some scientific books or historical ones. And reading can bring so much fun to our life. If we read some jokes or interesting stories, it’s easy for us to keep happy all day. Also, it’s a good way to relax. After a long-day work, just take a book to read, imagining what’s happening in the book, so our brains could get enough relax.
Since reading can help us so much, I enjoy reading a lot. I like to read after school, when I finish my homework. And my favorite time is the summer vacation, I can get lots of nice books to read without worrying about time! And I write down what I think after reading each book! 【解析】 【详解】
这是一篇话题作文,谈谈阅读的好处和你的阅读习惯并号召大家阅读。英语作文要注意人称和时态,注意提供的观点、材料,要注意句子的完整性,谓语动词的正确形式,句子之间的衔接和过渡。英语作文,要忠实于材料,不必扩展,注意用好连词,多用非谓语,慎用较难的句型,一定不能写错句。动笔前先要认真阅读要点,围绕要点组织材料,然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来,在此基础上亦可适当发挥,注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
6.(·云南中考模拟)书面表达 A Special Day
提示:在每个人的生活中,总会有些特别的日子。请根据所给题目“A Special Day”写一篇英语短
文,记叙你特别的一天。
要求:1、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于60个。 2、文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。 3、请将短文写在答题卡上,写在试题卷上无效。 【答案】A Special Day
Today is my father’s birthday, which is such a special day for me, so I want to give him a surprise. My father is a great father, and he always gives me what I want. I told my mother that I wanted to make a dish for my father. She was very happy to teach me. With the help of my mother, I am confident that I can make a good meal. When my father returned home, he was very happy and praised me a lot. He said this was the biggest present for him. 【解析】 【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如such a special day,give him a surprise,a lot,make a dish,want to do,with the help of,return home等。而复杂并列结构My father is a great father, and he always gives me what I want.和Today is my father’s birthday, which is such a special day for me, so I want to give him a surprise./ I told my mother that I wanted to make a dish for my father. / With the help of my mother, I am confident that I can make a good meal. /When my father returned home, he was very happy and praised me a lot.等复杂从句结构的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的亮点。在学习中注意
总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。 【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
7.(·重庆中考模拟)假如你是李华,你校正举办英语读书节活动,你在参与活动的过程中遇到一些困难。请给你的英国朋友Nick写一封email向他求助。 要求:
1.80—120 词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数; 2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考要点:
1.活动情况简介(时间、内容……);
2.遇到的困难(如:缺少相关书籍、英语阅读困难……); 3.请求帮助的事项。 Dear Nick,
How’s everything going?
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Yours, Li Hua
【答案】Dear Nick, How’s everything going?
Our school is holding an English reading festival this June. I’m very interested in it. There are many different activation in the festival such as reading good English books. sharing good stories and so on. It’s a good chance for us to learn more about western cultures. However, I have some problems. First, I don’t have enough books. For example, I want to get some books about western history. Next, I’m not so good at English, I have trouble in reading. Would you please share some good books with me and give me some advice on reading? I expect to hear from you soon. Best wishes!
Yours, Li Hua
【解析】 【详解】
这是一篇书信作文。假如你是李华,你校正举办英语读书节活动,你在参与活动的过程中遇
到一些困难。请给你的英国朋友Nick写一封email向他求助。首先要注意书信的书写格式,文章时态主要用一般现在时,人称主要为第一人称。在写作时,要注意理顺要点,防止漏写;注意紧扣主题,连句成篇,要层次清楚,要点分明,中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,最好不要写太长的复合句;尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词,确保正确率;词汇、句式要丰富多样,可以为文章增色添彩。最后,要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等,还要检查字数是否符合要求。 参考要点:
1.活动情况简介(时间、内容……);
2.遇到的困难(如:缺少相关书籍、英语阅读困难……); 3.请求帮助的事项。
8.(·武汉外国语学校中考模拟)书面表达
长跑是人们热衷的体育活动之一。武汉马拉松(Wuhan Marathon)因独具特色的赛道及赛事组织已成为一年一度的全程盛事。假如你是李华,你的笔友Tom想知道关于武汉马拉松的一些事情。请用英文给他回一封电子邮件,介绍这项赛事。内容包括以下要点: 1.马拉松是非常流行的国际体育项目;
2.通过马拉松,人们可以强身健体,还可以结识新朋友; 3.首届马拉松于年举行,吸引了很多人的关注;
4.赛通途径多个武汉著名景点,如:中山大道、东湖绿道、黄鹤楼,被视为最美的马拉松赛道;
5.补充一至亮点个人想法。
注意:1.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称; 2.次数60-80,邮件的开头已给出,不计入总次数; 3.内容连贯,不要逐条翻译
参考词汇: event n.项目 track n.赛道 Greenway n.绿道 Hi Tom,
I hope you're doing well. In your email, you asked me someting about Wuhan Marathon. Here is the information.
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【答案】Hi Tom,
I hope you're doing well. In your email, you asked me something about Wuhan Marathon. Here is the information. Marathon is a very popular international sport. Through the marathon, people can keep fit and make new friends. The first Wuhan marathon was held in and attracted a lot of attention. The players will pass by many famous scenic spots in Wuhan, such as Zhongshan
Avenue, Donghu green road and Yellow Crane Tower, which are regarded as the most beautiful marathon course.
I think the people in Wuhan likes the event.Most of them want to take part in it. 【解析】 【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给自己的笔友Tom写一封电子邮件,给他介绍关于武汉马拉松的一些事情。题目中给我们列出了具体的写作内容,我们可以按照这些提示来组织语言,并增加一些内容,使文章更加充实。其中第五条需要学生们自己发挥想象力,补充一到两点的个人想法,这一部分是不受限制的,学生们可以自由发挥,但需要注意内容需要与全文大意连贯起来。通过审题可知,这篇短文应以一般现在时态为主,根据表达需要灵活运用,并使用适当的人称,注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时需注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的,不能逐词翻译题目中的内容,应从句式的整体结构出发,使用恰当的词汇、短语和句型。在文章中还应使用一、两个高级句型或复杂句式,提升文章档次。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使文意连贯、表达流畅。 【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文,短文作者根据题目要求给Tom写电子邮件,介绍了关于武汉马拉松的事情。首先短文内容完整,包含了题目中要求的所有信息,并对信息进行加工、处理和补充,使文意更加清楚、连贯。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,文章以一般现在时态为主,个别句子使用了过去时态,谓语动词形式准确,语法规范。文章句式以简单句为主,表达简洁、明了,穿插使用了复杂句式,如宾语从句、定语从句等。调整文章节奏,提升了文章档次。文章中使用了一些较好的短语和句型,如Through the marathon, people can keep fit and make new friends. 、The first Wuhan marathon was held in and attracted a lot of attention. 、The players will pass by many famous scenic spots in Wuhan, such as Zhongshan Avenue, Donghu green road and Yellow Crane Tower, which are regarded as the most beautiful marathon course.、I think the people in Wuhan likes the event.等。
9.(·安徽中考模拟)假如你是李华,你的美国朋友Jack热爱中国的唐诗宋词。最近他对母亲节你在博客里发的《游子吟》(Song of the parting son)很感兴趣,给你写信想了解该诗,请你根据以下提示给他回信: 1.作者:孟郊 2.时间:唐朝
3.内容:母亲为儿子做衣服 4.主题:母爱的伟大 注意:
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称; 2.语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
3.词数: 80-100词左右,信件的开头与结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Jack,
I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son. _______________________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
【答案】Dear Jack,
I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son. Now I’m writing to tell you something about it.
Song of the parting son is one of the most popular Chinese poems. It was written by Meng Jiao, a famous poet in Tang Dynasty. It describes a common matter in daily life—a mother making clothes for her son, which is familiar to most of us. It mainly shows how great a mother’s love can be. In a word, this short poem has touched many people’s hearts. If you have any other questions about this poem, please tell me.
Yours, Li Hua
【解析】 【分析】
这是一篇材料作文。 【详解】
根据内容可知,这是一篇书信类文章。时态是一般现在时。人称是第一人称和第三人称。 英语作文一般分为三个部分:
第一部分:交代写信目的——朋友Jack热爱中国的唐诗宋词。我将给你介绍《游子吟》(Song of the parting son)这首诗。
第二部分:文章主体部分——具体介绍《游子吟》(Song of the parting son)这首诗。 1.作者:孟郊 2.时间:唐朝
3.内容:母亲为儿子做衣服 4.主题:母爱的伟大
第三部分:信的结语——如果对方有任何问题,可以继续问自己,并期待收到对方的来信。
10.(·河北育华中学中考模拟)每个人在成长过程中,都会遇到很所不同的困惑,但为实现梦想我们应该克服困难,解决问题。现阶段,你有什么困惑吗?请以\Present\为主题,并根据以下提示和要求用英语写一篇短文。