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一幅图作文

单张图画通常是提供一幅图画(一般是漫画)并配以一定的文字提示。要仔细观察图画所传达的表面信息,结合文字提示,还要能深刻挖掘该幅图画所表达的深层含义,即现实意义。这种命题形式主要是考查考生说明和议论的表达能力。

漫画作文、图片作文写作步骤:

1. 读图——仔细观察图片,认真阅读提示句,确定写作主题。抓住画面有效信息,合理发挥想象。 2. 解意——把握漫画寓意,联系生活,辨明褒贬,反映现象,揭示事件的本质或分析问题产生的原因。 3. 谋篇——第一段:图画描写 (4-5句)

第二段:过渡句,反映现象(1句),原因或后果(4-5句) 第三段:个人看法或感悟 (解决方法)(2-3点)

Writing 1: (2011·江苏卷)

下面这幅照片展现了女儿为回家的妈妈拿包的情景。请根据你对这幅照片的理解用英语写一篇短文。你的短文应包含以下内容:

1. 描述照片内容,如情景、人物、动作,等等; 2. 结合自身实际,谈谈你的感想; 3. 举例说明你能为家长减负做些什么。 注意:

1. 可参照图中文字及下面文章开头所给提示,作必要的发挥想象。 2. 词数150左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。 3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

The burden of students has been a hot topic for years, but the load of parents has received little attention,

especially from their own children. __________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ 思路点拨:

本文为看图作文,考查角度独到新颖(为家长减负),主题是孝敬父母。描述图片内容时应使用第三人称,在写自己的感想和减负措施时应用第一人称。短文基本时态应为一般现在时。可按题目提供的内容来安排写作顺序。 文章可分为三个部分: (1)描述图片内容; (2)自己的感想;

(3)举例说明自己为家长减负可做的事情。

后两个部分为开放性写作,考生可根据自己的生活体验来自由发挥。 常用模板 Ⅰ.格式模板

开头:The burden of students has been a hot topic... 正文:The picture shows us... All this reminds me of... 结尾:The picture convinces me it is...

Ⅱ.句式模板 1.表达“感激”之情

①show how thankful sb. feel(s) ②sb. be grateful/thankful for... 2.忙于做某事 ①be engaged in sth.

②occupy oneself in sth./be occupied in sth. ③bury oneself in sth./be buried in sth. 尝试运用

1.__________________________________________________________ (意识到她母亲一定很累了) after a day's work, the girl helps to remove the bag from her shoulder.

2.所有这些使我想起了我的母亲,她一直尽她所能使我拥有最好的。

All this reminds me of my mother. She has been doing whatever she could to let me have the best. (用定语从句合并为一个句子)

_______________________________________________________________________________________________ 3.这张照片使我相信:做个好女儿比做个好学生更重要。

The picture convinces me that to be a good daughter is more important than to be a good student. (用it作形式主语改写句子)

_______________________________________________________________________________________________ (1.Realizing her mom must be very tired ; 2. All this reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever she could to let me have the best. 3. The picture convinces me that it is more important to be a good daughter than to be a good student.) 【范文】

The burden of students has been a hot topic for years, but the load of parents has received little attention, especially from their own children.

The picture shows us a touching moment when a little girl comes to greet her working mom. Realizing her mom must be very tired after a day's work, the girl helps to remove the bag from her shoulder. In response, the mom kneels down to show how happy and thankful she feels.

All this reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever she could to let me have the best. But, totally engaged in my own study, I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels, and always think studying well is the only thing I could do in return. Now I know I can do my bit to help with the everyday washing, bedroom cleaning, or at least prepare breakfast myself, so as to share mother's daily burden.

The picture convinces me it is even more important to be a good daughter than a “good” student.

模板

As can be seen in the picture, 图画内容. The picture tells us概括图片大意.The implied meaning of this picture should be taken into consideration seriously.

To begin with, 揭示含义/原因/结果1. Second, 揭示含义/原因/结果2.

In my opinion/ As for me, we should take some measures to deal with the problem. First we should具体措施1. Second, we must具体措施2. Only in this way can we solve the problem of 图画内容.

Writing 2. (2009·郑州名校联考)

仔细看题目中的图画,描述图画内容并就此进行评论。 要求:1.在图画内容的基础上可作适当的联想; 2.评论要切中要害; 3.词数120~150。

参考词汇:日用品daily necessities 【范文】

In this picture, we can see that a woman is doing shopping in a supermarket. She chooses a pair of slippers and buys other daily necessities. Walking beside the place where fresh fruits are sold, she suddenly finds it unnecessary to buy slippers. So she throws them away without any hesitation. Seeing what happens, a customer behind her is shocked by her behavior.

We can learn much from the picture. This phenomenon often occurs around us. Most people hate it when someone does something like this. Those who throw things without thought are believed to lack responsibility to our society. That is to say, they only think of convenience to themselves but ignore others’ feelings. So what she does is absolutely wrong. We should create a pleasant environment where we can do anything delightedly.

It is everybody’s duty to keep a clean environment in our world.

Writing 3 (2009·江西名校模拟)

下图表示的是一起由行人横穿马路引起的交通事故。请你根据图画内容和要求写一篇短文。 1.介绍图画内容; 2.对这一现象进行评论; 3.呼吁人们遵守交通规则。 注意:词数120~150。 【范文】

From the picture, we can see a man crossing the street in a hurry. But he is not walking on the pavement; instead, he is running in front of cars which are moving on the street. And to avoid hitting him, a car makes a sudden stop. The following car hits that car on its back. Thus an accident is caused. The man who is crossing the street doesn’t take life seriously, both his and others’. Running across a street without obeying the traffic rules is very dangerous because the running person can be easily hurt by cars. And if the car which is about to hit the person makes a sudden brake, there may be a car accident, just as the picture shows, thus people in the cars might get hurt.

Life is precious, and also vulnerable. We should not put our life and others’ in danger by any improper behavior.

2. 作文 - — 一幅图作文 - -夹叙夹议

一幅图作文单张图画通常是提供一幅图画(一般是漫画)并配以一定的文字提示。要仔细观察图画所传达的表面信息,结合文字提示,还要能深刻挖掘该幅图画所表达的深层含义,即现实意义。这种命题形式主要是考查考生说明和议论的表达能力。漫画作文、图片作文写作步骤:1.读图——仔细观察图片,认真阅读提示句,确定写作主题。抓住画面有效信息,合理发挥想象。2.
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