图画作文
P1:描述图画+概括标题
As we can see from the drawing, ??(简单句->添加修饰->组合两部分*->固定格式) *2003 ,2006 ,2007,2012
It is obvious that the picture reveals …… 固定格式不要有太多选择* P2: 阐述寓意
引入->论点->正面->重复->反面->重复
Simple as it is, what the picture …… (With the increasing pace of modern life, ……) It is generally agreed upon that …… 填写表格->句式组合->固定格式 S4 S5 S6 S7 S8 keep confident have confidence remain confident be afraid of challenges give up their goals overcome difficulties make progress (not) achieve success (not) make achievement With …… It is ……
On the one hand, people will do … by doing … In addition, it will be possible … if … On the other hand, if …, people will …
What is more, there are many cases showing that the people who … will …
With the increasing pace of modern life, perhaps no change has characterized the past decade more dramatically than that of people’s view on confidence. It is generally agreed upon that people have confidence. On the one hand, people will overcome difficulties by keeping confident. In addition, it will be possible for people to make progress if they are willing to remain confident. On the other hand, if they are afraid of challenges , people will not achieve success. What is more, there are many cases showing that the people who give up their goals will not make achievement.
举例子
在S6之后,S7之前
Thomas Edison, Michael Jordan,my father
Take the famous scientist/athlete … for example. He … in his early life, and … all his life. S10-S11
In sum, … has become one of the most popular topics discussed not only by * experts, but also by
people in all walks of life. It is imperative for us to take actions to …
In conclusion, people’s view on … plays an important role in determining not only their future, but also the development of the society as a whole. We should bear in mind that it is necessary to … S12
Only in this way can we … (make our future bright, make our world beautiful …)
图表作文
柱状图,折线图,饼状图,表格 P1: 描述图表+概括标题 P2: 解释原因 P3: 发表评论
描述图表 数字变化:
number, amount, percentage increase, decrease, fluctuate
the number of … increased
there was an increase in the number of … the number of … was on an increase 添加修饰
from … to …, by …(… times)
in 2009, in the year of 2009, one year later, within a decade, during the past five years, at the same time, during the same period, meanwhile dramatic, sharp, slight, rapid, slow, gradual
for example
As we can see from the chart, the percentage of Chinese cars increased sharply from 26% to 33% in the year of 2009, while at the same time there was a rapid decrease by 8% in the percentage of Japanese cars, a thought-provoking phenomenon that will arouse concern among many people.
the number of … is/was …
? accounts/accounted for …% of … For example
As we can see from the chart, the percentage of Chinese cars increased sharply from 26% to 33% in the year of 2009, while at the same time there was a rapid decrease by 8% in the percentage of Japanese cars, a thought-provoking phenomenon that will arouse concern among many people. As we can see from the table, the percentage of satisfied employees is 0.0% in the age group between 41 and 50, while unsatisfied employees account for 10% of the age group above 50, a thought-provoking phenomenon that will arouse concern among many people.
S3-S7
S3 引入论点 S3
The chart does reflect a thought-provoking social phenomenon that is not uncommon in China today. S4
I think that there are several reasons for this phenomenon.
It is of no difficulty to come up with several possible factors to account for this phenomenon. S5-S7
写出基本内容->句式->固定格式 To begin with, In addition,
Last but not the least, First, Second, Finally;
First of all, In addition, Last but not the least; 固定句式
it is obvious that ? there is no doubt ?
people (we) can conclude that ?
people (we) have to agree/admit that ?
原因内容
1. 钱(收入,开销,价格,成本),经济(经济发展,衰退) 2. 有影响(更方便,更舒适,更疲劳,更有压力) convenient, comfortable, tired, stressed
3. 很多人都这样
固定句式:
it costs money for ? to do ?
it is expensive (reasonable, time-consuming, efficient, economical, convenient) for ? to do ? there is an increase in the price (cost, income, saving, fee, investment, expense) of ? people spend money in doing ? people save money by doing ?
people earn money in order to do ? E.g.
Chinese cars become cheaper
it costs less money to buy Chinese cars it is reasonable to pay for a Chinese car
it is a reasonable choice for an average family to pay for a Chinese car
over the past decade there is a rapid decrease to less than 100,000 Yuan in the price of most Chinese cars 句式
? have significant impacts on ?
there are significant impacts on ? that are produced by ? it is influential for ? to do ?
P2 e.g. Mobile phone
The chart does reflect a thought-provoking social phenomenon that is not uncommon in China today. It is of no difficulty to come up with several possible factors to account for this. First of all, it is obvious that over the past decade in developing countries there is a rapid decrease in the price of mobile phones. In addition, it is necessary for people in developing countries to keep a mobile phone in their daily life. Last but not the least, we can conclude that with the rapid development of society youngsters in developing countries are willing to spend extra money in replacing their old mobile phones with new models. E.g.
The chart does reflect a thought-provoking social phenomenon. It is of no difficulty to come up with several possible factors to account for this. First of all, it is obvious that over the past decade in developing countries there is a rapid decrease in the price of mobile phones. In addition, it is necessary for people to keep a mobile phone in their daily life. Last but not the least, we can conclude that youngsters in developing countries are willing to spend extra money in replacing their old mobile phones with new models
举例:
For example, according to a recent survey, over 90% of the people in cities in China have at least one mobile phone.
S8: In sum, … has become one of the most popular topics discussed not only by * experts, but also by people in all walks of life. It is imperative for us to take actions to …
In conclusion, people’s view on … plays an important role in determining not only their future, but also the development of the society as a whole. We should bear in mind that it is necessary to …
S9: I feel certain that this trend will continue in our society. 应用文 P1 表明目的 P2 说明内容
P3 表示感谢(歉意)
P1引用题目
I am writing this letter to ? for + 句子 表明态度
I am glad to hear that ? (to tell you that ?) I am sorry to hear that ? (to tell you that ?)
I am afraid that it is high time you did something (took some actions). E.g.
I am writing this letter to make some suggestions for improving the service of our university library. I am afraid that it is high time you did something.
I am writing this letter to make an apology for I forgot to return a music CD to you. I am sorry to tell you that I found it in my luggage.
I am writing this letter to recommend a movie to you. I am glad to tell you that it is one of my
favorite movies.
P2自我介绍
I am Li Ming, a senior student from the department of computer science, who is interested in (is worried about, is concerned about, is responsible for) ? It has been a long time since we met last time. 原因+我决定? (So I decide to ?) I find that A is ?
I find that there is something you need to know. I find that Project Hope is meaningful I find that this CD is important to you
I find that “White Pollution” is serious
内容(建议,解决方案,原因,计划,要求) 第一条. In addition, 第二条 I would like to do ? I am planning to ?
I have made up mind to ? will you please do ??
I would be much grateful if you could do ? 要求
? is considered to be an important factor in our recruitment. Priority will be given to the applicants with ? ? will be taken into consideration P3感谢(歉意) 祝福
I hope that you will have a good time. (Looking forwards to your reply.) e.g.
I am writing this letter to make some suggestions for improving the service of our university library. I am afraid that it is high time you did something.
I am Li Ming, a senior student from the department of computer science. I find that the service of our library is unsatisfactory. So I decide to make some suggestions. Will you please close later at night? In addition, I would be much grateful if you could offer us more seats.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I hope that you will have a good time. Looking forward to your reply.
I am writing this letter to make an apology for I forgot to return a music CD to you. I am sorry to tell you that I found it in my luggage.
It has been several days since I came back to China. I find that this CD is important to you. So I decide to suggest a solution. I would like to send it back to you. Or, will you please buy a new one and I will pay for it?
Please accept my sincere apologies for any inconveniences my fault may occur. I hope that you will have a good time. Looking forward to your reply. 补充
If there are any other questions, please let me know.