言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,最好不要写太长的复合句;尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词,确保正确率;词汇、句式要丰富多样,可以为文章增色添彩。最后检查所用时态、人称是否符合要求;检查段落是否完整,句子表达是否准确,语法、拼写、标点、移行、大小写等方面是否有误等。
20.(·安徽中考模拟)书面表达
李华所在的国际学校正在开展“My Favourite Traditional Festival”交流活动,假定你是李华,请你向来自不同国家的同学介绍中国传统节日——端午节,内容包括: 1. 今年庆祝时间(6月18日)
2. 节日由来:纪念(be in memory of)屈原
3. 吃粽子,赛龙舟,挂菖蒲和艾草(calamus and Ay Tsao)…… 4. 欢迎大家一起体验这个传统节日 注意:1. 词数80~100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息; 4.开头已写好,不计入总词数。 Dear fellows,
The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar. _____________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. 【答案】Dear fellows,
The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar.People celebrate the holiday on June18 this year . People hold the dragon-boat races in memory of Qu Yuan,one of the greatest poets in China. We can watch the dragon-boat races and eat a kind of Chinese food named Zongzi during the Dragon boat Festival. People always hang Calamus and Moxa on the day.We welcome to experience this traditional festival with friends from all over the world. 【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文,向来自不同国家的同学介绍中国传统节日——端午节。结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:People celebrate……,People hold……,We can watch……,We welcome to……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。
点睛:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头介绍了今年端午节庆祝时间,接下来介绍端午节的由来以及庆祝活动,最后欢迎大家一起体验这个传统节日。此处according to, in memory of, a kind of, on the day, welcome to do sth, all over the world等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不
少。