译林版中考英语中考英语总复习书面表达技巧和方法外研版及练习题
一、中考英语书面表达汇编 1．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
紧张而又忙碌的初中生活即将结束，在装载你收获的行囊——成长记录袋时还应增添一份你自己满意的答卷。请以“My Unforgettable Middle School Life”为题写一篇文章，记录你过去三年中难忘的校园生活，并描述自己对将来学习生活的期望。文章应包括以下要点：
1.学到了很多知识，真的很感激老师的帮助。 2.和同学相处得很好，互相学习，彼此帮过去三年校园生活所得 助。 3.喜欢帮助贫困学生，尽自己最大的努力帮助有需要的人。 4…….（补充1-2点所得） 1.不太爱好体育运动。 过去三年校园生活所失 2.有时上学迟到。 3. ……（补充1-2点所失） 今后的学习打算 ……（1-2句话描述自己未来的打算） 要求：
① 词数100左右；
② 短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数；
③ 文中需包括所有写作要点，但不要逐字翻译，可适当加入过渡词句，使短文通顺、连贯；
④ 文中不能出现考生真实姓名和学校名称。
评分标准：语言规范，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯，书写工整。 My Unforgettable School Life
How time flies! My colorful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think of about myself.
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【答案】How time files! My colorful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think of about myself.
In the past three years, I have learnt a lot of knowledge. I was really grateful to our teachers for their help. I got on well with my classmates. We learned from each other. I had any interests such as reading books, drawing pictures and so on. However, I was not good at sports. Sometimes I was late for school. The teachers were very angry with me.
In the future, I will have more sports and try to plan my time carefully. I’ll try my best to do better. 【解析】1. 接着正文写下来，将所给要点翻译出来，分三部分来写，写出“三年所得、三年所失、未来的打算。
2. 先翻译关键词再来组句。在过去In the past，学到了很多知识learn a lot of knowledge, 对某人感激be grateful to sb, 对我们的老师感激be grateful to our teachers，和同学相处得很好get on well with my classmates, 互相学习，彼此帮助help each other and learn from each other.贫困学生poor students, 尽自己最大的努力try my best to do, 上学迟到be late for school不太爱好体育运动I am not good at sports，在未来In the future…，简要写出自己对未来的规划。
3. 由于前面所提三年所得、三年所失皆为过去，所以时态上要用一般过去式，最后一项对将来的规划，用一般将来时。
4. 最后一项对未来的规划，既是对所得所失的理解，也是对未来的展望。 5. 写句子时要注意人称和数要一致。
2．（·四川中考模拟）书面表达
目前，学生考试作弊现象严重，请围绕以下要点谈谈其中原因以及个人建议。 原因：1.考试太滥 2.自身勤奋不够
3.把大量时间用在上网和玩游戏上 4.为了骗取家长和老师高兴
看法与建议：1.作弊有害； 2.要做人诚实，学习发奋； 3.学校应减少考试。 要求：1.字数 80-100； 2.围绕要点可适当发挥； 3.文章开头已给出，不计入总字数。 ________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit-cheating in examinations.
There are three main reasons. First, schools have given students too many exams, some of which are too difficult. Second, some students are not hard-working and they don't work hard at their lessons. Third, they waste a lot of time playing games or surfing the Internet. So they haven't enough time to prepare for the exams. Finally, students have to do so to make their teachers and parents happy.
In my opinion, cheating in exams does great harm to our study. We students should be honest and diligent, and only in this way can we improve our study and make progress. Besides, our teachers should offer us fewer exams and more time to study for ourselves. 【解析】写作分析：
本文需要就考试作弊这一主题展开讨论。具体需要围绕考试作弊的原因展开写作，原因已经给出来了，有以下几点：1.考试太滥 2.自身勤奋不够 3.把大量时间用在上网和玩游戏上 4.为了骗取家长和老师高兴。写完原因后还要提出自己的看法和建议，具体内容也已给出：1.作弊有害；2.要做人诚实，学习发奋；3.学校应减少考试。写作内容上难度不大，需要把更多精力放在语言的准确性和文章的连贯性上面。
写作亮点：
第一段总起描述了现在存在的作弊现象，用到了一些较好的短语，如picked up a bad habit（养成了一个坏习惯）。第二段对原因进行了阐述，借助了first，second，third等词使得原因的陈述连贯起来。一些短语运用准确，如waste a lot of time playing games（浪费时间在玩游戏上），prepare for the exams（准备考试）。最后一段阐明了自己的看法（In my opinion），句式上面有创新，用到了一处倒装句（only in this way can we improve our study and make progress），强调了不能作弊，只有以诚实和勤奋的方式我们才能进步。总体来说文章写作较为流畅，有许多亮点。
3．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
流感季通常在每年的10月份到3月份爆发，据报道114个美国孩子在今年2月死于流感。流感季节我们应该如何保持健康呢？ 易患病人群 老人和孩子 1. 免疫系统弱； 原因 2. 流感知识缺乏：流感病毒引起流感；口、鼻、手传播； 公共场所人与人近距离传播； 3. …… （至少1点） 1. 多锻炼； 预防措施 2. 注意保暖； 3. …… （至少1点） 要求:1. 所写内容必须包括提供的所有信息，并适当发挥； 2. 文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
参考词汇：weaker immune systems （较弱的免疫系统）；influenza virus （流感病毒） The flu （流感）season runs from October to March every year. This year it has been especially bad. It is reported that 114 children in the US died in February.
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【答案】The flu （流感）season runs from October to March every year. This year it has been especially bad. It is reported that 114 children in the US died in February.
The flu hits children and elderly people the hardest. This is because they have weaker immune system. It is easy for them to get the flu.
In fact, most people don’t know much about the flu. The influenza virus causes the flu. The virus can get on your hands. If you touch your nose or mouth, you can get the flu. Because some patients pay no attention to the flu, it starts very suddenly and spreads from person to person closely in public.
How do we keep the flu away? We should get lots of rest and exercise. Put on enough clothes to
keep warm. Take a shower every day and wash hands often. Remember if anyone around us has the flu, take it seriously and make sure they go to the hospital as soon as possible.
【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如from to，every year，get the flu，in fact，get on，pay no attention to，spread from，person to person，in public，keep away，lots of，put on，take a shower，make sure，go to the hospital，as soon as possible等。而It is reported that 114 children in the US died in February./ If you touch your nose or mouth, you can get the flu./ Because some patients pay no attention to the flu, it starts very suddenly and spreads from person to person closely in public.等多种从句结构的运用，使本文内容丰富，表达流畅，是本文的最大亮点。 点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
4．（·广东中考模拟）随着社会的发展，通讯的方式从远古时代的书信到当今的互联网，经历着巨大的变化。请你写一篇短文，谈谈你对现代通讯工具的使用及看法。内容包括： 1. 你喜欢使用的通讯方式有哪些？ 2. 它们的优点和缺点是什么？
3. 你认为使用现代通讯工具要注意什么？
要求：1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现真实的学校名称和姓名；2. 语意连贯，词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods now. As for me, 【答案】As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods now. As for me, I prefer to chat with others by mobile phone, but sometimes I chat by communication software, such as WeChat and QQ.
Mobile phones bring great convenience to people, but people can only hear the sound by phones. By using net software, we can easily see the people we talk to on the Internet. However, sometimes we concern more about mobile phones instead of the people around.
In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the face to face communication and try not to waste too much time on mobile phones. 【解析】 【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，谈谈我对现代通讯工具的使用及看法。 【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：there are……，I prefer to……，Mobile phones bring……，we can……，we should……，So let’s……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。 【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我喜欢使用的通讯方式有哪些；接下来介绍它们的优点和缺点是什么，以及使用现代通讯工具要注意什么；最后呼吁号召大家合理使用现代通讯工具。此处prefer to do sth, by phones, on the Internet, concern about, in one’s opinion, try one’ s best等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
5．（·安徽中考模拟）书面表达
假如你是华,你的英国笔友对中国文化很感兴趣,想到中国旅行感受中国文化。你想请他来你的家乡一安徴一游,请你根据以下提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件。 1位置:中国东部,安做省南部: 2.气候:春暖花开,秋季凉爽 3.景点:山和古村落: 4.文化:茶、黄梅戏 5.建议
提示词:黄梅戏 Huangmei Opera 注意:1.词数80-100
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。 3.文中不得出现自己真实的校名和人名 4.开头和结展己给出,不计入总词数 Dear Dave
I know that you are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not come to Anhui, my home town, to have fun? 【答案】Dear Dave，
I know you are interested in Chinese culture and I’m glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not come to Anhui, my hometown, to have some fun.
Anhui Province lies in the east of China. The best time to come here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats. There are many famous places to see. For example, Mt. Huangshan, where you will see wonderful plants and special rocks. Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on. As a fan of Chinese culture, don’t forget to try green tea in Anhui which smells good and tastes better. What’s more, come and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down! Welcome to Anhui! I’m looking forward to seeing you here! Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给自己的笔友Dave写信，邀请他来你的家乡—安徽一游，题目中列出了文章的提纲，审题可知，短文应从以下几个内容叙述：首先介绍家乡的位置；然后介绍来这里最好的时候；接下来是介绍家乡的景点和文化，并给出建议。短文应使用一般现在时，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应合理安排几个内容，分清主次，并注意上下文的连贯。另外，英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，因此写作时不能按照汉语思
译林版中考英语中考英语总复习书面表达技巧和方法外研版及练习题
