译林版中考英语中考英语总复习书面表达经典例题
一、中考英语书面表达汇编 1．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
假如你是李华，你们学校正在进行课堂教学改革，经过一段时间的适应，同学们发现现在的课堂跟以前比较发生了一些变化，请你根据所给提示以“The Changes in Class”为题目，用英语写一篇100词左右的文章，谈谈你的感受和想法，开头和结尾已给出（不计入总词数）。
要求：1.短文应行文连贯、条理清晰、段落分明、书写工整； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名等信息； 3.文章必须包括所提供的全部主要信息，并作适当发挥。
The Changes in Class
Thanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in
class.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】 The Changes in Class
Thanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in class. I like the class like this.I think it is very interesting and lively. We can tell stories, play games and listen to music.
I think it is open and free. We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this class. The changes in Class are good for us. 【解析】
【详解】
假如你是李华，你们学校正在进行课堂教学改革，经过一段时间的适应，同学们发现现在的课堂跟以前比较发生了一些变化，请你根据所给提示以“The Changes in Class”为题目，用英语写一篇100词左右的文章，谈谈你的感受和想法，开头和结尾已给出（不计入总词数）。
结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为单数第一人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。 【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练文中运用了一些好的句型：We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this class.等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
2．（·南通市通州区金北学校中考模拟）书面表达
同学们，中考后就会迎来漫长的暑假了，班会课上老师组织大家讨论假期学习和生活计划。假如你是李华，请根据以下内容提示用英语向同学们汇报一下你的计划。 内容提示： 暑假计划 学习 生活 其它 博览群书；学习技能 （或自拟一点） 健康饮食；坚持锻炼 （或自拟一点） 热爱公益；亲近自然 （或自拟一点） 注意：
1. 表达中必须包括所给要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译。 2. 词数90左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。 3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。 Dear classmates,
Summer holiday is coming, and here is my plan for it.
____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________ I hope all of you can enjoy the coming holiday. That’s all. Thank you. 【答案】Dear classmates,
Summer holiday is coming, and here is my plan for it.
First, I'd like to choose several good books and read them carefully. This can help me open my mind and learn more about the world. I also think it's necessary for me to learn at least one skill. I'm interested in cooking, so I will learn to cook some delicious dishes during the holiday. Second, health is the most important. So I will eat healthily and exercise more. I plan to eat more fruit and vegetables and keep running every day.
Third, it's a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in need. I will pay more attention to protecting our environment so that we can make our Earth a better world. Also, travelling out is a good choice. While travelling, we can be close to nature and learn about different cultures. We have more chances to search the Internet. I know unhealthy websites are harmful to us. I will say no to them.
I hope all of you can enjoy the coming holiday. That's all. Thank you.
【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如I'd like to do，help me open my mind，at least，be interested in，during the holiday，plan to do，join in，be kind to someone in need，pay more attention to，be close to nature，search the Internet等。而First, I'd like to choose several good books and read them carefully./ Second, health is the most important./Third, it's a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in need.等表顺序词和综合句式的运用，既使短文层次清晰，又丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。
点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
3．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
假如你的笔友 John 将作为交换生在中国家庭生活一周，他写了一封 e-mail 注意：
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3.词数 80 左右，邮件的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear John,
向你求助。请根据邮件内容写封回信。 Dear Li Hua,
I will come to Nanjing in July and stay with a Chinese family for a week as an exchange student. To get along well with my host family, should I prepare any gifts? How can I help with the housework? What else should I do?
Please write back soon. Yours, John Dear John,
I’m glad you will come to China. ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲
I hope you will enjoy your stay in China. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear John,
I'm glad you will come to China. We Chinese people are kind and friendly. You don't need to worry about it.
If possible, you can prepare a small gift, like a key ring or a hat with the symbols of your country. It's not necessary to buy anything expensive. Also, you can help with some housework, such as washing the dishes, making the bed . The family members will be very grateful for that. In addition, I suggest you learn a little Chinese that means \so on, which may play a useful role during your stay. What's more, read some books about Chinese customs before coming here. Try not to make any misunderstandings. I hope you will enjoy your stay in China. Yours, Li Hua
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，回信给约翰，建议他在中国家庭生活应注意的事项。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，二人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I'm glad……，We Chinese people are……，you can…….，It's not necessary to do sth, I suggest……，I hope……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头告诉他不必担心，接下来回答他的问题以及建议他如何做，最后希望他在中国玩得高兴。此处need to do sth, worry about, the symbol of, help with, such as, be grateful for, in addition, play a role, what’s more等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
4．（·广西中考模拟） 假设你是李磊，在家里你的父母总是对你在学习、卫生、作息上有许多要求，对这些要求你分别有什么看法？你是怎样解决的？ 要求：
1. 词数80个左右；
2. 所写内容必须包括所有信息，可适当发挥；
3. 语气通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，条理清楚，字迹工整；
4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地名。
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Hi, everyone. My name is Li Lei. My parents love me very much. But it doesn’t mean I can do everything I want at home.
First, I should finish my homework before Saturday evening to make sure I have enough time to make a review. It’s necessary. Second, I have to do washing by myself. This means I won’t have enough time to play. I don’t really understand why they ask me to do so. Third, I must sleep before 11 in the evening and get up at 6 in the morning. I hope I could sleep till 10 am someday. My friends seldom have enough time to relax either. So I think I should listen to my parents. No cross, no crown. 【解析】 【详解】
这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下你的父母对你在学习、卫生、作息上的要求是什么。主要从你对此有什么看法，以及你是怎样解决的，这几个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。 【高分句型一】
This means I won’t have enough time to play. 这意味着我没有足够的时间玩。 句子I won’t have enough time to play.是一个宾语从句。 【高分句型二】
I don’t really understand why they ask me to do so. 我真的不明白他们为什么要我这么做。 句子why they ask me to do so. 是由why引导的宾语从句。
5．（·浙江中考模拟）书面表达
假如你是Amy，德国的交换生Sara下周即将来你家寄宿，昨天你收到她的来信，在信中，她询问如下信息：1．你家情况；2.有关餐桌礼仪；3. 她要承担的家务劳动；4. …现在，你就她提出的问题给她回信，也预祝她在你家过得开心！ 要求：1. 文章必须包括图片中主要内容，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息； 3. 字数约110词。 Dear Sara，
I’m glad to hear from you yesterday._____________________________________________
译林版中考英语中考英语总复习书面表达经典例题
