维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。如可以使用简单句结构，易于掌握，不容易出错。但为提升文章档次，也应穿插一些并列句结构或复合句，以及使用一些复杂结构，如非谓语动词、被动语态等。 【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求邀请Dave来自己的家乡旅游，并介绍了家乡的景点和文化。短文有如下几个特点：首先文章内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有内容，并对细节进行补充和修饰，使内容更加充实、丰富。短文先对Dave发出邀请，然后具体介绍了家乡的位置、景点、文化等，并提出了建议。全文叙述清晰，层次清楚，主次分明。第二，短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。短文以一般现在时来叙述，注意了谓语动词第三人称单数形式的变化。句式结构以简单句为主，也使用了并列句、宾语从句、状语从句等复合句，还有一些好的句型，如The best time to come here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats、Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on.、What’s more, come and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!、I’m looking forward to seeing you here!等。
6．（·广东实验中学中考模拟）书面表达
农历五月初五，我们学校将举行“弘扬中华传统文化——端午节The Dragon Boat Festival”一系列主题活动，请你邀请外国友人Amy来校参加。请你根据以下提示用英文给她写一封电子邮件。内容包括： 时间： 地点： 目的： 内容：文化展览 农历五月初五 学校操场 深入了解中国传统文化 历史介绍：两千多年，纪念屈原 体验民间活动：赛龙舟，包粽子 1．······ 2．······ 活动意义： 参考词汇：农历：Chinese Lunar calendar Dear Amy,
I am writing to tell you a piece of good news, there will be an exciting event next month.______________________
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_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours sincerely, Li Ming
【答案】Dear Amy,
I learn from your letter that you want to know something about the Chinese traditional festival---the Dragon Boat Festival. I’m happy to share what I know about it with you.
The festival has a history of more than 2000 years. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese lunar calendar. On that day, people watch exciting dragon-boat races and make delicious zongzi, a kind of special food with sticky rice, meat, etc, wrapped in bamboo leaves. These two are both done in memory of Quyuan, a great poet in history.
In a word, we all love the festival because it’s a good reminder to look back on history and a wonderful time to get together with family. I hope that you can come to celebrate it with us in the near future. 【解析】 【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如learn from，want to know something，the Chinese traditional festival，the Dragon Boat Festival，share with，more than 2000 years，according to，a kind of，in memory of，In a word，look back on history，get together with family，in the near future等。特别是I learn from your letter that you want to know something about the Chinese traditional festival---the Dragon Boat Festival./ we all love the festival because it’s a good reminder to look back on history and a wonderful time to get together with family./ I hope that you can come to celebrate it with us in the near future.等多种从句结构的运用，是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。 【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
7．（·福建中考模拟）宽容是一种美德，人与人之间难免会有磕磕绊绊，面对矛盾，多一份包容和谅解，生活 就会多一缕阳光。请用英语写一篇短文谈谈生活中你原谅他人的一次经历，主要内容包括：你们之间发生了什么，你为什么原谅了对方，以及原谅对方之后的感受。字数80字左右。 注意：不得出现真实的校名和人名。 提示词语：forgive原谅
提示问题：What happened between you and him/her? Why did you decide to forgive him/her? How did you feel after forgiving him/her? I still remember what happened between ...
【答案】I still remember what happened between my friend Mike and me. Two months ago, Mike invited me to go to a concert at seven o'clock. I got there on time. I waited for a long time, but Mike didn't show up in the end. I called him and asked him what happened. He forgot all about the concert. He was playing computer games at home at that time.
I got angry with Mike because he hurt my feelings. Mike also realized his mistake. He called me several times and said sorry to me. He even sent me a present to make me happy. Finally I forgave him. After forgiving him, I felt relaxed and happy. 【解析】 【详解】
这是一篇话题作文，请用英语写一篇短文谈谈生活中你原谅他人的一次经历，主要内容包括: 你们之间发生了什么，你为什么原谅了对方，以及原谅对方之后的感受。字数80字左右。本文人称主要第一人称，时态主要是一般过去时。认为阅读材料，认真审题，确定主题，认真阅读提示问题（1.What happened between you and him/her? 2.Why did you decide to forgive him/her? 3.How did you feel after forgiving him/her?4.I still remember what happened between ...），提示问题就是本文的提示要点，确定要点，根据要点适当发挥，列出提纲。短文必须包含提示问题和提示词。字数应在80词左右。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：
我还记得我朋友迈克和我之间发生的事。两个月前，迈克邀请我七点钟去听音乐会。我准时到达那里。我等了很长时间，但迈克最终没有出现。我打电话问他发生了什么事。他把音乐会的一切都忘了。那时他在家里玩电脑游戏。
我生迈克的气是因为他伤害了我的感情。迈克也意识到了他的错误。他给我打了好几次电话，向我道歉。他甚至送我一件礼物让我开心。最后我原谅了他。原谅他之后，我感到轻松愉快。 【点睛】
书面表达题要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，信息表达清晰、完整，意思连贯。要学以致用。（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。（2）列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。（3）切忌堆砌词语、句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。注意表达的顺序。 （4）注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。 （5）注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。
8．（·富顺第三中学校中考模拟） 朋友是我们生活的组成部分，他们总是在我们最需要帮助的时候陪伴我们。你最好的朋友是谁？你是怎么看待你们的友谊的？请以“My Best
Friend ”为题，根据以下提示写一篇英语短文。 1. 简要介绍你最好的朋友的外貌和性格; 2. 介绍和你朋友之间发生的一件令人难忘的事； 3. 你是怎样看待你们之间的友谊的 要求：
1. 语句连贯通顺，文章衔接紧密 2. 词数80-100
3. 文中不得出现真实校名及姓名
Friends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】My best friend
Friends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need. Everyone needs friends to talk with and get confidence from.
My best friend is Jenny. She is a quiet girl. She is always friendly and helpful. She is a tall girl with long hair. She does well in all the subjects and gets on well with others at school.
I was weak in maths. One day, I failed in maths exam. I was so sad that I couldn’t help crying. Jenny encouraged me a lot. From then on, she helped me with my maths, With her help, I got an A in the next maths exam. I was really thankful to her.
I think friendship is a necessary part of our lives. I want to keep our friendship forever. 【解析】 【详解】
试题分析：这是一个提纲作文。题目给出了标题及写作要点。根据题目要求可知，人称以第三人称为主。时态为一般现在时和一般过去时。我们要做的就是用正确的英语句子来组织这些材料，在描写外貌和性格时，会用到系表结构，注意主谓一致关系。介绍发生的一件难忘的事情，要用到一般过去时态。另外在写作时可以适当使用一些连词，使之上下连贯，合乎逻辑。 【点睛】
人物介绍是记叙文中常见的一种写作类型。内容可以是介绍自己也可以介绍他人，包括姓名、年龄、外貌特征、兴趣爱好，有时也可以包括日常活动。时态为一般现在时态。在介绍长相时用“be+形容词”来描述人物的身高、体重、身材等；用“have/has +
（straight/curly） hair / （big/small） eyes/nose/mouth”来描述头发或五官。用“wear + 某种衣服”来介绍某人的穿戴。用be good at doing sth.来介绍特长，用like sth./doing sth.best或“My/His/her favorite + 名词+ is …”来介绍某人的最爱。当主语是第三人称单数时，注意主谓一致关系。
9．（·江苏中考模拟）假如你是李明，将参加今年暑期的澳大利亚悉尼新南威尔士语言学
校的游学活动（study tour）, 该项目的负责人Mike给你发来了封电子邮件征询你对此次游学活动的想法和建议。请阅读以下信息，并回复一封电子邮件。
注意事项：
1. 文章所写内容必须包括邮件中的问题所涉及的所有信息。
2. 文章要求语意通顺，条理清楚，书写规范，不能出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 3. 文章词数在100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m glad to receive your email and I have read it carefully. I have decided to live in _______________
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I’m really looking forward to this study tour! Many thanks, Li Ming
【答案】例文：Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m glad to receive your email and I have read it carefully. I have decided to live in the Green family. The old couple have no children but two dogs, so they will have more time to
communicate with me in English and I can play with their pets as well. Their flat is in the centre of Sydney, so it’s easy for me to go around. I can also use the Wi-fi to keep in touch with my parents. My family can afford the cost of 350 pounds.
译林版中考英语中考英语总复习书面表达技巧和方法外研版及练习题
