【读后续写】续写微技能—心理描写与思维点拨
一.心理描写的原则 1.落实“细微处”描写
在描写人物心理活动时，一定要突出细节，所有的感情都体现在“细微处”，所以尽量不用笼统的词，如smile，cry等，而用相关的细节性词汇或词组，例如： ①Lily smiled happily.
②Lily wore a shining smile on her face.
分析: ①句中“smile”是一个笼统的描述微笑的词汇，而②句中使用了wore a shining smile，用词组的形式更加突出细节，展示了细微和精致的“微笑”。 2. 体现“多样性”结构
在进行人物心理描写时, 尽量避免平铺直叙, 可以多采用如非谓语动词的形式, 作为谓语动作的伴随状态, 从而使得描写到位, 并体现语法结构的多样性。如:
①Her eyes were filled with tears, and she offered her sincere thanks to the man.
②Tears filling her eyes, she offered her sincere thanks to the man. 分析:①句在描写心理活动“哭泣”时，用到了Her eyes were filled with tears。而②句则把这句改成了独立主格结构，运用了Tears filling her
eyes，更显得描写的细致，同时也体现了句式的多样化，展示了高超的语言运用能力。
3.展示“丰富化”修辞
除了选择细致的心理描写词汇和多样化的句式表达外，提升语言层次的另外一种方式是多使用修辞方法，例如: ①The smile on her face shone like a diamond. ②I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness.
分析: ①句中, 把“微笑”比喻成“像钻石一样闪闪发光”; 而②句中，把“悲伤”比喻成“漂浮在悲伤的海洋里”，展示了用修辞来体现细节描写的丰富。
二、心理描写的素材
1.与“喜悦和满意”相关的词块 a bright/shining smile灿烂的微笑
a mixture of excitement and happiness既兴奋又开心 burst into laughter/burst out laughing突然大笑起来 be wild with joy/delight欣喜若狂 be joyful about/at/over对……很高兴 be in high spirits情绪高涨
be pleased beyond description快乐难以言表
light up喜逐颜开
be content/satisfied with对……满意 be delighted at对……很高兴 with pleasure非常乐意
2.与“悲伤和烦恼”相关的词块 be sad at heart心里悲伤 be down in spirits情绪低落 an ocean of sadness悲伤的海洋 burst into tears/burst out crying大哭起来 sob啜泣
be clouded with grief阴沉的悲伤 be in low spirits情绪低落 fall into despair陷入绝望
feel depressed/discouraged感到沮丧/泄气 have a worried look愁眉苦脸
3.与“生气和怨怒”相关的词块 be very angry at对……很生气 feel angry/annoyed感到恼怒/生气 be seized by anger充满愤怒 be fuming with rage大发雷霆
【读后续写】续写微技能—心理描写与思维点拨
