第三编
要想作文得高分，首先要让作文的亮点飞。如果作文没有一点萤萤亮点，那作文只能在基础等级徘徊。如何营造些许亮点，本部分从两大方面化讲解。
第一讲 词汇营造亮点4角度
扮亮词汇(一) 特别的爱给特别的你——名词
名词属于实词，名词表示人、事物、地点或抽象概念的名称，名词同时也分为专有名词和普通名词。名词用得好更能出众脱俗，让阅卷老师眼前一亮。
名词的种类：
普通名词 可数名词 个体名词 [典题1] (一般词)Now we have a chance to develop a greater understanding of each other.
(高级词)Now we have an opportunity to develop a greater understanding of each other.
现在我们有一个好机会，可以大大增进对彼此的了解。
[典题2] (一般词)There are four basic choices; they are described briefly below.
(高级词)There are four basic alternatives; they are described briefly below. 有四个基本的选择，简述如下。
高中阶段常见的名词及名词短语类写作高级词汇 ①机会 chance→opportunity ②选择 choice→alternative ③课程 course→curriculum ④影响 effect→influence/impact ⑤后果 result→consequence ⑥缺点 shortcoming→drawback ⑦方法way→approach ⑧职业career→profession
集体名词 不可数名词 物质名词 抽象名词 专有名词 专门指代某一人、物、地点等的名词 词汇、句式、18个角度给予细
⑨建议advice→guidance
⑩老人old people→the old/the elderly/the aged/senior citizens ?青少年young people→youngsters/youths/adolescents ?几天前a few days ago→the other day
?一个表现好的孩子a child who behaves in a proper way→a well-behaved child
[专题过关训练]
先用所给的词补全句子，然后对该词进行升级 1．因此，我没有足够的时间去锻炼。
As_a_result,_I don't have enough time to take exercise.(result) →As_a_consequence,_I don't have enough time to take exercise. 2．所有学校都设有音乐和舞蹈课。
All the schools have music and dancing classes as_parts_of_the_course.(course) →All the schools have music and dancing classes as_parts_of_the_curriculum. 3．他们称他们期望这次会议会对国家的未来产生显著影响。
They say they expect the meeting to have_a_marked_effect_on_the_future of_the_country.(effect)
→
They
say
they
expect
the
meeting
to
have_a_marked_impact/influence_on_the_future_of_the_country.
4．(2018·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)最重要的是，老人通常是最先品尝桌上食物的人，因为他们在中国受到很好的尊重。
Most importantly, old_people_are_usually_the_first_to_taste the food served on the table because they are well respected in China.(old people)
→
Most
importantly,
the_old/the_elderly/the_aged/senior_citizens_are_usually_the_first_to_taste the food served on the table because they are well respected in China.
5．(2018·天津高考书面表达)因此，我认为这不仅是你展示自己才华的黄金机会，同时也可以为我们提供建议。
Therefore, I think not_only_will_it_be_a_golden_chance_for_you_to_show_your great_talent,_but_also_you_can_offer_us_advice.(chance, advice)
→
Therefore,
I
think
not_only_will_it_be_a_golden_opportunity_for_you_to_show_your great_talent,_but_also_you_can_offer_us_guidance.
6．在这类职业中，只有20%的岗位是由女性担任的。
Only_20_percent_of_jobs_in_the_careers are held by women.(career) →Only_20_percent_of_jobs_in_the_professions are held by women. 7．激励这些年轻人的不是对成就的渴望，而是对失败的恐惧。
These_young_people_are_motivated not by a desire to achieve, but by fear of failure.(young people)
→These_youngsters/youths/adolescents_are_motivated not by a desire to achieve, but by fear of failure.
8．我们将探索收集信息的不同方法。
We will be exploring different_ways_to_gather_information.(way) →We will be exploring different_approaches_to_gathering_information.
扮亮词汇(二) 炫酷亮闪你的眼——动词(短语)
动词根据其后是否能跟宾语，可分为两类，分别是：及物动词(Transitive Verb)、不及物动词(Intransitive Verb)，缩写形式分别为vt.和vi.。
[典题1] (一般词)He likes playing football, which is his favourite. (高级词)He is fond of playing football, which is his favourite. 他喜欢踢足球，这是他最喜欢的运动。
[典题2] (一般词)As for me, I believe that the number of tourists should be limited for the following reasons.
(高级词)As for me, I'm firmly convinced that the number of tourists should be limited for the following reasons.
就我而言，我坚定地认为游客的数量应得到限制，理由如下。 高中阶段常见的动词及动词短语类写作高级词汇
①看见see→catch sight of ②遇见meet→come across
③引起cause→lead to/result in/give rise to ④拥有have→possess
⑤提高develop/improve→promote ⑥替代replace→substitute ⑦面对face→be faced with ⑧容忍bear→put up with
⑨处理do with→deal with/cope with ⑩决定decide→determine/make up one's mind
?考虑consider→take into account/consideration ?应该should→be supposed to
?理解understand→make sense of/figure out ?使用use→employ/make use of/take advantage of ?道歉apologize→make an apology ?记住remember→keep in mind ?发生happen→occur/come about ?想起think of→occur to/come up with ?感谢thank→appreciate
?帮助某人help sb.→do sb.a favor 21节省save→set aside ○
22参观visit→tour/pay a visit to ○
23分发hand out→distribute ○
24站起来stand up→get to one's feet ○
25习惯于be used to→be accustomed to ○
26一定be sure to→be bound to ○
27为……做准备prepare for→make preparations for/be prepared for ○
28反对be against→object to ○
29厌烦be bored with→be fed up with/be tired of ○
30忙于be busy in (with)→be occupied in (with)/be buried in/be engaged in ○
31闻名be famous for→have a reputation for ○
32感到舒服feel comfortable→feel at ease ○
33美化学校make the school beautiful→beautify the school ○
34置若罔闻refuse to listen to→turn a deaf ear to ○
35成功做某事succeed in doing sth.→make it ○
36想做某事want to do sth.→seek/intend/desire to do sth. ○
37照看look after→attend to ○
38尽力做某事try one's best to do sth.→spare no effort to do sth. ○
39向某人寻求帮助ask someone for help→turn to sb.for help ○
40我认为I think→in my opinion/as far as I'm concerned ○
[专题过关训练]
Ⅰ.选用方框中的短语替换下列句中加黑部分
put up with， consist of， be devoted to， make use of， fix one's eyes upon 1．The little boy looked at the picture on the wall.fixed_his_eyes_upon 2．The small group has six people.consists_of
3．She was afraid she couldn't bear the pain.put_up_with
4．All his life was given to the Party's educational cause.was_devoted_to 5．We will use her vast experience.make_use_of Ⅱ.请用高级词汇替换下列句中加黑部分
1．(2018·6月浙江高考写作)I will be grateful if you could offer me the opportunity.give_me_a_kind_consideration
2．(2016·北京高考书面表达)Our class thought of the idea to make better use of used materials.came_up_with
3．(2015·湖南高考书面表达)At the same time, I decided to study harder rather than waste precious time on those useless things.made_up_my_mind
4．We'll try our best to develop the traditional friendship between us.promote 5．Would you please help me to turn down the radio？do_me_a_favor
6．Developing very quickly, the Internet causes the breakdown of face-to-face communication.gives_rise_to
7．When you are bored with the people sometimes, you'd better find a quiet place, listening to some classical music.fed_up_with
8．So far as I know, everyone of them wants to be a model student.intends_to Ⅲ.用所给动词的高级词汇补全句子 1．几天前我在你的店铺买了一部手机。
I purchased_a_cellphone_at_your_store the other day.(buy) 2．更糟的是，暴力电子游戏可能导致进攻性行为，这比暴力电影更有害。 What's
worse,
violent
video
games
can_lead_to/result_in_aggressive_behaviours,_which is more harmful than violent movies.(cause)
3．所有的游客都被要求不能在公园内乱扔垃圾。
All the visitors were_requested_not_to_throw_litter_about in the park.(ask) 4．或许我们能想到解决这个问题的更好的办法。
Maybe we can_come_up_with_a_better_solution_to_the_problem.(think of) 5．我们将全力以赴赶超发达的工业国家。 We'll_spare_no_effort_to_catch_up_with countries.(try one's best)
the
developed
industrial
2020高考英语新创新一轮复习写作第三编第一讲词汇营造亮点4角度学案含解析
