专题26 短文改错
1.【2019·全国I】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoon where I was in primary school, I was walking by the school playground. Suddenly football fell just in front of me but almost hit me. I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground. To everyone`s surprising, the ball went into the net. All the football player on the playground cheered loudly, say that I had a talent for football. From now on, I started to play my football with classmates after school. I am a good player now. 【答案】interesting→interested where→when football前面加上a but→and hardly→hard surprising→surprise player→players say→saying now→then 去掉my
【解析】本文是一篇记叙文。由于一次偶然的经历，“我”喜欢上了踢足球，后来经过自己努力，我成了一名优秀球员。
1. interesting改为interested 考查形容词用法。“interest（使感兴趣；使关注）”的形容词有interesting（使人感兴趣的）常修饰物；与interested（表现出兴趣的）常修饰人。本句的意思为：多亏一个偶然的事件，我对踢足球产生了兴趣。主语是I，故将interesting改为interested。
2. where改为when考查定语从句。先行词one afternoon表示时间在定语从句中作状语，所以关系词使用
when。故将where改为when。
3. 在football前加a。考查冠词。名词football为可数名词，前边需要有限定词。这里football第一次出现，故在football前加a。
4. but改为and 考查连词。句意：突然一个足球落在我前边并且差点打到我。“足球落下来”与“打到我”两个动作是顺承关系，不是转折关系。故将but改为and。
5. hardly改为hard 考查副词。hard（努力地；费力地）与hardly（几乎不；几乎没有）都为副词，但是词义不同。文中表示我挡住足球，并使劲地将它踢回操场，故将hardly改为hard。
6. surprising改为surprise考查固定搭配。“to one’s + 名词”意为“令某人……”，此处为to one’s surprise意为“让某人惊讶的是”。故将surprising改为surprise。
7. player改为players。考查名词的数。player（运动员）为可数名词，此时all（所有的）后需要用player的复数形式。故将player改为players。
8. say改为saying。考查非谓语动词。句中谓语动词为cheered，say在这里作伴随状语。与主语players是主动关系，故将say改为saying。
9. now改为then考查上下文逻辑。结合语境可知，文中指从那时开始，我放学后跟同学一起踢足球。表示“从那时起”需用from then on，故将now改为then。
10. 将my去掉 考查固定搭配。 踢足球的英语表达“play football”，中间不能加冠词或者代词。故将my去掉。2.【2019·全国II】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Since I was a kid, I`ve considered different job I would like to do. First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered mg goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need. 【答案】job→jobs coolly→cool
five→fifth too→very/so
chemistry后面加上in/at or→and They→There amazing→amazed 去掉more is→was
【解析】本文是一篇记叙文，讲述了“我”随着年龄的变化对未来职业选择的变化。
71. job改为jobs 考查名词。本句中的different表示“不同的”，后面的名词job应该使用复数形式，故job改为jobs。
72. coolly改为cool考查形容词。looked是系动词，表示“看起来”，后面使用形容词作表语，故coolly改为cool。
73.five改为fifth考查序数词。“在五年级”有两种表达方式。in the+序数词+grade，或者使用in Grade 5的形式。故five改为fifth。
74. too改为very/so考查副词。too much表示“太多”，而very/so much表示“非常”，故改为very或so。 75.在high前面加at/in考查介词。在高中，短语为at/in high school。故在high前面加at/in。
76. or改为and考查连词。本句中的reconsidered和decided这两个谓语动作是递进关系，故or改为and。 77.They改为There考查副词。考查存在句，应该是there be句型，故将They改为There。
78.amazing改为amazed考查非谓语动词。根据前面的主语I可知，后面应该使用amazed表示“感到惊奇”。 79.去掉more考查形容词比较级。本句中better本身已经是比较级，前面只需要much来修饰，改变程度，more是多余的。故删除more。
80. is改为was考查时态。综合分析全文，从开始的第一句话就知道作者描述自己过去的事情，因此将is改为was。
3.【2019·全国III】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I've had many dreams since I was a child. Now my dream is to opens a cafe. Though it may appear simple, it required a lot of ideas and efforts. What I want is not just an ordinarily cafe but a very special one. I want my cafe have a special theme such as like \environment what is created for them. If I succeed in manage one, I will open more. I wish to have a chain of cafes in many different city. Each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style. 【答案】
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【解析】 本文是一篇说明文。文章讲述了“我”的梦想——要开一家别有韵味，与众不同的咖啡馆。 1. opens改为open考查非谓语动词。此处指我的梦想是开一家咖啡馆。句中需用不定式to do作表语。故将opens改为open。
2. required改为requires考查动词时态。句中需使用一般现在时，主语为it，谓语动词需用第三人称单数形式。故将required改为requires。
3. ordinarily改为ordinary考查形容词副词。修饰名词作前置定语，此处应用形容词表示“一家普通的咖啡馆”。故将ordinarily改为ordinary。
4. 在my cafe后加to 考查非谓语动词。根据短语want sb. to do sth 可知需加上 to，此处为不定式作宾补。故在my cafe后加to。
5. 去掉such as后的like考查固定短语。such as意为“比方说……”，用来列举，后面无需加上like。故将like去掉。
6. yourselves改为themselves 考查反身代词前后一致。此处指顾客们在这种氛围中会很开心，需用第三人称单数形式的反身代词，且为复数形式。故将yourselves改为themselves。
7. what改为that/which考查定语从句。分析可知先行词为environment，指物，定语从句中缺少主语，需用关系代词that或者which。故将what改为that或者which。
8.manage改为managing考查非谓语动词。in为介词，后接动词时需用动名词。故将manage改为managing。 9. city→cities考查名词的数。many修饰可数名词的复数。故将city改为cities。
10. 答案 an→a 考查冠词。unique为辅音音素发音的单词，用不定词时需用a。故将an改为a。 4.【2018·全国I】短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的次。 删除：把多余的用斜线（\\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：(1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
(2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第l1处起）不计分。
During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They also had a small pond which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed.
【答案】During my last winter holiday, I went to
countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I
a change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and animals. Last winter when I went also had a small pond the fish. I felt
again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of
. They
they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by
that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return
2020年高考英语精选考点专项突破26 短文改错（含解析）
