selfish person and try to deal with everything calmly and wisely.
It’s very important to get on well with each other. Let’s build a friendly, peaceful and safe society together and make our life better and better. 【解析】 【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如full of，during the basketball game，each other，try to do，turn into，to be honest，neither…nor，care about，too much，deal with等。而固定句型It’s very important to get on well with each other.和Don’t be a selfish person and try to deal with everything calmly and wisely.的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。 【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
6．（·北京中考模拟）题目②
“持之以恒，方得始。”坚持是一种可贵的品格。生活中想要做成任何一件事情，都需要持之以恒的精神。
某英文网站正在开展以“坚持”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿。谈淡你在初中生活中坚持的一件事（爱好，习惯……），你是怎样做的，以及你的感受。
提示词语：keep, practice, difficult, give up, proud 提示问题：1. What did you do? 2. How do you feel?
It s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.
【答案】It's important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.I love running and I have kept running for three years.
When I was in Grade 7，I was not good at sports and running was always my headache.I often failed in my running test.In order to catch up with my classmates，I began to practice running every day after school.Sometimes，I was so tired that I really wanted to give up.But I kept telling myself that I could make it.No matter what kind of difficulties I faced，I tried my best to keep running.Now I do much better in running and I'm very proud of myself.I feel more confident and I'm ready for any challenges in the future. 【解析】 【分析】
本篇是材料作文，根据所给提示写一篇自己在初中生活中坚持做的事；文中写明自己是怎么做的并谈谈自己的感受。 【详解】
1.本篇要求根据所给材料，用第一人称写初中生活中自己坚持做的一件事，根据提示，描写“What did you do?用一般过去时，描写How do you feel?用一般现在时。书写时要紧扣主题，文句通顺。
2.本例文开篇立即点明自己的坚持做的事是“跑步”，正文部分详细地描写了自己起初跑步总是不及格，通过克服困难、不懈地努力，坚持跑步，到现在比以前会跑；结尾谈了这件事对自己的影响；文章结构清晰，前后呼应。
3.本例文出彩之处在于用了很多的短语和重点句型。比如：固定搭配、固定句型It's +adj+ for us +to do sth、love doing sth、keep doing 、be good at、 catch up with、be proud of；不定式in order to；try my best to；状语从句so…that …；比较级do much better in …、feel more confident等；短语多彩、文句表达多样。
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7．（·丹江口市习家店中学中考模拟）初级写作
今天环境变得越来越糟糕，环境问题影响着人们的工作、学习、生活等，而我们的工作、生活、生产等又使环境污染越来越严重……如何保护我们的环境呢？ 请以“How to protect / save our environment / world?”为题写一篇短文。
提示：存在问题：1.水污染越来越严重；2.砍伐森林严重；3.大气污染严重；4.白色垃圾等 .要求：如何改善/保护环境？至少3-4个方面，80-100词。
【答案】The environmental pollution is more and more serious today. We have no clean water to drink because of water pollution．And when trees are cut down，some animals disappear．There is more and more dirty smoke in the air．People's health has been greatly affected by air，noise and water pollution． Many people died of diseases．In order to live a better life，it's time for us to protect our world．
Firstly，we shouldn't throw away rubbish everywhere．And we should recycle，reduce and reuse things，for this saves money and reduces pollution．Use things for as long as possible．Don't use plastic bags．Also，we must plant more trees and stop people cutting them．We hope our world is more and more beautiful． 【解析】 【详解】
写作思路：先仔细审题，这是写好文章的前提．按照要求把所要表达的内容一一呈现出来，一定要确定好文章的重点，做到主次分明．短文可用一些短语和句式，增加文章的色彩．
本篇文章首先以The environmental pollution is more and more serious today.做到开篇点题，指出环境问题变得越来越严重，然后按照题目要求逐一列出现在所存在的问题。提出问题之后接着提出解决问题的办法，其中用到firstly,….Also…等使文章清晰明了，最后提出自己的期望We hope our world is more and more beautiful．文章做到内容完整，思路清晰，词语
运用正确，是一篇很不错的文章。
8．（·浙江中考模拟）书面表达 A small thing
提示：请根据所给题目“A small thing”写一篇英语短文，记叙一件你经历过的小事。 要求：1.语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁，词数100左右； 2. 文中不得使用你的真实姓名，校名，否则以零分计。 【答案】A small thing
It was a sunny and warm day. My father told me he would teach me how to ride a bike. I was so happy at first. However, I fell down on the ground. I cried loudly and wanted to gives up. My father smiled and said we should be a person who never give up. He encouraged me to stand up and continue. After one hour, I could ride the bike without the help of my father.
This is one small thing that I will never forget. It tells me that although we will have all kinds of difficulties in our life, we should never give up.
【解析】 【详解】
本文要记述自己经历过的一件小事, 在时态上用一般过去时。本篇文章,首先开篇点题,指出事情发生的时间及所经历的事件。It was a sunny and warm day. My father told me he would teach me how to ride a bike.中间部分叙述了时间发生的经过，词语at first，However,…. After one hour,的使用使整篇文章浑然一体。最后一段是从这件小事中得出的感悟，It tells me that although we will have all kinds of difficulties in our life, we should never give up. 对这件小事进行了总结，更使文章在思想上得到了升华。文章时态使用正确，表达准确，事件本身思路清晰，是一篇不错的文章。 【点睛】
认真审题，看清题目要求，在描述事件时，要注意清晰表达事情发生的开端，内容及结尾。必要时要适当使用连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅，文章最后注意对整个故事进行总结，最好能够从故事中得出自己的感悟，在叙述故事的同时使文章具有思想性。写完文章后注意检查有误单词拼写错误，语法使用错误，字数是否达到要求。
9．（·河南中考模拟）书面表达。
因学习压力大，部分中学生的身体健康状况有所下降，这一情况已经引起社会的关注和教育部门的高度重视。假若你是来自九年级三班的李华，请根据以下内容，用英语写一份不少于80词的倡议书。建议大家积极多参加体育活动，提高身体素质。不得出现真实姓名。 要点：1. 锻炼身体的好处： strong， healthy...
2. 锻炼身体的方式： play ball games， running， swimming... 3. 请你谈谈对学校开展体育锻炼的看法和建议。 要求：1. 内容必须包括以上要点，可适当发挥；
2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 4. 文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。 Dear schoolmates,
I am Li Hua from Class Three, Grade Nine. Health is very important to us teenagers. ____________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua
【答案】Dear shoolmates,
I am Li Hua from Class Three,Grade Nine. Health is very important to us teenagers. Either study or work is based on a strong body. Doing sports every day helps us keep healthy. If we don’t take any exercise, we may feel tired and get sick easily. Just as we often say, “Exercise one hour a day keeps illness away. ”
There are many kinds of sports we can do, such as running, swimming and playing ball games. But we have to do too much homework after school, I hope teachers will give us less homework so that we can have more time to take part in sports. I also hope our school can organize more sports activities for us.
In order to build ourselves stronger and stronger,let’s take active part in all kinds of sports in proper time. Li Hua 【解析】 【详解】
本文属于话题作文。讲述锻炼身体的好处、锻炼的方式，并建议大家积极参加体育活动。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。 亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如either...or..., be based on, keep healthy, such as, have time to do, take part in, in order to, stronger and stronger以及all kinds of等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。 【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中
心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
10．（·安徽中考模拟）书面表达
假如你是华,你的英国笔友对中国文化很感兴趣,想到中国旅行感受中国文化。你想请他来你的家乡一安徴一游,请你根据以下提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件。 1位置:中国东部,安做省南部: 2.气候:春暖花开,秋季凉爽 3.景点:山和古村落: 4.文化:茶、黄梅戏 5.建议
提示词:黄梅戏 Huangmei Opera 注意:1.词数80-100
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。 3.文中不得出现自己真实的校名和人名 4.开头和结展己给出,不计入总词数 Dear Dave
I know that you are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not come to Anhui, my home town, to have fun? 【答案】Dear Dave，
I know you are interested in Chinese culture and I’m glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not come to Anhui, my hometown, to have some fun.
Anhui Province lies in the east of China. The best time to come here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats. There are many famous places to see. For example, Mt. Huangshan, where you will see wonderful plants and special rocks. Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on. As a fan of Chinese culture, don’t forget to try green tea in Anhui which smells good and tastes better. What’s more, come and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down! Welcome to Anhui! I’m looking forward to seeing you here! Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给自己的笔友Dave写信，邀请他来你的家乡—安徽一游，题目中列出了文章的提纲，审题可知，短文应从以下几个内容叙述：首先介绍家乡的位
（英语）九年级下册英语英语书面表达汇编技巧 阅读训练策略及练习题（含答案）及解析
