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Feelings (心理描写) ---- Various ways to express your worry, fear, joy or gratitude 1. The quality of the books was of great concern to the Richters.
2. His battles with her cruel parents and the bossy headmistress are equally funny and
frightening. 3. It was one of those terribly hot days in Baltimore. Needless to say, it was too hot to do
anything outside. 4. It was a brilliant plan.
5. She was positive about what the future might bring/ hold. 6. Patient as I was, I grew frustration.
7. Another 15 minutes passed and I grew bored.
8. He reported the case to the police and then sat there, lost and lonely in a strange city, thinking
of the terrible troubles of getting all the paperwork organized again from a distant country while trying to settle down in a new one. 9. The world I once knew as being so simple is becoming more complex, I find myself needing a
way to escape. 10. By opening a novel, I can leave behind my burdens and enter into a wonderful and
mysterious world. 11. My fatigue became almost unbearable.
12. Relieved, I sat back in an easy chair and fell asleep. 13. There are signs of hope.
14. Still, most of us volunteers breathe a sigh of relief when the season comes to a close. 15. When we handed him the bag of food, he lit up and thanked up with watery eyes.
Surroundings (场景描写) ---- Various ways to describe the surroundings and situations 1. All the world was bright and fresh, and the sunshine was kissing every lovely face. 2. Obviously there was something wrong with the car.
3. I think her presence in the photo is what makes the image interesting.
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4. Their efforts have been proven fruitful.
5. The landscape, beautiful on its own, somehow comes to life and breathes because this woman
is engaging with it. 6. It didn’t take long before reports of squirrels using the bridge started.
Effective Actions (动作描写) ---- Ways to support the story and promote the development 1. When she arrived home from work, the dog threw itself against the screen door and barked
madly at her. 2. As soon as she opened the door, Riley dashed into the boys’ room where Ann found Jack
suffering a heart attack. 3. Minutes after the last movie, employees were busy sweeping up popcorns and gathering coke
cups. 4. Living just a few blocks from the beach, Natalie can see the ocean and hear the waves from her
house. 5. I paused to catch my breath and then positioned myself to take the best photo of this
panorama. 6. Unfortunately, just as I took out my camera, a woman approached from behind, and planted
herself right in front of my view. 7. He gathered up all his strength and decided to attend a job interview.
8. While waiting for a bus to the office where he was supposed to be interviewed, he saw an
elderly man wildly kicking the tyre of his car. 9. Upon arrival, Jimmy found a long line of applicants waiting to be interviewed. 10. On the way, we spotted a man holding a piece of paper.
11. Axani wrote in his post that he is not looking for anything in return.
Enlightening Ending (升华式结尾) ---- Ways to close and enhance the lesson 1． If it had been my dog, I’d hope that somebody would be willing to go that extra mile. 2． This has been a wonderful experience for our family. 3． It will go a long way with them.
4． Looking back, I feel blessed someone had wanted to help a stranger.
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5． Erin had gone beyond what almost anyone would have done, finding my house on a bitterly
cold night, and for that I was extremely grateful. 6． With her talent and determination, it appears that the sky could be the limit for Alice Moore. 7． That photo is a reminder, a captured moment, an unspoken conversation between two women.
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