文章使用了很好的短语和句子:In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games.这些给文章增色不少。
6.人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文,介绍人们不同的观点,并表达自己的看法。 赞成的理由 1. 广交朋友 2. 可自由表达思想 3. 有利于外语学习 反对的理由 1. 浪费时间 2. 影响学习 3. 可能上当受骗(be cheated) 你的看法 1. ... 2. ... 注意:1. 所写内容必须包括表中各方观点并进行合理拓展。 2. 词数80词左右,短文的开头已给出(不计入总词数)。
Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people
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【答案】Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people think students should make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies. But others think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.
It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us. 【解析】 【分析】
整体分析:这是一篇提纲话题作文。是一篇议论文,第一段要写赞同学生网上交友的人的观点,第二段要写反对学生网上交友的观点,第三段要表述作者自己的观点。 【详解】
本篇作文要求作者就上网交友发表意见,写作之前要认真阅读所给提示,确定文章中心。注意文体、人称和时态。文章要有层次、流畅。可以适当发挥,写作中适当使用连词,注
意上下文的紧密联系,要符合逻辑关系。 【点睛】
这类作文的写作方法要注意认真审题,可以分三段写:赞成;反对;你的看法。注意过渡性语言的使用。做到:要点要全,表达要清晰明确,使用短语,句型要准确,注意避免拼写和语法错误。
7. 书面表达
请将短文写在答题卡相应的位置上。
一直以来,同学们对作业持有不同的观点。在你班的主题班会上,同学们进行了“Is daily homework necessary?”的讨论,请你根据提示和要求,并结合自己的实际经验,发表你的观点。 Yes No Help us understand what we have learned; Practice makes prefect;... Take up too much time; Make us less interested in studying;... Your opinion: 要求: 1.80词以上。
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 【答案】Dear students,
I'm glad to give a report about my ideas on daily homework. I think it's necessary for us to do daily homework.
Doing daily homework can help us understand what we have learned in class. For me, I always have some difficulties in mastering all of what I have learned in class. Through daily homework, I review the knowledge and think over the difficulties. Little by little, I have a better understanding. So I always believe “Practice makes perfect”.
In my opinion, daily homework is necessary for us students. But it shouldn't be too much. It can improve our skills. Daily homework should be different and colorful. It might be some extensive reading, a paper or even just a game. We should be left enough free time so that we can do things we really like to do.
That's all. Thanks.
【解析】写作分析:审题之后能明白写作任务是要写出一篇小论文,讨论每日的作业到底是不是必要的。首先需要陈述正反两方面的观点,其次结合自己的实际经验,发表自己的观点。写作过程中要注意逻辑准确,注意正确使用连词,借助实例、实际经验来佐证自己的观点。
写作亮点:首先用一个自然段来阐明写作的主题,表达出自己的观点(认为作业是很必要的),可以借助it is necessary for sb to do…这样的句型。其次,开始具体陈述观点,陈述的时候要适当使用实例,相关用到的短语有have some difficulties in doing在做…的时候有困难,review the knowledge复习知识,think over the difficulties来回思考难点,Little by little一点一点地。恰当的谚语也为文章增色不少,例如用到了“Practice makes perfect”熟能生巧这个谚语。最后可以用说理的方式来介绍做作业的必要性,例如用到了improve our skills提高我们的技能,在这里也有一点亮点,就是说作业也要有变化性,要丰富多彩,体现了作者的深度思考,总体来说出色地完成了既定的写作任务。
8.假如你是李华,你的美国朋友Jack热爱中国的唐诗宋词。最近他对母亲节你在博客里发的《游子吟》(Song of the parting son)很感兴趣,给你写信想了解该诗,请你根据以下提示给他回信: 1.作者:孟郊 2.时间:唐朝
3.内容:母亲为儿子做衣服 4.主题:母爱的伟大 注意:
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称; 2.语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
3.词数: 80-100词左右,信件的开头与结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Jack,
I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
【答案】Dear Jack,
I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son. Now I’m writing to tell you something about it.
Song of the parting son is one of the most popular Chinese poems. It was written by Meng Jiao, a famous poet in Tang Dynasty. It describes a common matter in daily life—a mother making clothes for her son, which is familiar to most of us. It mainly shows how great a mother’s love can be. In a word, this short poem has touched many people’s hearts. If you have any other questions about this poem, please tell me.
Yours, Li Hua
【解析】 【分析】
这是一篇材料作文。 【详解】
根据内容可知,这是一篇书信类文章。时态是一般现在时。人称是第一人称和第三人称。 英语作文一般分为三个部分:
第一部分:交代写信目的——朋友Jack热爱中国的唐诗宋词。我将给你介绍《游子吟》(Song of the parting son)这首诗。
第二部分:文章主体部分——具体介绍《游子吟》(Song of the parting son)这首诗。 1.作者:孟郊 2.时间:唐朝
3.内容:母亲为儿子做衣服 4.主题:母爱的伟大
第三部分:信的结语——如果对方有任何问题,可以继续问自己,并期待收到对方的来信。
9.书面表达
我校决定让学生轮流打扫厕所,以此作为教育学生的一种方式。 这件事在学生中引 起了强烈的反响,请你把下列不同意见整理成一篇书面材料,报告给学校。 同意 :1.多数学生是独生子女,不会做事。 2.学生应该学会做艰苦的工作。 3.学会理解和尊重清洁工人的劳动。
不同意:1.很脏,容易使学生生病。 2.不是学生应该做的事情。 3.打扫教室就足够了。
注意:1.短文应包括表中所有内容,可适当发挥,但不要逐字翻译; 2.不少于80词。 生词提示:respect尊重
【答案】A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor.
Some students think it is a good way of education. Now most families have only one child. They never do hard work. To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. It can also help them understand and respect the cleaners.
But others have different points. They think it is easy for them to get sick. They don’t think it is students'jobs. Cleaning the classroom every day is enough. 【解析】 【详解】
阅读题干要求,这是一篇看法类的作文,那么首先得点明讨论的话题,然后分别写出不同人群对此事的看法,时态以一般现在时为主。
重点词汇及短语:argument争论;take place发生;among(三者或三者以上)之间;a good chance for sb对某人来说是个好机会;help sb do sth帮助某人做某事;get sick生病。 亮点句型:
(1)A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor. 自从我们学校让学生做自愿劳动以来,在学生中发生了一场激烈的争论。现在完成时(have/has+done)。
(2)To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. 做义务劳动是他们学习如何做困难工作的好机会。动词不定式作主语,谓语动词用单数,疑问词+to do。
10.中央电视台《经典咏流传》节目的播出,再次激发了人们对经典文学作品的阅读热情。读书可以成就更美好的自己,让读书伴随我们成长。请根据以下要点提示,以“Growing up with Reading”为题写一篇英语短文介绍你曾经读过的一本书或—首诗,并建议大家多读书,读好书。 要点提示:
1. 获取知识,开阔眼界; 读书的重要性 2. 提升自我,增强自信…… 1. 作品内容简介; 读过的一本书或 一首诗 2. 读书感悟及对自己的影响。 1. 利用闲暇时间多读书,养成读书的好习惯; 多读书,读好书 2. 多读经典文学作品…… 注意:
1. 短文应包括以上要点,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯。 2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、学校及地名。 3. 词数:80-100(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:classic 经典作品; open up one’s eyes 开阔眼界;improve oneself 提升自我; be more confident 更自信;responsibility 责任;cooperation 合作。