微笑是一种语言 人人都能懂，传递友谊，拉近距离。 1、参考词汇： 对某人微笑 smile at sb. 误解 misunderstand
2、短文必须包括所有内容要点，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺。 Learn to Smile
I remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.” Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile .
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I remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.” Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile .
First, learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life. If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends, don’t be sad. Just smile at yourself . Smiling at yourself brings back your confidence . Sometimes the one who beats you is not others, but yourself. And smile can also keep you healthy.
Second, learn to smile at others. It will make you communicate better with people. Smiling at others makes yourself happy as well.
In a word, smile is a kind of language belonging to everyone. It passes love and friendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people. Living with a smile ,every day will be shiny. 【解析】
这是一篇表格式的作文，要点是一表格的形式出现，首先要研究表格，找出需要表达的要点，然后加以整合，也可以适当增加使意思更连贯，但要点一定要全，不能漏掉。写作时要注意遣词造句，不能受汉语的影响，要用地道的英语表达，注意时态，语态，单词拼写，语法等问题，用好简单句，适当用复杂句。可以用一些高级词汇。还要注意句子的关联。
6．书面表达
每个人都有自己心爱的物品，相信你也拥有一个自己心爱的物品吧！请以“A（n） _____ I have”为题，描述一个或一件你心爱的物品，并谈谈你是如何得到它的，以及它存在的意义。
要求：1. 请在题目空白处填上你心爱物品的名字； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺，80词左右。 A（n） _________ I have
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】A（n） toy gun I have
Everyone has an object that she/ he like best. So do I.
In my drawer, there is a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth. It’s a black toy gun and it can shot some small plastic pills for ten meters. When I was young, I played with other kids with my toy gun. They all admired me and put me in the place of leader. I was so happy then.
When I was a little boy, I liked watching the war movies best. I was eager to have my own toy gun. One day, it was my birthday. I asked for it when my father came back. My family was poor then and my father didn’t promise me. From then, father worked harder and came back more lately. A week later, father put a box to me. A black toy gun in it! I was moved with tears. In order to get it, father worked late and hurt himself. He died a month later.
Now I hope I can be a soldier and own a real gun to protect my country and family. I will remember my father’s love forever. Every time I miss him, I’ll take out the toy gun and say “Thank you, my dear father!
【解析】写作分析：这篇作文需要就自己最喜欢的物品展开描述，要求是进行描述，并谈谈你是如何得到它的，以及它存在的意义。写作的难度是逐渐加深的，在讨论其如何获得的时候要注意正确使用时态，在谈论意义的时候要注意表达的准确性，避免不熟悉的表达。 写作亮点：
这篇文章讲了自己最喜欢的玩具枪，描述玩具枪的时候有适当的细节补充，例如a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth（用黄布包着的玩具枪），这里用到了过去分词作定语，作者还描述了玩具枪的功能（small plastic pills），顺便还描述了自己小时候玩枪的经历，准确使用了时态。在描述得到的经历的时候不落俗套，讲到了自己的家庭那时比较困难，父亲是通过努力工作为我赚钱买枪的，写作是富有感情的，也通过这段经历为这把玩具枪赋予了一定的意义。最后玩具的意义得到了升华，表达了作者的期望（I hope I can be a soldier），上升到了保家卫国的层面，这样的一篇作文是有深度的，能够让人感动的，是一篇优秀的范文。
7．书面表达
以下图画呈现了林涛和梅梅在公园里发生的事情。请用英语写一篇约100词的短文。 要求：1.完整叙述图画内容。 2.简要陈述你从中学到了什么。
【答案】One day Lin Tao and Meimei were playing in the garden. They found that a young tree
needed watering and it was going to die. So they decided to do something for the young tree. First, Meimei kept the tree straight and pushed the earth hard down with her foot. Then Lin Tao knocked a board into the earth. It said,
“Please take care of trees.” After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of them. Trees are good for the environment. We should protect them. 【解析】
这是一篇看图作文，要求我们仔细观察图片，弄清楚里面发生的事情，用英语将这些内容完整地叙述出来，并简单陈述自己从中学到的东西。因此写作前，要仔细看图片，了解图片中所发生的事情，并提炼出要点，列出所要用到的词汇、短语等，或者列出大概的写作提纲。通过分析可知，这篇短文讲述的是过去发生的事情，应用一般过去时态，注意谓语动词形式的变化，尤其是不规则动词的过去式形式。写作时要注意按照事情发展的先后顺序，这样可以使文章条理清楚。还需注意的是英语表达和汉语的习惯不同，不能逐词去翻译，应从句子整体考虑，使用简单句的基本句型，如主谓宾结构或主系表结构。在文章中点缀几个并列句、复合句或复杂句式，调整文章节奏，提升文章档次。语句之间注意使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。
点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，符合图片所传达的信息，表述准确。作者在短文中叙述了林涛和梅梅两人在公园里给小树浇水、并挂牌子告诉人们注意保护树木。整篇文章按照事情发生的先后顺序叙述，条理清晰。文章最后的两句话也点明了文章的主题。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般过去时态为主，谓语动词用了过去式，尤其是注意了不规则动词过去式的形式，如found, kept, got, were, spoke等。语法规范、准确。短文中还使用了较丰富的句型和短语，如They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to die.这句话中使用了并列句和宾语从句；再如So they decided to do something for the young tree这句话中使用了句型decided to do sth.决定做某事；After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of them.这两句话中用了短语after that, speak highly of等等。
8．假如你是李华，请你根据以下提示用英语写一封保护大象的倡议书。 提示：陆地上最大的哺乳动物，可以活到80岁。目前数量在减少，因为： 1）人们砍伐森林，大象渐渐失去家园； 2）人们捕杀大象，获取象牙。 3）应如何保护它们（不少于三条）。
要求：1）恰当运用比较级和最高级；2）80词左右。倡议书的结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：哺乳动物mammal; 象牙ivory Dear classmates
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I believe everyone's contribution （贡献） can make a big difference.
Yours, Lihua
【答案】Dear classmates,
Elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in the forest, so elephants are losing their homes. Secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.
As a result, we need to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the law to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants.
I believe everyone's contribution （贡献） can make a big difference.
Yours, Lihua
【解析】 【详解】
本文是一封倡议书,倡议大家保护大象。文章共分为三个方面的内容，首先描述大象想在所处的现状，然后说明出现这种状况的原因，最后为了保护的大象我们应该如何去做。时态主要为一般现在时。提出倡议时可以使用We can/ We should/ Let’s/We’d better的表示建议的句子。写作时注意不要使用太复杂的句型，以免出现语法错误，为使句子具有连贯性，可以适当使用连词。本篇文章内容完整，符合材料要求，Elephants are the largest mammals …,及First, we should plant more trees 也使用到了比较级和最高级；Firstly,…. Secondly,…等词的使用使文章具有层次性，条理清晰。并且一些连词的使用，比如so, or, but等也使文章具有连贯性，是一篇不错的文章。
9．为了吸引外国游客，杭州旅游网希望对杭州茶文化进行宣传。请你根据表格信息，用英语为其写一篇介绍，词数80左右。 What is Longjing Tea famous for? What is it used for? How is it produced? What’s the best place to learn about it? Good taste Keep healthy Grow on the sides of mountains ... Hangzhou National Tea Museum ... Why? Longjing Tea
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【答案】Tea culture is one of the most famous cultures in China. Longjing tea is one of the famous Chinese traditional teas and famous green tea. Why is Longjing Tea famous for? Because it taste good. It is good for people to keep healthy by drinking longjing tea. Longjing tea grows mainly on the sides of mountains. People are very strict about the picking of Longjing tea. Longjing is a famous tea in China, which is related not only to the climate and soil environment of Longjing, but also to the production technology of Longjing. Hangzhou is the resort where Longjing tea is produced. So Hangzhou National Tea Museum is the best place to learn about Hongjing tea. 【解析】 【详解】
这是一篇材料类介绍型作文，所以我们必须要结合所给材料再适当补充内容。时态以一般现在时为主。
亮点词汇短语：one of．．．，．．．之一；green tea绿茶；be famous for．．．，因…而出名；keep healthy保持健康；be strict in sth对…严格；not only．．．.but also．．．，不仅．．．而且．．．。 亮点句型：
It is good for people to keep healthy by drinking Longjing tea. 喝龙井茶对人们保持健康有好处。It is+adj.（for sb.） to do sth. （对某人来说）做某事是怎样的。
Longjing is a famous tea in China, which is related not only to the climate and soil environment of Longjing, but also to the production technology of Longjing. 龙井是我国著名的茶叶，它不仅与龙井的气候、土壤环境有关，而且与龙井的生产工艺有关。Which引导的限定性定语从句。
Hangzhou is the resort where Longjing tea is produced. 杭州是龙井茶出产的胜地。Where引导的定语从句。
10．书面表达。76.某英语教育网站正在开展主题为“How can a teenager have a successful life?”的讨论，为此你采访了一些同学（结果见下表）。请据上经用英语写一篇短文参与讨
论，并阐述你的观点。 同学主要观点 努力学习 尊重父母 服务社会 计划未来 ……（至少两条） 你的观点
注意：（1）短文必须包括表中所有内容，可适当增加细节； （2）你的观点至少两条； （3）词数：80—100；
（4）短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：尊重respect
短文首句：I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life. 【答案】I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life. Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. After all, study plays a key role in their life. They also agree they should respect their parents, who look after them every day. Besides, they’re ready to serve the society and in their opinion it’s really meaningful. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.
From my point of view, we need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other. Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful life. 【解析】
试题分析：英语教育网站开展主题为“How can a teenager have a successful life?”的讨论，采访了一些同学参与讨论，写出他们的观点及自己的观点。因为是叙述同学的现在的观点，所以句子应该用一般现在时，叙述同学的观点用第三人称，叙述自己的观点用第一人称。注意不要遗漏要点，所写的句子应该符合英语语法，不能是汉语式的句子，要使用一些高级词汇及句式。
写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：do a survey about sth关于某事做调查；respect their parents,尊敬他们的父母；look after照顾；make a good plan for sth为某事做一个好的计划；make some good friends交一些好朋友；keep healthy保持健康。用了宾语从句，如：Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.用了because引导的原因状语从句，如：Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful life.增加了文章的亮点，也是提分的经典句子。 考点：材料作文。
[英语]中考英语书面表达经典题型带答案经典1
