如何用英语介绍一种濒危动物
【写作任务】
假定某英语杂志最近正在征集关于保护濒危动物的文章。请你根据所给提示写一篇关于保护长江江豚（Yangtze finless porpoise）的英语短文并投稿。 分布区域 外形特征 物种现状 濒危原因 措施 中国长江中下游、鄱阳湖及洞庭湖 貌似海豚（dolphin），面带微笑，体长一般在1.2米左右 目前1000多头 水质污染，非法捕捞导致栖息地减少 …… 注意：1. 词数100 左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作指导】 一、审题定调
本写作要求介绍一种濒危动物——长江江豚，体裁是说明文。介绍动物时，要从动物自身的特征、习性、现状等方面描述。如果介绍濒危动物，要说明其濒临灭绝的原因并提出保护建议。人称以第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主。 二、谋篇布局
本写作可分为三部分：
第一部分：简要介绍长江江豚的外形特征及现状； 第二部分：说明长江江豚濒临灭绝的原因； 第三部分：提出拯救长江江豚的措施。 三、组织语言
第一部分：简要介绍长江江豚的外形特征及现状。 普 通 表 达 ·... looks like a dolphin. ·It has a smile on its face. ·It is about ... tall / long. ·There are only about ... left in ... now.
高 级 表 达 ·..., looking like a dolphin, is a kind of small whale with a lovely smile on its face. ·An adult ... can reach an average height / length of around ... ·Only about ... remain in ... at present. 第二部分：说明长江江豚濒临灭绝的原因。 普 通 表 达 高 级 表 达 第三部分：提出拯救长江江豚的措施。 普 通 表 达 高 级 表 达 ·We should take some measures to protect ... ·The government should build more nature reserves and put a strict ban on illegal fishing there. ·Public awareness about protecting animals is also very important. ·Effective measures should be taken to protect ... ·More nature reserves should be established and stricter laws should be passed to stop illegal fishing there. ·Public awareness about protecting animals also plays an important role. The reason why ... are endangered is that their habitats are disappearing due to water pollution and illegal fishing. ·Because the water is polluted and people catch fish illegally, their habitats are disappearing. ·All this has put ... in a dangerous situation. 【范文展示】
普通范文
The Yangtze finless porpoise looks like a dolphin. It has a smile on its face. It is about 120 cm long. There are only about 1,000 Yangtze finless porpoises left in the Yangtze River, Poyang Lake and Dongting Lake now.
Because the water is polluted and people catch fish illegally, their habitats are disappearing. All these has put Yangtze finless porpoises in a dangerous situation.
We should take some measures to protect Yangtze finless porpoises. The government should build more nature reserves and put a strict ban on illegal fishing there. Besides, public awareness about protecting animals is also very important.
高级范文
The Yangtze finless porpoise, looking like a dolphin, is a kind of small whale with a lovely smile on its face. An adult Yangtze finless porpoise can reach an average length of around 120 cm. Only about 1,000 Yangtze finless porpoises remain in the Yangtze River, Poyang Lake and Dongting Lake at present.
The reason why Yangtze finless porpoises are endangered is that their habitats are disappearing due to water pollution and illegal fishing there.
Effective measures should be taken to protect Yangtze finless porpoises. More nature reserves should be established and stricter laws should be passed to stop illegal fishing there. What’s more, public awareness about protecting animals also plays an important role. 【实战演练】
假定你校英语报新开设了“Animals in Danger”栏目。请你根据以下提示，写一篇介绍北极熊（polar bear）的英语短文并投稿。 分布区域 外形特征 生活习性 濒危原因 北冰洋（the Arctic Ocean） 有白色厚重的皮毛，直立起来高达2.8米 主要以鱼、海豹、海鸟等为食 全球变暖 注意：1. 词数100 左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
_________ 答案
Polar bears are large white bears with a thick layer of fur. An adult male can reach 280 cm in height when it stands. They spend most of their lives on the sea ice of the Arctic Ocean, feeding mainly on seals, fish, seabirds, etc.
如何用英语介绍一种濒危动物Module 6 Animals in Danger
