译林版中考英语中考英语总复习书面表达经典例题

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communities” in Nanjing.

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【答案】Hi, Jack! I am Tim. Today I will tell you something about the project “Renovation of the old communities” in Nanjing. This project is aim to improve the environment. After this project, there will be more beautiful buildings, some parks and a big shopping store. Our life will be more convenient. But there are some problems which influence our life. For example, lots of noise is around us all day long, and we can see the building rubbish anywhere. In my opinion, the project team only work in daytime and the building rubbish can be put at a fixed place. Of course, everyone in the old communities can do what they can do to renovate our communities. 【解析】【分析】

这篇书面表达是描述老社区改造工程，话题较新。【详解】

这是篇材料作文，所给的内容要点给的比较零碎，不完整，所以考生需要结合实际情况补充完整，是文章内容充实。在写作时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，这样才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。

9．（·天津中考模拟）书面表达

以“我是…… 的一员”为题，写一篇80-100字的短文，标点符号不占格。提示：你可以作为

任意兴趣小组或社团的一员，或者作为家庭、班级、社区的一员，写出你的经历、感受等。内容可以包括以下几方面： Are you glad to be a member of...? What do you do in it?

How do you feel as such a member?

I’m a member of... （请将题目自行补充完整，已给的单词不计入总词数）

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【答案】I’m a Member of the Singing and Dancing Club

Hello, everyone! I’m very glad I'm a member of the Singing and Dancing Club. I have been in this club for 2 years. I’m an actor in the club. Many students in our school have joined the club, so I also have made a lot of friends.We have many activities on campus.Each week,we have two times of training. I sing and dance with my classmates on weekends. Though I am very tired, but I am always happy when I dance.All the members in the club are just brothers and sisters. I like this club very much. 【解析】【详解】

这是一篇给材料作文。要求以“我是…… 的一员”为题，写一篇短文。首先考生需要把题目补充完整，然后根据所给出的材料提示，动笔写作。文章时态主要用一般现在时和现在完成时，人称主要用第一人称。在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。【点睛】

首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，不要出现语法错误。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

10．（·湖南中考模拟）书面表达假如你是李华，马上将要中学毕业，一路上肯定有很多人帮助或者鼓励过你。某英文杂志社正向九年级毕业生征文，请用英语写一篇题为“Thank you, My ________”的短文，将你对你的父母、老师、朋友或同学的感谢表达出来。要求：

（1）将标题补充完整，80词左右；（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

（3）文章中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。

Thank you, My_______________

【答案】Thank you, my teacher!

I'd like to say thanks to my English teacher, Miss Wang, because she's helped me a lot. Once, I failed my English exam. When she found I was very worried, she encouraged me to study harder and promised to help me. After that, I turned to her for help every time I had questions. She was always patient to make me understand every single question. With her help, I've had enough courage to face difficulties and made much progress in English.

Thank you, my dear teacher! The love and support from you will be with me forever. 【解析】【分析】

这是一篇话题作文，以“Thank you, My teacher ”为题，写一篇短文，感谢我的老师。【详解】

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I'd like to……，When she found……，She was always patient to……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】

本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我要感谢我的老师王小姐，接下来介绍她对我的帮助，最后表示从老师那里得到的爱和支持将永远和我在一起。此处would like to, encourage sb to do sth, promise to do sth, turn to sb for help, make progress等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

二、中考英语完形填空汇编

11．阅读下面短文，按照句子结构的语法性和上下文连贯的要求，从各小题的四个选项中选出一个最佳等案，使短文连贯完整。

John was a manager in a factory. He enjoyed running for exercise around the park when he was free.

One Sunday afternoon, after running as usual, John 1 to go home and have a rest. Just then, he noticed an old woman standing by the road. 2 old woman looked around worriedly. John went over and asked what 3 for her. After a short talk. John came to know that she forgot her way home and got lost. Besides, she was very tired and hungry. John called the old woman's son and then took her to the 4 restaurant.

In the restaurant, John ordered food and drink for the old woman 5 . While eating, sometimes she carelessly sprinkled（撒）food and drink on the table and on her coat. Other customers felt disgusted（厌悲的）at this sight. 6 John didn't care about this. He stood up and cleaned the table from time to time 7 silence.

It took the old woman some time 8 eating. After that, John paid the bill and they were ready to leave when the old woman's son arrived. He held John's hands and said, \help, my mother 9 well\years ago. I did what a son should do, \（尊敬）to John. They were touched by his kindness.

1. A. decided B. has decided C. decides 2. A. A

B. An

C. The C. farthest C. angry C. Or C. in C. finishes

D. will decide D. / D. farther D. angrily D. So D. with D. finished

3. A. can he do B. he can do C. could he do D. he could do 4. A. nearest B. nearer 5. A. polite 6. A. And 7. A. on 9. A. treats

B. politely B. But B. for

8. A. to finish B. finish 10. A. woman B. women C；（10）D；

B. is treating C. was treated D. will be treated

C. customer D. customers

【答案】（1）A；（2）C；（3）D；（4）A；（5）B；（6）B；（7）C；（8）A；（9）【解析】【分析】本文介绍了John热心帮助老妇人的故事。

（1）句意：一个星期天下午，像往常一样跑步之后，约翰决定回家休息。根据 One Sunday afternoon 可知描述过去用一般过去时，故选A。

（2）句意：老妇人担心地环顾四周。old woman是特指上文出现的，故用定冠词the，故选C。

（3）句意：约翰走过去问她能为他做什么。宾语从句是语序是特殊疑问词+陈述句语序，主句是asked，一般过去时，故从句也是一般过去时，could是can的过去式， he could do是陈述句语序，故选D。

（4）句意：约翰打电话给老妇人的儿子，然后带她去了最近的餐馆。根据the定冠词可知此处是最高级，故选A。

（5）句意：在餐馆里，约翰礼貌地为老妇人点了食物和饮料。A礼貌的，形容词，B礼貌地，副词，C生气的，形容词，D生气地，副词，副词修饰动词 ordered ，点餐是礼貌的，故选B。

（6）句意：但是约翰不在乎这个。根据 customers felt disgusted 顾客感到厌恶和John didn't care about this约翰不在乎这个是转折关系，故是but，但是，故选B。

（7）句意：他站起来，默默地时不时地擦擦桌子。in silence，固定搭配，默默地，故选C。

（8）句意：这位老妇人花了一些时间吃完饭。it takes sb+时间+to do，固定搭配，故此处是不定式，故选A。

（9）句意：多亏了你的帮助，我妈妈被照顾得很好。描述过去是一般过去时，treat和mother是被动关系，故此处是一般过去时的被动语态，was done的形式，故选C。（10）句意：周围所有的顾客都对约翰表示尊重。根据 Other customers felt disgusted ，可知此处是顾客，表示泛指用名词复数，故是customers，故选D。【点评】考查词汇在篇章中的运用能力，答题时首先要跳过空格通读文章掌握其大意，然后细读文章字斟句酌逐一作答，注意考虑句型、语法、搭配、语境等因素。最后通读一遍检查验证。

12．阅读下面短文，按照句子结构的语法性和上下文连贯的要求，从各题所给的A、B、C和D项中选出最佳选项。

The first astronauts

Since the earliest times, people have looked up at the stars, the moon and the planets. Today people use modern machines 1 at the sky. This is very different from the situation 2 years ago when people could only use their eyes. Perhaps they dreamed of 3 the universe. When did humans first go into space? The story began not so very long ago, 4 the first astronauts were not people-they were animals.

Scientists wanted to make travelling to space as 5 as possible for humans. So they decided to experiment with animals and test 6 in spaceflights. Insects, mice, frogs, dogs and monkeys were some of the animals 7 first went into space. Many of them 8 , but they helped to make space travel safer for humans. For their great service, we 9 forget these animals.

Albert Ⅱ was the first monkey to go into space in 1949. Sadly he died 10 his spaceship landed back on Earth.

11 the result was different for Ham the Monkey. His story ended happily when he return to earth 12 very good health.

Scientists wanted to know the answer to the important question: could 13 animal like Ham do the same things in space as he could do on Earth? The answer came when Ham 14 into space in 1961. Yes, he did everything well and lived for 15 16 years 1. A. look

B. to look

C. looking

D. looked D. exploring D. so D. the safest D. theirs D. whose D. will die D. since D. Luckily D. for D. / D. was sent D. the others

2. A. thousand B. thousands C. thousand of D. thousands of 3. A. explore B. to explore C. explored 4. A. as 5. A. safe 6. A. they 7. A. whom 8. A. die 10. A. if 11. A. Luck 12. A. at 13. A. a 14. A. send

B. or B. safer B. them B. what B. died

C. but C. safest C. their C. that C. have died

9. A. shouldn't B. may not C. don't have to D. needn't

B. because C. after B. Luck B. on B. an B. sent

C. Luck C. in C. the C. is sent C. others

15. A. another B. other

【答案】（1）B；（2）D；（3）D；（4）A；（5）A；（6）B；（7）C；（8）B；（9）A；（10）C；（11）D；（12）C；（13）B；（14）D；（15）A；

【解析】【分析】本文介绍了人类第一批宇航员，他们是昆虫、老鼠、青蛙、狗和猴子，为人类探索太空做出的了贡献。

（1）句意：今天，人们使用现代机器观测太空。use to do固定搭配，用来做某事，故