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in need.
5. With the spirit of voluntary work rooted in my heart, I am sure that I can be a qualified volunteer you need.
6. If I am honored enough to be accepted as a volunteer, I will serve the players heart and soul.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步:连句成篇(衔接词) as;in addition;also;and;if等
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰, 第五步:润色修改 【点睛】
范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多句型,如:My name is Li Hua, a high school student in our city.使用了同位语;Knowing that the sports meeting will be held in our city, I can’t wait to write to you to apply to be a volunteer.使用了现在分词作状语;I am also good at communicating with others and eager to lend a hand to people in need.使用了and连接的并列句;With the spirit of voluntary work rooted in my heart, I am sure that I can be a qualified volunteer you need使用了with伴随状语和that引导的宾语从句;If I am honored enough to be accepted as a volunteer, I will serve the players heart and soul.使用了if引导的条件状语从句等;还使用了一些固定短语:can’t wait to,apply to,be good at,communicate with,be eager to,lend a hand,in need,heart and soul,look forward to,hear from等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。