节假日的英语作文 [小学英语六年级作文范文-节假日旅行计划或回忆]
In the park It is sunny today .My mother, my father and I are going to the park. We like the park very much. It is very big and beautiful .There are many trees and flowers in it. Many people like to go there. Look! An old man is sitting on the chair. He is reading a book carefully. Two boys are jumping on the ground. Their mothers are talking with each other. Two birds are flying in the sky. The ducks are swimming in the river. They are very happy. What is the cat doing? Oh, it is running after a mouse. It’s a poor mouse. 【要领点评】 写法:这篇习作是用现在进行时描绘出公园里的人和动物们正在进行的活动还运用了一般现在时叙述了公园美丽的景色。
时态:这篇文章可以采用一般现在时和现在进行时两种时态,由于本单元的语法项目是现在进行时,因此,描述的重点要放在现在进行时态上。
句型:一般现在时:主语+谓语+其他 现在进行时:(1)What +be (am,is ,are)+主语+v.-ing+其他? (2)主语+be(am,is ,are)+ v.-ing+其他。
Last Weekend I had a happy weekend last week. On Saturday morning, I watched TV and helped my mother wash clothes. In the afternoon, I cleaned three bedrooms in my house-- mine, my parents’ and my brother’s. On Sunday, I played football in the park. Then I went to my grandparents’ house. Grandpa played the piano! The whole family was so happy. Later, we wanted to swim. But it was too cold. This was last weekend. This is my classroom , it is very nice. I like my classroom very much . Do you have a nice classroom, too ? Let’s have a nice day It’s Sunday tomorrow .I’m going to the bookstore with my friends tomorrow morning .We are going to look for some good books .We all like reading books .We are going to eat our lunch at the restaurant. I like chicken, beef and vegetables .After lunch, we are going to the Summer Palace by bus. We are going to play near the Kunming Lake. Maybe we are going to row a boat on
the lake .Wow, that will be relaxing. We are coming back at 5pm. 【要领点评】 怎样才称得上是“美好的一天”?有两点不能忘记,一是安排得充实,二是安排得有意义。这两点小作者无疑都想到了,上午去书店看书买书,中午在饭店吃饭,下午去颐和园玩耍、划船,丰富多彩!文章以时间为线索,叙述清楚,文笔也很优美。
小朋友们在写这种叙事的文章时,要尽量给读者交代好时间、地点、人物和活动等,使文章有血有肉。要看好是写过去发生的事情,还是现在正在做的事情,或计划、打算要做的事情,以选择适当的句型。如果是写将来的事情,那么就要注意在表述时多用“be going to+动词原形”这种句型。还有一点也很重要,那就是故事的线索要交代好,让读者在阅读时对整个过程一目了然。
根据给出的材料,写一写Mike这个周末的活动计划。 Saturday Sunday read a magazine go to the zoo Buy a book Learn kongfu watch TV Mike is a student. He is my good friend. He is busy at the weekend. He is going to read a magazine this Saturday morning. He is going to go to the zoo this Saturday afternoon. He is going to buy a book this
Sunday morning. He is going to learn Kungfu this Sunday afternoon. He is going to watch TV this Sunday evening. My Birthday Party Every year, when it’s birthday, my parents hold a party for me. They invite my friend to come to my house to celebrate my birthday. I can get many beautiful gifts every year. In my party, we can do many things: 1. Light the candles. 2. Sing a “Happy Birthday” song. 3. Make a wish. 4. Blow out the candles. 5. Cut off the cake. 6. Eat the cake. 7. Open the presents. 8. Sing and dance. 9. Watch videos or play other games. 10. Say goodbye with each other. That’s my birthday party, is it interesting? 【要领点评】 写法:这篇习作是按活动的顺序来写的,记叙了生日晚会的各项具体活动,比较全面。比较以前几个单元的写作写法,这个短文按活动顺序比较合适。
时态:这篇短文可以用三种时态来写:
1、一般将来时:主要说明生日晚会份的各项计划,都将如何进行。
2、一般现在时:主要说明习惯上如何度过每个生日。 3、一般过去时:主要说明你的生日晚会是如何进行的。
句型:invite sb. to do sth. 邀请某人做某事 注意:由于这篇短文很有局限性,所表达的大体上都基本相同,所以在书写的时候要注意结合自己的实际活动与真情实感去写。另外注意一些短语和单词的书写不要发生错误:
eg.“吹蜡烛”要写成“blow out the candles”而不能写成“blow candles”。
My Days of the week I’m a student and I am in Grade 5.I get up at six o’clock every day. I have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven o’clock. I have classes from Monday to Saturday. I have an English class on Friday and I have a PE class on Tuesday. I don’t have to go to school on school, and I like to go swimming on that day. 【要领点评】 这篇作文的题目是“我的一周”,小作者没有说一些空话,而是从自己的亲身经历写起,叙述了自己一周七天的所作所为,并特别强调了星期天的喜好,写得自然、流畅。
小朋友们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化,要依据提示,结合自己的实际,写自己身边熟悉的事情。
MY HAPPY WEEKEND OK, let me tell you something about my weekend. I am going to do many things and be very busy on