所写信息相关的神态、动作、心理描写以及背景渲染等内容
①我有时去村西的小河游泳。
I go swimming in the river of the west of the village now and then.
→I go swimming in the river of the west of the village now and then. The water in the river is very clear.(背景渲染) →Weather permitting, I go swimming in the river of the west of the village now and then.(相关背景) ②旅行了一周后，他回到了家。
After a week's trip, he returned home.
→After a week's trip, he returned home, tired but very happy.(心理描写)
技法3 增加相关信息的时间、地点等内容 ①我要和父母一起去超市购物。
I'm going to do some shopping with my parents in the supermarket.
→I'm going to do some shopping with my parents in the
supermarket and won't be back until about 5：00 in the afternoon.(增加时间)
②我已经带来了你让我归还的这两本书。
I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return. →I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library.(增加地点) [典例观摩悟法]
1．(提醒观众注意)要按时进入电影院。 Be sure to enter the theater on time.
→Be sure to enter the theater on time.Whoever is late will miss the splendid opening.
[分析] 要点句为简单句，补加复合句“Whoever is late ...”，通过指出迟到后果的方式引起观众的注意，同时，也使得句式多样，表达丰富多彩。
2．(谈论善款用途)募捐得来的钱将送给最急需的人。
The money collected in the charity sale will be sent to those in great need.
→The money collected in the charity sale will be sent to those in great need.This will not only help them get through difficulties, but also give them warmth and happiness. [分析] 通过复合句来增加“较复杂结构”，同时也是上一句衍生的“效果”：帮助他们战胜困难，还给予他们温暖和幸福。
高考英语二轮复习书面表达写作技巧之九：如何增加细节
