第4个要点的内容须适当发挥； 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
These years the haze weather appears more and more often.
答案These years the haze weather appears more and more often. Because of the haze weather, students have fewer outdoor activities than before.
People have to wear masks when they go out. Also, there are more traffic accidents on the road.
Air pollution has become a serious problem. It is bad for our health. Everyone should take action to protect the environment. For example, we can change our life style. We can ride bikes or take buses when we go out. I plan to plant more trees in the future.
18、书面表达（共15分）
请根据以下提示，以“Tom's lifestyle”为题，写一篇不少于50词的短文。
提示：1．Tom今年13岁
2．他经常吃汉堡、鸡肉 ，但很少吃蔬菜和水果； 3．他两顿饭之间还吃甜点，很少运动；
4．他打算每天跑步30分钟，每周游泳两次；多吃蔬菜，多喝水，
答案Tom's lifestyle
Tom is 13 year old. He often eats hamburgers, chicken. He seldom eats vegetables and fruits.He also eats dessert between two meals and seldom exercises.He is going to run for 30 minutes every day, swim two times a week. He plans to eat more vegetables and drink plenty of water.
19、书面表达。(10分)
请你以David的身份给Mary写一封信, 介绍你自己和你家人的情况。你可以谈谈他们的工作和他们所喜欢的食品。信的开头和末尾已经给出。你需要用下面的提示词: family, happy, teacher, doctor, fish, chicken, vegetables。要求50词左右。 Dear Mary,
I’m David. I’m from England.
_____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ Yours, David
答案Dear Mary,
I’m David. I’m from England. I want to tell you about my family. Four people are in my family. They’re my mother, my father, my sister and I. My father is an English teacher. He likes fish very much. My mother is a doctor. She likes cooking. Chicken is her favourite food. My sister Julia and I are in the same school. We don’t like eating vegetables. But my parents tell us to eat vegetables. They are good for us. Look! We have a happy family. Yours,
20、书面表达（15分）
作为一名七年级学生，请你结合实际情况，并根据下面的问题提示，写一篇60词左右的英语短文，可适当发挥。文章开头已给出，不计入词数。 What subjects do you have this term? What’s your favorite subject? Why do you like it?
Who is your teacher and how is his / her class? When do you have it?
答案Hello, everyone. I am Jack. I am in Class 2, Grade 7. I’d like to tell you my favorite subject at school. I learn many subjects, such as Chinese, English, maths, history and so on. My favorite subject is English. I like it because it is very interesting. I can learn more about different cultures. Also, I can make many friends. My English teacher is Miss Green. She is very kind to us. Her class is also interesting and lively. We have English class on Monday, Wednesday and Friday.
解析试题分析：这篇作文要求我们根据题目中的提示写一写自己最喜欢的科目。我们在短文中需要说明自己最喜欢的科目是什么、为什么喜欢它、你的老师是谁、他的课怎么样以及你什么时候上这门课程。通过分析可知，这篇短文我们应该使用一般现在时态，第一人称来写。这个话题是学生们比较熟悉的，我们的学习中涉及到很多科目，如语文、数学、英语等，我们可以从中选择一门科目，说明喜欢它的原因。我们可以根据这些问题的提示，将这里内容用正确的英语表达出来。分清主次，还要注意表达的先后顺序，注意上下句的衔接，使用更多的连词和短语，是文意表达流畅、完整。
【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的范文，短文中作者告诉了我们自己最喜欢的科目，以及喜欢它的原因。整篇短文的内容非常丰富，意思也很完整，层次也很分明。首先作者先点明自己在学校里都学习哪些科目，I learn many subjects, such as Chinese, English, maths, history and so on，这里作者使用了表示举例的短语such as以及短语and so on；接下来作者说明了自己最喜欢的科目是英语以及喜欢它的原因，My
favorite subject is English. I like it because it is very interesting. I can learn more about different cultures. Also, I can make many friends.这是文章的主体，所以语句比较多。最后作者提到了自己的英语老师和上英语课的时间，My English teacher is Miss Green. She is very kind to us. Her class is also interesting and lively。
21、书面表达（满分10分）
根据下面提供的信息作自我介绍，我的名字是王丽，我是一个12岁的女孩，我就读于阳光学校，我爱帮助别人，我住在学校。我父亲是一个老师，我母亲是一个医生。我爱我的父母。他们也爱我。
要求：语句通顺，表达正确，不少于40个单词。可适当发挥。 ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________
答案My name is WangLi. I am a 12-year-old girl , I study in the Sunshine School . I like helping others very much .I live in school .My father is a teacher and my mother is a doctor .I love my parents , they love me , too. I have a happy family .How about you ?
分析：这是一篇自我介绍，主要信息和材料已经给出，只需要把句子翻译出来就行。而且句子多是简单句，比较简容易。学生只要掌握一些简单的句子就可以顺利完成。如果想让文章增色，可以适当用些复杂句，把两个句子用and相连是最直接的一个方法。
【亮点说明】本文按照题目中给出的信息，介绍了王丽的年龄，学校。在介绍年龄时用了连字符连接12-year-old相当于形容词。喜欢帮助别人，like是不及物动词，后面加动词要用不定式或者动词的-ing形式。本文中用了like
中考英语作文专题训练：命题作文30例（含答案解析）
