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(2017·重庆调研抽测二)Thanks for your concern in your letter about the smog which frequent strikes some areas of China. I’m also very worrying about such a terrible weather. It has brought much inconvenience or rather harm to people’s health such as road accident, bad coughs and even lung cancers and so on.
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专题强化训练7 短文改错(三)[学生用书P91(单独成册)]
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(2017·云南第二次检测)My dad is enthusiastic runner. Influencing by him,I was very sporty before the age of 15. However,after I went to high school,I stopped take physical exercise because of my busy schoolwork. One morning,I ran for less than one minute to catch a bus,but I am quite out of breath. This made me to realize that I was overweight. Then I made a decision which I would take up a sport to help myself get in shape again. A friend of me recommended a swimming pool not far from my house.Now I go swimming several time a week and have started to feel the benefits of regularly exercise.Swimming makes me relaxing
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(2017·海口调研)Sport is the source of all life. When talked about sport,I always feel very excited,because I like them so much. I love playing tennis,but it is my favorite sport. One day,when I came home after school,I turn on TV and watched a tennis match. At first,I was attracted by the two beautiful tennis player. When I watched the match for ten minutes I found it was wonderful. From now on, I started to watch tennis matches. I have learned to play tennis,and I often invite my friends play with me. My love to tennis are more than I could express. I am so luck to have some friends who share the same of interest with me. 答案:
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(2017·唐山一模)Being a teacher is always believed to be one of greatest occupations,because teachers make great contributions for the world. Last week,I got a chance to experience teaching students. Our school asked us to teach some kids live in the countryside. The kids was so happy that they gave me a warm welcome. I teach them English and after class,we played games happily. We had a lot of funs together. When I returned back to school,I missed the students so much. They like me but some of them have kept in touch with me ever since. I felt so proudly of being a teacher. 答案:
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(2017·安徽江南十校联考)During the National Day holiday,I paid a visit my grandma in the countryside.It has been almost two years since I last saw her.In my memory,my grandma was a hardworking but strong woman full of energy. Whenever she saw me,she always hugged me deep. But when I gave her a hug this time,I found that she was much short and thinner than before.Her back was become bent and her hairs turned white.But luckily,she was still health.She could laugh like a child. To my happy, she could cook some delicious food for me. I love my grandma. I know he will always be there, helping me and loving me. 答案:
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专题强化训练8 短文改错(四)[学生用书P92(单独成册)]
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I prefer my English classes to be taught only in English. As we are all know, a good learning environment is vital unless we want to study English well. Classes teaching in English provide students with good environment. However, there are also some problem with this teaching method. As we hadn’t mastered enough English words, sometimes we may find that difficult to follow the teacher. Slow learners may even lose interest on English. Practice makes perfect. To learn English well require a lot of practice. Therefore, I like my English classes to be taught complete in English. 答案:
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(2017·山西考前适应性测试)The person who touched me most is an unknown lady. I study in a city school but lives in a village 15 kilometers away. One afternoon, I receive a call from my family saying my mom was serious ill. I hurried to the bus station, only find the last bus had left. Feel anxious, I decided to walk home. On the way a car stopped and the driver asked me that I needed help. Worried about being cheated, I said anything. But she was such sincere that I finally accepted her offer. When we reached my village, it was dark. Seeing her car out of the sight, I was in tear. Whenever I think of her, I always feel grateful. 答案:
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(2017·山东省实验中学第二次诊断)Last weekend, I helped my grandparents preparing their trip to Beijing. On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I searched for the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Beijing, and some hotel informations. In the afternoon, I go to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there was long queue. After dinner, I put into the suitcase the thing my grandparents would need, such as clothes, glasses,an umbrella, or a map. The next morning, I went to the station to see him off. Waving goodbye with them on the platform, I felt happily for them and wished them a safe journey. 答案:
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