差（0--3）：没有理解原文，造成概要内容与原文主题不符；有较多语法结构和词汇方面的错误，严重影响了意义的表达，缺乏语句间的连接成分，全文内容不连贯；多个句子抄自原文；白卷、内容太少无法评判或所写内容与所提供内容无关。 第二节应用文（15分） Dear Peter,
I’m delighted to know that you are interested in the 7th Military World Games, and feel it a great pleasure to tell you some relevant information.(要点1） Wuhan, my hometown, saw the opening ceremony of the games on Oct. 18./ The 7th Military World Games were held in my hometown,Wu Han, from Oct. 18 to Oct. 27.（要点2） More than 9, 000 military athletes from 109 countries came to compete in 329 events like shooting, swimming, basketball etc.（要点3）It is said that Wuhan Military World Games, which had the largest number of competitors and events, was the most successful in history. （要点4）
If there is anything else that you’d like to know, please don’t hesitate to contact me.（要点5） Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours, Li Hua
英语作文评分标准:
1、本题总分为 15 分，按5 个档次给分。 2、
3、词数少于 60 和多于 100 的，从总分中减去 2 分。 评
分4、评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及 上时下文的连贯性。
，5、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考 虑。先英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
根6、书写较差以至于影响交际，将其分数降低一个档次。 据文
评分细则： 章的内容
第五档(很好):(13--15分) 完全完成了试题规定的任务
(1)覆盖所有内容要点(2)应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，(3)语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力，(4)有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑完全达到了预期的写作目的 第四档(好):(10-12分) 完全完成了试题规定的任务
(1)虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容(2)应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求(3)语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致(4)应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑达到了预期的写作目的
第三档(适当):(7-9分) 基本完成了试题规定的任务
(1)虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容(2)应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求(3)有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解(4)应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。 第二档(较差):(4-6分) 未恰当完成试题规定的任务
(1)漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容(2)语法结构单调、词汇项目有限(3)有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解(4)较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性信息未能清楚地传达给读者 第一档(差):(0-3分) 未完成试题规定的任务
(1)明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求(2)语法结构单调、词汇项目有限(3)较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解(4)缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯信息未能传达给读者。 录音原文 Text 1
M: You look very happy in this photo. Where were you? It looks like a painting. W: We were on the mountains outside the city. We went hiking there last week. We have some videos from there as well. Text 2
W: OK, I have already booked my flights and my hotel. Now I need to arrange a train ticket. Can I borrow your computer, Dad?
M: It is in my bedroom. Please save my work before using it. Text 3
W: Did you enjoy your holiday? London seems such an interesting place. I can’t decide whether to go there or to Paris for my next vacation.
M: You’re right. It is interesting. You just don’t see that kind of history here in New York. Text 4
M: Could I have the scarf, please? Not the $20 one, but the red one behind it. It says $16.
W: Well, today is your lucky day, sir. That one is on sale at half price today. Text 5
M: My tooth is killing me. The cold weather seems to make it worse. I’m afraid I’ll have to go to the dentist.
W: Yes, you must. Cold weather often makes toothache worse. Text 6
M: Is that a new car you are driving? Blue is my favorite color.
W: Yes, the white one kept breaking down, so I thought it was time for a change. M: Was it white? I thought it was cream.
W: Ha-ha. That’s because I only washed it once in the five years I had it. M: Really? I thought I was lazy washing mine only once a year.
W: Yes, it didn’t really look dirty until two years ago when I drove through some mud.
M: Well, you must make sure you keep the new one clean. Text 7
M: Are you going to play tennis with us this afternoon? W: Who will be there?
M: Mary, Peter, Jane, and me. Come along. We’re only going to the park. It’s not too far.
W: I’m not going because my mother is ill.
M: I’m sorry to hear that. Who else is taking care of your mother as well? W: My brother. He works in a travel agency. So he can only stay with my mother at night. What’s more, I need to be awake bright and early tomorrow morning for my college interview.
M: Well, in that case, we’ll go without you. Text 8
W: So now you work from home. How are you liking it? We miss you at the office. M: It’s great. I can get up in the morning at whatever time I like, and I don’t have a manager watching me all the time.
W: I would love that. But how do you inspire yourself to do your work?
M: With great difficulty. That is the biggest problem I have — making myself do the work.
W: But you are managing to do it.
M: Yes, I’m not complaining. Besides, I don’t have any more travel costs to think of.
W: And you can make your own lunch instead of buying it. That will be cheaper. M: True, although I do have to turn on the heat to keep the house warm all day in
winter, which is a new expense. Text 9
M: I’m really sorry. I always feel sick when I ride on a bus. I think it’s because I can’t see the road ahead.
W: Don’t worry. We’ll soon reach our stop. I thought it would make us tired if we walked all the way.
M: You’re right. We will need all our strength to climb the mountain when we get there.
W: I think there is a chair lift to the top these days.
M: That’s for lazy people. We’ll take the path, like we did just after we got married.
W: Yes, do you remember? We had a tour guide — a friendly guy.
M: He was a nice man. He showed us all the best views. Are there no tour guides now? W: No, I think most tourists like to explore on their own.
M: They would see more with a guide like him. He wouldn’t let us rest. There was always another sight to see.
W: Let’s hope we can see all the views today. Text 10
How do you turn trash into treasure? In the case of furniture, you wait for around a hundred years. That is my opinion. I have been selling old furniture, really old furniture, for 40 years, and people often ask me how I know the difference between something that is junk and something that is good. The answer is usually the age, because in the past, more care was taken making things. The technology might have been worse in the past, but people had time to make things better. People weren’t as rich in the old days, so their furniture was made to last. Nowadays, if something breaks, we throw it away. In the past, things were repaired. Many of the beautiful old chairs and tables I see show signs of having been repaired many times. Do I mind? No, I love it. It gives them character. Of course, there are still some beautiful things being made today, but give me the old ones any day.
福建省福州市2024-2024学年高一上学期期末考试英语试卷 Word版含答案
