中考英语书面表达训练题经典
一、中考英语书面表达(含答案详细解析)
1.假如你是班长李华,今天你们班对即将到来的暑假计划进行了讨论。你们班的外教David对此很感兴趣。请你根据以下信息,给 David写一封电子邮件,告诉他讨论的情况及你自己本人的计划及原因。 比例 50% 30% 20% 你的计划 计划 去国内外旅游 多读一些书 参加社会实践 ? (至少一个) 原因 1.放松;2.欣赏美景 1.增长知识;2.培养兴趣 1.锻炼自己;2.结识朋友 ?(请你补充)
注意:
(1)邮件应包含所有要点
(2)词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数); (3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分 注:社会实践 social practice activities Dear David
I'm writing to tell you something about our discussion today.
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【答案】Dear David
I'm writing to tell you something about our discussion today.
The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation. Half of the students plan to travel at home and abroad. They want to relax and enjoy the beautiful scenery. Thirty percent of students plan to read more books. They believe that reading can increase knowledge. Reading books can make people smart and develop interests. 20% of them plan to take part in social practice activities. They want to exercise themselves and make new friends.
I'm going to take part in social practice activities, too. I want to learn something new and get good experience from these activities. Best wishes!
Yours Li Hua 【解析】 【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如how to do,spend a meaningful summer vacation,half of,plan to do,travel at home and abroad,enjoy the beautiful scenery,take part in,social practice activities,make new friends 等。而非谓语动词结构The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation./ Reading books can make people smart and develop interests.和宾语从句They believe that reading can increase knowledge.的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。 【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
2.假定你是David,来自美国,你的QQ好友Li Ming想要在今年的暑假去做志愿者,他来信向你了解有关这方面的情况。请认真阅读下面的邮件,并根据信中的内容和实际用英语回复,可以有适当的发挥。 To: davidwoodlandschool@qq.com From: limingsunshineschool@qq.com Subject: Volunteering Dear David, I’m writing to ask you for advice. I know you often do volunteer work in your free time. I’m interested in it very much. I’m going to do some this summer vacation. But I know little about it. Could you help me answer the following questions? ●Why do you want to be a volunteer? ●What kind of vo1unteer work is suitable for us students? ●Do you have any problems with volunteering? ●If my parents don’t allow me to do so, what should I do? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes, Li Ming 注意:1.词数90左右。回复信的开头和结尾己经写好,不计入总词数; 2.回复中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Li Ming,
Thanks for your letter. I'm glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your questions.
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I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.
Best wishes
David
【答案】Dear Li Ming,
Thanks for your letter. I'm glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your questions.
I volunteer because I enjoy helping others and can learn a lot from others. As students, we can take part in some interesting activities, such as looking after animals and working for sports matches. Also, we can join charity organizations to help protect the environment and so on. It’s OK to have problems, because volunteering takes much time and energy. Sometimes I can’t balance my study and work. If your parents don’t allow you to volunteer, you should have a good talk with them. Try to let them understand you.
I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news. Best wishes David 【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文,给好友Li Ming回信,介绍暑假做志愿者的情况。。结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:I'm glad……,we can……,It’s OK to……,If your parents don’t allow you to…….,you should……,I hope……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。 点睛:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头为你想要成为一名志愿者而感到高兴,接下来介绍我们可以从事的志愿者工作以及志愿者工作带来的一些问题,最后我希望你喜欢志愿者工作。此处would like to, enjoy doing sth, learn from, take part in, such as, look after, allow sb to do sth, let sb do sth, look forward to 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
3. 写作
假定你是李华,在一位名叫Tiger Mom的学生家长的博客上,你看到以下内容。 请你根据
博客内容,写作要点和要求,给这位家长回复。
I’m the mother of a fourteen-year –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ? 写作要点:1. 表明自己的看法。 2. 陈述自己的理由。 3. 提出至少2条建议。 【答案】Hi,TigerMom,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China.My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university
admission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored. There are
many examples around us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in
society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.
So I suggest that you take your friends' advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl;let her
have more friends and social activities;and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do. 【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文,对学生家长的博客进行回复。结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:My idea is that……,There are……,Some all-A students in school have…….,The reason is……,So I suggest that……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。
点睛:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头表明自己的看法,接下来陈述自己的理由,最后介绍自己的建议。此处turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, make mistakes, of one’s own等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
4.书面表达
根据以下提示,写一篇介绍我的朋友张阳的短文。 基本情况 兴趣爱好 张阳,阳光中学九年级二班学生 1. 喜欢阅读。每周花七个多小时阅读各种类型的书,因为…… 2.喜欢观鸟。每年统计两次鸟儿的数量,以研究鸟儿在数量方面的变化。 优秀事迹 上个月把零花钱捐给了希望工程 1. 希望成为连接家乡到上海路段的高铁总工程师 2. 每个人为保护环境都可以做一些改变。如:…….(举1例) 未来梦想 要求:1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯; 2)必须包括表格中所有的相关信息,并适当发挥; 3)词数:100词左右(短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数); 4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School.
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【答案】Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School. He is in Class 2,Grade 9. He likes reading. He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful. He enjoys watching birds. He counts the number of birds twice a year to study changes in the number of birds. He donated his pocket money to the Hope Project last month. His dream is to be the chief engineer of high-speed railway connecting my hometown to Shanghai. He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment. We mustn’t throw rubbish everywhere. 【解析】 【详解】
亮点说明:这篇习作的层次清晰,内容饱满,表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语,例如like reading,more than,all kinds of,spend time doing,enjoy doing,the number of,twice a year,be the chief engineer of等。而He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful./ He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment.等多种复杂从句结构的综合运用,丰富了习作内容,使表达多样化,是本文的最大亮点。 【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得