2024届高三赢在微点书面表达
审题谋篇
范例：(2016·课标全国Ⅲ)
假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1．表示歉意；2.说明原因；3.另约时间。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 第一步 认真审题，确定要点 体裁 道歉信 人称 第一/二人称 时态 一般现在时 结构 写信目的→具体内容→表达期望 要点 ①表达歉意；②说明失约原因；③另约时间；④再次表示歉意。 第二步 遣词造句，构建亮点
1．我不能守约，因为我要参加重要的班会。
①高级词汇：I fail to keep the appointment, because I have to attend an important class meeting.
②高级句式(表语从句＋非谓语动词)：The reason why I fail to keep the appointment is that I have an important class meeting to attend. 2．如果不这样的话，告诉我什么时间最适合你。
高级句式(省略句＋非谓语动词)：If not,_please keep me informed of what time suits you best.
第三步 美化成文，誊写清楚 范文
Dear Bob，
I'm sorry to tell you that I cannot go to the bookstore together with you this Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important conference that afternoon. I don’t hope the sudden change will cause you too much trouble.
What about going on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we'll have more time to read and select books. If it's convenient for you, let's meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, please let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.
Yours， Li Hua
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一、不可不记的书信类常用词汇 1．常用单词
①activity n. 活动 ②volunteer n. 志愿者 ③information n. 信息 ④preparation n. 准备 ⑤sincerely adv. 诚挚地 ⑥appreciate v. 感激 ⑦grateful adj. 感激的 ⑧convenient adj. 方便的 ⑨invitation n. 邀请 ⑩introduction n. 介绍 2．常用短语
①get along with sb. 和某人相处
②be grateful / thankful to sb. for (doing) sth 感激某人 ③be helpful / beneficial to ... 对……有帮助/有益
④at one's earliest convenience 在某人方便的时候 ⑤look forward to (doing) sth期待 ⑥give/lend sb. a hand 帮某人忙
⑦take sth. into account / consideration 考虑某事 ⑧promote the friendship 促进友谊
⑨express warm welcome/sincere gratitude to sb. 对某人表达热烈欢迎/诚挚的感谢 ⑩develop sb.'s interest 培养某人的兴趣
?as planned/scheduled/arranged 按照计划/安排 ?be qualified for 有资格
二、9组不可不记的书信类万用句式 1．道歉信
(1)吸引阅卷人开头句
①I'm writing to apologize for ... / I am writing to say sorry for ... / I’m writing to make an apology to you for … 我写这封信是因……道歉。
②I am writing to express/convey my heartfelt apology to you. 我写信向你表达真切的歉意。 (2)吸引阅卷人篇中句
③I am sorry for my not being able to attend your party due to the fact that ... 我非常抱歉不能参加晚会是因为……
④The reason why I fail to show up is that I have something urgent to attend to. 我未能出现的原因是我有急事要处理。
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2．求助信
(1)吸引阅卷人开头句
①I'm writing to you to ask whether you could do me a favor. 我写信是想问您能否帮助我。
②I'm sorry to bother you, but I have some difficulties here and I need your help. 很抱歉打扰您，但我有些困难需要得到您的帮助。
③I have some difficulty in doing ...which bothers me a lot. So I have no choice but to turn to you for help.
我在做……方面有困难，这很困扰我。所以我别无选择只能向您求助。 (2)吸引阅卷人篇中句 ④I can't concentrate on my lessons these days, and I failed in the last exam, which worries me a lot.
这些日子我不能专心学习，上次考试我没有及格，这使我很着急。 ⑤Faced with / Facing so many difficulties, I have to turn to you for help. 面对如此多的问题，我不得不向您求助。
3．感谢信
(1)吸引阅卷人开头句
①I'm extremely grateful/thankful to you for your unselfish assistance during ... 感谢你在……期间给予我无私的帮助。
②I'm writing to convey/express my gratitude for your kind/generous help during ... 我写信感谢您在……期间对我友好/慷慨的帮助。
③I would like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely help and assistance. 我想，借此机会表达对您给予我们及时的帮助和支持的感谢。
(2)吸引阅卷人篇中句
④Many thanks for all the things you have done in helping us to ... 非常感谢您为帮助我们……所做的一切。
⑤Thanks to / With your generous / selfless / kind help, I have made great progress. 多亏你慷慨的/无私的/友好的帮助，我取得了巨大的进步。
Without your generous / selfless / kind help, I wouldn't have made such great progress. 如果没有你慷慨的/无私的/友好的帮助，我不会取得这么大的进步。
Thank you for your generous / selfless / kind help, without which I wouldn't have made such great progress. 多谢你慷慨的/无私的/友好的帮助，如果没有你的帮助，我不会取得这么大的进步
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(3)吸引阅卷人结尾句
⑥It was kind and generous of you to do this for me, and I appreciate it more than I can say. 你对我如此慷慨，我真是感激不尽。
⑦I wish there were a better word than “thanks” to express my appreciation for your generous help. 任何语言都不能表达我的真挚谢意。
⑧I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness by ... 如果我有机会通过……报答你的好意，我会非常高兴。
4．建议信
(1)吸引阅卷人开头句 ①I have learned that you have some trouble in .... and I would like to give / offer you the following suggestions. 我知道你在……方面有困难，因此我想给你提如下一些建议。
②You've asked me for advice with regard to / regarding / on ... and I'll try to make some useful / helpful / practical suggestions here.
关于……你向我征求建议，在此，我尽量提出一些有用的/有帮助的/实用的建议。
③When it comes to / As for ..., the following are my suggestions. / my suggestions are as follows. 当涉及/关于……，我的建议如下。
④I'm writing to give you some suggestions / give you a hand. 我写这封信的目的是给你一些建议/帮助。 (2)吸引阅卷人篇中句
⑤In my opinion / As far as I'm concerned / Personally, it would be wise to take the following action. 在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。
⑥When it comes to / As for ..., I would like to suggest /advise / recommend you should ... 当涉及/关于……，我建议你应该……
⑦I think it would be of benefit / beneficial if you ... 我认为如果……，将会受益。
⑧Doing ... is a good / great / better choice. 做……是一个好的/棒的/更好的选择 (3)吸引阅卷人结尾句
⑨I will be glad if you will take my advice / suggestions into consideration. 如果你能考虑我的建议我将非常高兴。
⑩I hope you will find my suggestions / advice helpful / useful / practical / beneficial. 我希望你认为我的建议有帮助/有用/实用/有益。
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5．邀请信
(1)吸引阅卷人开头句
①It's my pleasure // a great honour / privilege for me to invite you to join us. 非常荣幸地邀请你加入我们。
②I wonder if I / we have the honor to invite you to the party. 我想知道我/我们是否能有幸邀请你参加派对。
③I'd like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival. 我想邀请您一起去参观……
It was a privilege to work with him. 和他在一起工作是一项殊荣。 I hope to have the privilege of working with him again. 但愿有幸与他再度合作 (2)吸引阅卷人篇中句
④We are having / planning ... on ... (date) and we feel it would be a great idea if you could join us.
我们定于……(日期)……(活动)，如果你能来参加就太好了。
⑤The following are some details about ... / Here are some details about ... / Some details about ... are as follows. ……的细节如下。
⑥To begin with, we will ... Besides, there will be a number of/various activities such as ... which will ...
首先，我们将……，此外，将会有许多活动，例如……这将…… 3)吸引阅卷人结尾句 ⑦I do hope you will accept our/my invitation if it is convenient to you. 我真心希望你方便的话能接受我们/我的邀请。
⑧We/I would appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your early/earliest convenience.
如果你能尽早在你方便时确认参加，我们/我将不胜感激。
6．询问信
(1)吸引阅卷人开头句
①I have seen your advertisement and I'd like to know something more about your six-week English course. 我看了你们的广告，我想更多地了解一下你们为期六周的英语课程。
②I'm writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding/concerning ... 我写信想看看你是否能提供一些关于……的信息。
③I am ... I wonder if you could provide some specific information about ... 我是……我想知道你是否能提供一些关于……的具体信息。
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2024届最新高三高考英语九种重点作文体裁必背句型
