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微技能之细节描写

1. 表感到害怕 frightened

当看到那只凶恶的狼时，我感到很害怕。

1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思表达清楚。 ______________________________________

2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。 1） _______________________________________ 2） _______________________________________ 3） _______________________________________ 1.At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I felt very scared.

2. 1）At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak. (嗓子发紧，膝盖发软)

2）At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch.(吓呆了，不敢动弹) 3）At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I was seized by a strong sense of horror and my palms were sweating. (被深深地恐惧感所控制，手心出汗)

2. 表感到兴奋 thrilled

当主持人宣布她获奖时，她兴奋极了。

1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思表达清楚。 ______________________________________

2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。 1） _______________________________________ 2） _______________________________________ 3） _______________________________________

1.When the host announced that she won the prize, she felt thrilled.

2. 1) When the host announced that she won the prize, her eyes twinkled with excitement.

2) When the host announced that she won the prize, her heart was thumping with excitement. (激动得心砰砰跳)

3) When the host announced that she won the prize, a wide excitement took hold of her.(兴奋不能自已)

3. 表感到悲伤 sad

一听到那个坏消息，她悲伤不已。

1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思表达清楚。 ______________________________________

2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。 1） _______________________________________ 2） _______________________________________ 3） _______________________________________

1. Upon hearing the bad news, she felt extremely sad.

2. 1）Upon hearing the bad news, her heart ached, tears streaming down her cheeks. (心痛，眼泪直流) 2）Upon hearing the bad news, she, numb with grief, had trouble speaking. (悲伤到失去知觉，不能开口说话)

3）Upon hearing the bad news, she felt seized by a burst of sadness and couldn’t help crying bitterly.(被一股悲伤之感控制，忍不住哭泣)

4. 表感到开心 happy

当妈妈亲吻他时，小baby开心极了。

1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思表达清楚。 ______________________________________

2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。

1） _______________________________________ 2） _______________________________________ 3） _______________________________________

1.When his mother kissed him on the cheek, the baby was happy/delighted/full of joy.

2.1) When his mother kissed him on the cheek, it seemed as if the baby were on top of the world. (非常开心)

2) When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek, his face beamed and his bright smile lit up the room. (眉开眼笑；笑容照亮房间)

3) When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek, his eyes danced with joy and sweetness. (欢欣雀跃)

5. 表ashamed

她感到非常羞愧。

1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思表达清楚。

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2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。 1）_________________________________________________________________________

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3）_________________________________________________________________________ She felt ashamed.

1) She felt so ashamed that she could feel her face burning.(脸上滚烫)

2) So ashamed was she that she could feel the blood rush to her face. (血液涌上脸颊) 3) So ashamed did she feel that she was close to tears. (快哭了)

6. 表感到生气angry Sheldon感到非常生气。

1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思表达清楚。