important reason why I consider Sun as my favorite character.
Classics open up a window to different worlds and different cultures. I do hope that Chinese classic literature will deepen your understanding of China.
Yours, Li Hua
【解析】
本文考查提纲类写作。介绍你最爱的四大名著中的某个人物以及原因。
第1步:根据提示可知,假如你是李华,你的英国笔友 Tom 正在学习中文,了解到中国四大名著(China's four great classics)的知识并写信与你交流。作为一名古典文学爱好者,你很高兴地回信给他, 介绍你最爱的四大名著中的某个人物(character)以及原因。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),句型:thanks to,There is no denying that ...,known as, allow sb. to do, fight against,to some extent,in the face of ,open up等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。 【点睛】
范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如There is no denying that so many fantastic characters have been created by ancient Chinese novelists. 是同位语从句固定句型;Through Taoist practices, he learns the 72 transformations, allowing him to transform into various animals and objects.运用了非谓语动词;Sun Wukong is so brave to fight against various evil spirits all the way and he is so faithful to his master Tangseng despite misunderstanding, making the journey to the western paradise successful. 运用了并列句和不定式以及现在分词。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
5. 【2020届广西省桂林市第十八中学高三上学期第四次月考】假定你是李华,得知你市要举办中外图书展览。请给你的外教Alien发一封电子邮件,邀请他一同前往,内容包括: 1. 写信目的;
2. 展览简介(时间、地点和内容)。 注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear Alien,
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Yours, Li Hua
【答案】Dear Allen,
I’m writing to invite you to see the Chinese and Foreign Book Exhibition. I believe it’ll attract a steady stream of visitors.
The exhibition will be held in the Provincial Library. It’ll start at 8:00 am on Saturday and end at 5:00 pm, 30th Nov. It’s said that a large number of Chinese and foreign books, some of which are written by world famous writers, will be on display. Besides, the book narrator will introduce to us the books we are interested in. We’ll not only know more about Chinese and foreign writers, but also appreciate their works. So I can’t wait to make an appointment with you to go to see it.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours, Li Hua
【解析】
这是一篇提纲类写作。
第1步:根据提示可知,假定你是李华,得知你市要举办中外图书展览。请给你的外教Alien发一封电子邮件,邀请他一同前往,内容包括:1. 写信目的;2. 展览简介(时间、地点和内容)。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):the Chinese and Foreign Book Exhibition (中外图书展览);attract (吸引);a large number of (很多);be on display(展出)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美
观的卷面是非常重要的。
6. 【2020届四川内江市高三二模】假定你叫李华。你班外教Mr.Baker要求每个同学制定一个“班级英语角”的计划,并在班上向全班同学说明。请你用英语写一个英语角计划,内容包括: 1. 英语角目的; 2. 时间和地点; 3. 英语角内容。 注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear classmates,
I'm very glad to share my English Corner Plan with you. In order to promote our interest in learning English and improve our oral English, I' m planning to set up an English Corner in our classroom, which will last one hour from 5:00 to 6:00 every Friday afternoon.
At the Corner, you can talk with your partners about everything that you are interested in, For example, you can discuss what you have learnt this week. Or you can describe something interesting that happened in class.
Every one of you is welcome to the Corner. Meanwhile, I'd like to invite our foreign teacher, Mr. Baker, to join the Corner. I'm sure all of you will enjoy yourselves here.
That's all for my plan. Thank you! 【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一份“班级英语角”计划。 人称:第一、二人称
时态:一般现在时、一般将来时
结构:总分法,分三部分,第一部分说明设立英语角的目的,第二部分关于英语角的具体安排,第三部分欢迎大家参加英语角。 要点:
1. 设立英语角目的:提高学生对学习英语的兴趣,提高英语口语 2.英语角的具体安排
①时间和地点:在本班教室,每周五下午5点到6点
②英语角的内容:与同学交谈感兴趣的话题,可以谈论你学到的东西,也可以描述班上有趣的事情 3.欢迎大家参加英语角
第二步:列提纲(重点词汇、短语 )
share …with …;promote;interest;improve oral English;set up;last;talk with;be interested in;discuss;describe;invite;join;enjoy oneself 第三步:连词成句
(1) I'm very glad to share my English Corner Plan with you.
(2) The English Corner is aimed to promote our interest in learning English and improve our oral English. (3) I' m planning to set up an English Corner in our classroom.
(4) The English Corner will last one hour from 5:00 to 6:00 every Friday afternoon. (5) You can talk with your partners about everything that you are interested in. (6) You can discuss what you have learnt. (7) Every one of you is welcome to the Corner.
(8) I'd like to invite our foreign teacher, Mr. Baker, to join the Corner.
根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型,注意时态和主谓一致问题。 第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
表示时间顺序: First of all; to begin/start with ,In the beginning Firstly....Secondly.... Lastly / Finally/ In the end
表示并列或补充关系:what is more; besides, moreover , apart from; in addition, as well as;not only…but (also), meanwhile, in the meantime, some...some…others
表示转折对比关系:but, however, although, though, yet, while, on one hand…on the other hand... 表示因果关系:because, as, therefore, As a result , as a consequence , consequently , thus
连句成文,运用恰当的衔接词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,使句与句之间逻辑性更强、段与段之间结构清晰。
范文要点全面,结构清晰,过渡词的运用如for example , meanwhile ,使文章层次分明,上下文连贯,在表达时用到了很多高级词汇,如 share …with …与某人分享……;promote促进;improve oral English提高英语
口语;set up建立;last持续;talk with与某人交谈;be interested in对……感兴趣;discuss讨论;invite邀请;join参加;enjoy oneself玩得高兴等;复杂句式的运用提升了文章层次,如目的状语的运用In order to promote our interest in learning English and improve our oral English;定语从句的运用which will last one hour from 5:00 to 6:00 every Friday afternoon;宾语从句的运用you can discuss what you have learnt等。
7. 【2020届陕西省西安中学高三第三次模拟】假如你是李华,你的英国笔友 Tom 听说中国爆发了新型冠状病毒疫情,非常担心你的处境,特来信询问,请你给他写封回信,内容包括: 1. 感谢他的关心;2. 你的应对措施;3. 你的盼望。注意:1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
词汇:新型冠状病毒肺炎 novel coronavirus pneumonia;流行病 epidemic Dear Tom,
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Yours, Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
With grateful thanks, I’m writing to extend my sincere appreciation for all your care and concern, which is undoubtedly a great encouragement and support for our ongoing anti-coronavirus epidemic campaign.
To check the quick spread of the deadly virus, home quarantine is the top priority for all Chinese. Every family in our city is allowed to do some shopping outside their neighborhood once every two days. As for us students, thanks to various online communication apps, Tencent Class for instance, we interact with our dear “cyber celebrity” teachers through live-streaming classes, but the prolonged screen time takes a heavy toll on my eyes, so I’ve come up with creative indoor relaxations such as dancing, singing and drawing to keep up my health.
I’m definitely convinced that with joint efforts of the whole nation, China will win the battle and make a quick recovery. Thanks again and I will be exceedingly delighted to repay your kindness by showing you around my city in the coming summer vacation.
Yours,